Chapter 6 by fantaghiro
What's next?
Lindsey's mother and father enter the room.
"So this means I'm essentially going to have to live my life, wondering which moment the other part of me takes over?" Said your Mom, her new, teenage voice distraught. The doctors exchanged a concerned look. You had never heard Lindsey upset, the only side of her you had ever seen was the one that was cruel to you. Well, except for the time when she tried steeling you from Allison. During that time, Lindsey was nothing but sweet to you, laughing at your jokes, baking you cookies. She had even dared to steal a kiss from you, before you told her that you were sorry and that you were staying with Allison. You had almost thought her hurt for a moment, before she laughed in your face and told you it was all a big prank. From then on, she continued her harassment, and as you both got older it got worse. Her tactics soon changed from not just mental and physical ****, but sexual as well. You had once gotten so drunk at a house party, that Lindsey pulled you into a room and stole all your clothes, leading your intoxicated self to walk out into the party bare naked.
The idea that your sweet Mother now had to go on with a hostile personality lurking to take over horrified you. "Mom, I-"
Just then, you heard an angry male voice outside of the room. For a moment you thought it was your dad but when you saw who burst through the door your heart sank. "Sir, you can't go in there yet!" You heard a nurse say urgently.
"I demand to see what I payed for with my daughter's life, you won't keep me out!" The man growled. As he emerged into the room, you realized it was Lindsey's father, Colin Gifford. He was a large man, in his mid forties and completely bald. He had a beard that was a rusty red color, with strands of grey in it. He had small, serious eyes and a large, serious brow, with a nose that was flaring. His large gut was concealed by a red polo shirt, and he wore tan khakis. His arms were extremely hairy and he wore a gold wrist watch. You knew he was a rich man, and owned some construction company. Behind him, his wife Lucy peaked her head around. She had short black hair and wore a smart looking blue blazer and skirt. She wore too much makeup and jewelry and you could tell she was trying to make up for years lost. She had a large chest, as you guessed Lindsey had inherited, and had a skinny figure.
The pair stood in the room for several moments, Colin staring angrily, and Lucy regarding the scene with a cold, too calm manner. "Mr. Gifford..." Began Doctor Saunders.
"You were to notify me as soon as she was awake." Said the large man, turning his harsh gaze to the doctors.
"She only just woke, and her son..." Said Doctor Kerry, trying to calm the situation.
"I don't care about him, I want to know about her." He said, raising his voice.
You heard Lindsey, or your Mother's voice cut in. "Mister Gifford." She said strongly, surprising you. "I don't know how you must feel right now, and I can never repay you for what you have given me, my life, but you don't need to take it out on these brilliant men and my son." He voice began rattling at the end.
Colin's anger seems to have subsided, the big mans face had turned into a mask of sadness. Meanwhile, Lucy stepped around her husband. "You're right." Said the woman coldly. "You'll never be able to repay us."
You looked at your Mother. For a moment, there was a look of defiance, and then she broke out into tears. "Mom!" She wailed. "What have they done to me!" Oh god. You realized that Lindsey was back.
Lindsey's parents looked at you, demanding looks on their faces. "What the hell is going on?!" Shouted Colin, stomping towards the doctors. Lucy went to Lindsey's bedside.
"Lindsay, is that you?" You heard her say as the doctors began trying to explain what was apparently happening to your Mother.
"Mom, they put his Mother inside me, I had to sit and watch as she spoke using my body!" She said, tears streaming down her face as she pointed at you.
"We didn't mean for this to happen!" Said Kerry. "We had no way of knowing!"
"The portion of brain that we grafted on to Lindsey's must have reactivated a latent part of her own personality, in short, it seems they are sharing the same body!" He tried explaining. This only makes Colin angrier. Just then-
What's next?
The Ultimate Transplant
Someone you know is given a new body & life
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! A close friend or family member is horribly injured in an accident. As they lay dying in the emergency room, another patient dies of a brain aneurysm. Both of them are organ donors, so a surgeon decides it's the perfect opportunity for him to try an experimental surgery. He transplants the victim's higher brain (the cerebellum) to the donor's body in an attempt to 'save' a life. Amazingly it works. But the surgery was not approved so the hospital convinces the families to keep quiet, arguing that revealing this operation to the public would bring never-ending media attention to all involved. That means that the patient will have to publicly assume the identity of the donor. What will this mean to your friends and family? Who else will you tell? Although you will spend a lot of time and effort giving support, how will all this alter your relationship to the patient? And how will he or she adapt to a complete change of body and identity? Many transformation stories focus on the change or victim, so I thought it would be interesting to instead have the POV be someone who sees the change from the outside. Writers feel free to explore a change in age, gender, class or ethnicity - and the repercussions that change would have on the main character (and others). This is from my writing.com story with thanks and credit to other contributors, especially Wassel, Wordsmitty, and Enigma. Please see the original at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1886863-The-Ultimate-Transplant for the original authors' posts. Also you should check out Wassel's version at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant ).
Updated on Jun 24, 2026
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Created on Jan 19, 2021
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