Critique continues

Lauren hoped they were done, but somehow there was still more of her to critique.

"And those ponytails don't work at all!" A girl said. "It's like a preppy kid's haircut, but then she's dressed like a slut and it doesn't make any sense."

Lauren had forgotten Britney had done her hair! She hadn't seen it and had no idea how silly it looked.

"Very good," Miss Goldinga said. "It certainly in confusing, and makes Lauren look more silly than anything else!"

"Yeah, and her makeup is like, pure skank!" A woman Lauren recalled insulting at a recent critique said. "Like, you can tell how **** she is by the three pounds of makeup on her face!"

Lauren had no idea how her makeup looked either! She cursed inwardly, wishing there was a mirror. She spent an hour a day perfecting subtle makeup that accented her beauty and hid her flaws. Unfortunately, right now that was not the case. Britney had coated her face with way to much makeup, giving her a caked on pale face with blaring eye shadow and dark lipstick.

"That is almost the worst part." Miss Goldigna said. "**** is right. This is a young woman begging for attention. This outfit is pathetic. Honestly Lauren, I expected much better from you."

Lauren hung her head. That was humiliating, but at least it was over. She went to go sit, but Miss Goldinga stopped her with a hand.

"Oh no. This outfit is so bad we simply must fix it as a class!"