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A Club of Losers(1st TF Chapter)
“Welcome, my dearest audience, to Harem Hotel: Loser’s Club!” Paisley boomed across the beach.
Max, and everyone he hadn't been able to save, were on the beach. They were unable to move, paralyzed in a sitting position. He was on throne of polished stone, and covered in engravings depicting various acts of debauchery. It was ostentatious, and wildly inappropriate for the situation at hand. Almost everyone else was sitting on normal beach chairs, straining against them. There was, however, an exception. The zombie from earlier stood apart, with an unblinking stare, waiting with utmost patience for whatever ceremony they were in to commence. Despite how new he was, it was clear as day to Max that she had been given privileges no one else had from her unique status.
“Before we begin, we have some rules to introduce beyond the introductory packet to Harem Hotel,” Paisley announced. “Not just to the contestants, but also to you, my dear audience. When it comes to eliminations, and transformations, there are unique rules to introduce."
“To start with, given all the bad girls we have here,” Paisley paused to grin at the contestants, “lets go over the rules for elimination. For instance, lets see an elimination that happened earlier today so you are familiar with the concept.”
The group teleported to a home theater system. On the screen in front of them, Patricia's fate of being taken to another room in a casket, of being de-aged, of having her free will removed, and her body modified by the demon, played out. Then the video fast-forwarded, speeding through a ritual they only caught glimpses of, and the few glimpses they did see were ones Max wish he hadn't. But when the video slowed down, and they saw Patricia again, they saw a very different woman. Patricia was wearing a toga with nothing underneath, her hair was a beautiful strawberry blonde, her breasts and ass were massive, she had the kind of hourglass shape that completed the look of a live action hentai character, and most of all, any hint of the bitter, angry old woman was completely gone from her face. She looked high off of life, the way so many zealots often did. Max wanted to look away, as he was reminded of every failure he every committed, but could not.
"Her new faith celebrates fertility, nature, and most of all, libido," Paisley said. "Patricia now sees Max as a prophet, or even a messiah, to be worshiped and closely listened to like any other. Of course, there's still a piece of the old her inside there, being punished as she experiences everything this new version of her does."
The implications settled on the group. Max shut his eyes, not wanting to know how others would see him. Paisley must have seen that, because of what she said next.
"Don't blame Max for this," Paisley said. "After all, you can hear what he said while part of it happened in front of him."
The recording of everything Max screamed, in futility, did little to make him feel better. It only reinforced the judgement Paisley had provided of his failure to control himself around Patricia. Of his failure to hold back his rage at the kind of person she was. And ultimately how petty everything Max cared about was in light of where they were. These thoughts plagued his mind, and eventually, he opened his eyes rather than just hearing what happened around him.
"Now that you've rejoined us Max," Paisley winked at him before returning to the rest of the group. "Let me emphasize something. Elimination happens not just from you trying to hurt the master. It also happens if you drop below below 0 VP, if you refuse to do something like a challenge, or most of all..."
Paisley trailed off to build tension, not that she needed to. "...if you try to escape. Not that there's much chance of that, given that you are an island. Harem Hotel has you in its grasp until our season concludes."
Once again, Paisley paused, but this time not for tension. Instead she went from contestant to contestant, perhaps trying to intimidate them into understanding. Max kept his eyes on her, and in the process, looked at the rest of the field. Hanna's breaths had become quick and shallow, despite her constant visible attempts to collect herself. Shui was sweating and shaking, trying to get out of her chair but being unable to do so. Magnolia looked resigned, but the way she clutched the chair suggested the stress was getting to her as well. Melissa was trying to scream, and was crying, but there was no noise emanating from her, as whatever magic kept them seated also kept them silent. Kimberly was looking down like a child, and judging by her scrunched up face, was also crying. And the zombie continued to stand, unbothered by the situation at hand, awaiting what was happening next. Perhaps she had learned it all from volunteering? All the while, Max clutched at his throne, focusing on the pain in his hand over whatever was coming next.
"Speaking of, your stay at Harem Hotel is determined in part by your behavior," Paisley continued, adopting the tone of a teacher. "Every time someone is eliminated, the season is extended by another round. For now, think of the length of a round as a day per contestant, plus one. Further details on that will be explained later, but in the moment, it matters because Patricia's decision to attack Max gave everyone an additional round. It was one round, now it will be two."
This time, the pause was to be expected. The silence was enforced, but Max suspected that was less necessary from how much everyone had to process. They were going to be stuck here for two weeks, and that assumed nobody else got eliminated. Looking at the group he had come with, and the many problems they had as a group, Max wasn't filled with confidence they were going to somehow avoid another elimination.
"Now, for transformations," Paisley returned to her explanations. "Transformations can cover anything. Physical, mental, your behavior, your very reality, and beyond. The only real limitation is whether the transformation prevents you from competing in a challenge. Transformations are voted on once per round, by the audience usually after a challenge. Not this time but well, everyone just got here."
The pause for humor was silent, but for all Max and the contestants knew, there was an invisible audience laughing it up where they couldn't see. Paisley then continued, "Do note transformations, for the most part, do not leave. You're stuck with these for the rest of your life so... I hope you don't anger the audience too much. The master also receives transformations."
Max, already paying attention, lit up hearing that last sentence. Paisley gave him a grin seeing that reaction. "Indeed, his first one will be right... now!"
Harem Hotel Preparatory Treatment: Paisley has identified significant issues that Max needs treated if he is to be ready to be a Harem Hotel master. They are a lack of confidence in the art of seduction, and a tendency to treat his hypersexuality with masturbation. The lack of confidence will be treated by giving Max an attractive athletic build, turning his natural brown hair into natural red hair to make it more interesting, increasing his height to an even six feet, giving him a general increase in attractive muscle mass, and most of all, a porno sized dick to deal with confidence issues. By contrast, the constant masturbation will be fixed by making Max incapable of masturbating to orgasm unless he does so for the pleasure of someone else.
The first sign that the transformation had happened was how tight Max's pants felt in the crotch. He had never really thought much about his size either way, as he had the vague understanding that the sizes he saw in porn were painful for most women, but that was a thing of the past. The rest of his transformation passed without him noticing much, but then Paisley rolled out a mirror so he could see the results of her handiwork. Sure enough, Max was fit, from what he saw of his arms, and... he had red hair. The kind of red that had no hint of brown, and was darker than ginger.
"These treatments happen Max when I don't think you're engaging well with the program," Paisley said. "Think of it like a surgical or drug based intervention when talk therapy isn't having results."
Before Max could respond to that, Paisley moved on. She moved to the center, where everyone had been looking, and went back to announcing for the audience. "Now, dearest audience, lets get into what you came for!"
Hanna's life had becoming a living nightmare. The idea of becoming Max's sex slave, of being at the mercy of an audience she didn't know, and most of all, having to compete with all of these other women to avoid elimination... it was too much. Far too much. All she could do was sit, paralyzed, feeling the stress consume her body. And then to make it all worse, Paisley came over to announce her options.
"This young lady ruined the master's life," Paisley announced. "And to think it wasn't because she got cheated on, or because he was too pushy about sex, oh no. It was all because she caught him with porn!”
- Empathetic Masturbation: Hanna must, whenever the master wants to cum but cannot, masturbate until she orgasms. Anything she is doing must be stopped until this masturbation has been completed successfully, with the exception of having sex with the master or another contestant in the harem. Resisting this impulse causes her to masturbate wherever she is when the impulse occurred, regardless of who is watching, who is around, etc., (Frigid)
- Suspicious Hangup: Hanna is obsessed with porn, constantly ranting about it on podcasts, her college campus, and anywhere else she can get away with it. Harem Hotel finds this obsession suspicious, and through this transformation, makes Hanna a total porn addict. This applies to watching porn, as she must watch at least two hours worth per day, fetishizing porn, as pornography always makes her horny, and even looking like porn, as her body will now become like that of a porn star's. For the last, her body will change from day to day to resemble women in the porn she has watched the most recently. All pornography will be supplied by Harem Hotel and will come through in ultra sharp 8K, so that no details will be missed by our aspiring porn addict. (Prude)
- You Don't Like Him Anyway: If Hanna is just so angry at Max and his issues, why not help other women so she doesn't have to deal with it? The angrier Hanna gets at Max, the more she will help other women try to fuck him, to the point where if she starts ranting about him, she will switch from insults to talking how hot he is, or other reasons he'd be fun to have sex with. (Bitter-Ex)
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“Can you believe she actually loved him once?" Paisley asked to the crowd while circling Hanna. "That she liked him enough to want to continue dating him after high school! She even sometimes fantasized about marrying him! What kind of person throws all that away over some porn?"
It had gotten worse. Not only was this audience going to find out, but Max was going to know something Hanna never wanted him to find out. He had blown his chance, she wasn't going to give him another, no matter how much the Hotel tried to force her to...
Shui was a sick mess. She may have looked like she was trying to escape, but it was more just feeling nauseous, among other things, causing the rest of her body to try to move somewhere to throw up. The approach of Paisley did nothing to make her feel better about the situation at hand.
“Look at this girl, she can’t even be a rebel correctly,” Paisley announced with excitement. “She pretends to be a good fuck, but it’s all just a trick to con guys like Max into situations where she can offer them drugs. She’s a drug-using, drug-dealing bitch that hides it all from her parents, who never wonder how their wayward daughter pays for college. Or maybe they do know, and just don’t want to admit was a horrible daughter they’ve raised!”
- A Different Craving: Shui has abused her poor body with drugs and alcohol to the point one might think she doesn't care about it. To replace those unhealthy cravings, her sexual sensitivity is increased until an orgasm is as potent as her highest high. Her withdraw symptoms aren't eliminated entirely, however, and she will become increasingly demanding and pushy until her needs are met. (Good Girl Gone Bad)
- In the Way: In order to ensure Shui brings as much fun to this harem as she sometimes did in her real life, some restrictions were put in place. She cannot wear any clothes that could interfere with sex, such as panties, pants, or skirts that aren't easy to lift up. This transformation also comes with a butt size increase so that her ass is more easily accessible, and is more noticeable. (Rebellious Daughter)
- Slutty Alone: Shui sure has a thing for parties, family events, and other kinds of large gatherings of people. Harem Hotel more than supports this attitude, and wants to ensure the new environment this contestant finds herself in doesn't change that. When around less than four other people, Shui will become steadily hornier and hornier. She will also be unable to cum without finding the master or a group of people to be in the presence of when orgasming. (Party Queen)
"Before I move on, dear audience, you need to know something important,” Paisley said. “Regardless of what you pick for this dear girl, she will get all of her drug based issues dealt with. Any physical dependency and damage from her years of abusing her body, will get fixed. The only real question is where she goes from here, not whether she gets better."
The kindness in Paisley's voice was strange. But before Shui could contemplate it, Paisley was already moving on to the next guest.
Magnolia was having a nightmare, that was the only way to explain it. She was going to wake up in her house, alone once again, and grab a nice drink from the bar nearby so she stopped feeling like crap. Nothing else about this made any sense. Why the pervert had entered her dreams she didn't know, and for once her ex-husband was nowhere to be seen, but the humiliation was fit her nightmares just fine.
“Magnolia presents a rare opportunity for Harem Hotel,” Paisley said with a strange kindness in her voice. “You, dear audience, will get to save a woman from herself. Someone who treats themselves as badly as they treat others is a rare treat for a show like this."
- Divorcee Bounce Back: Poor Magnolia sure is lonely after her long, bitter divorce, but said bitter divorce also made her incapable of looking for other guys. This transformation fixes that by making her attracted to much younger men, like our dear master, and causing all of resentment towards men to become sexual frustration instead. With this will be a transformation into a banging MILF, with refreshed skin, breasts enlargened, and a bigger ass. (Bitter Divorcee)
- Wild Youth Returns: Before her staid, overbearing marriage, Magnolia was a wild child. While her booze and drugs may not have been good for her, the wild sex and skimpy clothing are excellent in the eyes of Harem Hotel. With each passing day, Magnolia will get one year younger until she's college aged again, her libido will increase with each day, and she will only be comfortable with ever skimpier clothing with each day. (Lost Youth)
- Harem Hotel Appropriate: Harem Hotel fully supports Magnolia being a guidance counselor, but she needs to help guide other contestants to what works best in Harem Hotel, as that's now rather more important than their future job prospects. The three contestants with the lowest VP will be required to join Magnolia for some one on one guidance that has a special focus on making their language dirtier and hornier, as befits a contestant. In order to be an appropriate advisor, Magnolia will be transformed to fit Harem Hotel guidelines with a proper MILF body, and her language will be adapted to Harem Hotel standards so as to be very perverted. (Guidance Counselor)
Magnolia First Transformation Poll
“Just like with Shui, I want to assure you that whatever you choose, Magnolia’s issues with alcohol will be dealt with,” Paisley continued. “We won’t have such a downer issue present for the first round, or force other contestants to pay for treatment with BP.”
The kindness in Paisley's voice was bullshit. Not that it mattered, given what her role seemed to be in the dream. Magnolia continued thinking of it that way as Paisley went to announce for another contestant...
Melissa was furious. Somehow, she was going to get this damn woman arrested, or fucking kill her. While that may have been impossible for the moment, she was not going to tolerate endlessly being harassed, molested, and at some point raped for the amusement of an audience she couldn't see. Max may have pretended to be innocent, but the idea that it was going to continue reeked of horseshit.
“Ah Melissa,” Paisley’s voice became patronizing in tone. “How you can be so proud of being the boss of a chainstore? Also, why are you spying on people in the restroom?”
- Small Woman, Small Kingdom: Whenever Melissa attempts to lord power over another she'll lose several inches of height. Her height will reset to normal at the beginning of each round. Breasts do not shrink when she does, ensuring she becomes very busty. (Petty Tyrant)
- Milk Cooler Gossip: If Melissa is just so obsessed with sticking her nose where it doesn’t belong, let her get all the gossip she needs from others. The contestant's breasts will start producing milk that others want. Other contestants will see nothing abnormal about stopping for a drink and having a chat, and they'll be more likely to share details they normally wouldn't. Comes with breast expansion so as to provide more milk for everyone involved. (Busybody)
- Bestseller: Each round, Melissa will receive a weakened copy of whichever other contestant's TF received the greatest percentage of the vote. (Bookstore Boss)
Melissa's First Transformation
“I think all of these will be an excellent change for this contestant,” Paisley said. “But thankfully, I don’t have to pick between these options.”
All of the options were garbage. Not that Melissa's opinion seemed to matter here, which was unsurprising. This seemed like a show devoted to her humiliation. While she continued to stew, Paisley walked off to meet another contestant...
Kimberly had died and gone to hell. That was the only way to explain the day she had been having so far. This was a divine punishment for everything she had done to make a living. Why else had she been taken by a demon, or have been put at the mercy of a man with such a monstrous libido?
“Ah Kimberly,” Paisley said while walking around her. “You shouldn’t drag through the mud based on one person’s version of events. But then Max isn’t the one you’ve been the worst to, is he?”
- Another Use for That Mouth: For someone who loves to talk, most of what Kimberly talks about is drivel, or worse, ruins people's lives for profit by exposing things about them to the public. Now whenever this contestant insults someone, especially if it is based on a stereotype, or otherwise irritates those around her through constant inanities about things like celebrity culture, she'll face a growing desire, if not outright need, to give whoever they have irritated oral sex until they cum on her face. This desire is impossible to resist in the case of insults that involved slurs, such as those of a transphobic nature.(Hatemonger)
- Stripping Sunlight: Kimberly sure claims to love transparency, and can be very fond of the saying that sunlight is the best disinfectant. Harem Hotel has decided to give a fun twist on this saying because whenever this contestant is exposed to sunlight, her clothing simply fades away. The clothes in question are given to those deserving of the fabric than someone who humiliates the innocent for a living. In addition, exposure to sunlight will make it impossible for her to lie, or even be evasive about questions asked of her if they are of a sexual nature. (Paparazzi)
- Braver, Better Twin: A lot of Kimberly’s problems came from learning the wrong lesson from her big break. She made the wrong choice, out of a mixture of fear and hang ups about sex. So Kimberly will receive a twin. This twin made a different decision, and become a muckraker that was the scourge of the powerful, while comforting the afflicted. She's also far more sex positive, and in general, would never have done anything to warrant becoming Max's sex slave. Hence, she will be in the position of advising Kimberly, and reporting on the season. To ensure her advice is followed, every word the twin says is unforgettable, and will drill into Kimberly’s mind like subliminal messaging is said to. Do note however that the twin cannot play with the master, and is off limits to various Harem Hotel shenanigans given her special status. (Coward)
Kimberly's 1st Transformation Poll
“This twin has done it in return for the scoop of a lifetime, a bundle of legal bills paid, and the knowledge that she is protecting people from her cowardly, evil twin,” Paisley announced. “Also, don’t worry, if she doesn’t get selected, the Hotel will still compensate this alternate version of Kimberly for her valuable time.”
Another version of her? They were going to create a twin of her just to mock her? Why did Kimberly, of all the bad people on Earth, have to be the one to receive this treatment? Shouldn't even hell have bigger fish to fry? These questions consumed her as she silently sobbed, and Paisley moved onto another contestant...
The zombie waited patiently. She could wait a little longer after having spent so long in purgatory to begin the process of undoing the downsides. It was fortunate Max hadn't tried to free her, as there were fates much worse than Harem Hotel, and she suspected one of them had been waiting for her back in purgatory. Even if she was stuck with this boy for a lifetime, that was a small price to pay compared to the messy one she had been stuck with. So when Paisley finally approached her, she did her best to posture herself in a way that'd help her host.
“I’m afraid I can’t reveal who this contestant is yet,” Paisley said. “However, what I can tell you is that unlike everyone else here, she not only wants to be here, but wants to get quite a few transformations. Ties will be very appreciated by this contestant, given her goals for the season.”
- Just Semen Her Up: This contestant has been dead awhile, and their body is a bit stiff. But that's okay, we have something that will now make it all young and fresh again: Cum. Specifically ingested cum, whether it be by her mouth, pussy, or ass, all will revitalize her body. The way semen is absorbed however will have different effects. Semen on her skin will bring her skin's health back, semen ingested through her mouth will restore her voice, and finally, semen absorbed in her pussy or ass will restore her flexibility. (Lust for Life)
- My Name Is Secret: Our poor zombie here was once a very successful young woman, but now she can't even remember her own name. This TF will give her access to her true name, and a significant memory where that name was spoken by a friend of hers, however, she will also gain an exhibitionism fetish. This kink isn't just merely sexual excitement, but also, whenever she wears skimpy clothing, or no clothing at all, she will be able to better remember her former friend, and gain warm, fuzzy feelings from them. (Wasted Potential)
- Undead Amazon: Being undead really sucks, especially when you're piloting an animated corpse. This TF reduces the downsides by increasing the height of our contestant to 6'9", gives her enough strength to lift a car, a firmed up body, forever perky breasts, quadruples her breast size, and gives her a massive increase to butt size to round things off. (Undead)
"Have I mentioned that this contestant gets two transformations?" Paisley's question was delivered with a grin. "Again, she wants the extra TF, and if she ends up with a triple tie... lets just say she wouldn't mind getting all three."
Indeed, she didn't mind getting all three. Undead Amazon would help her crush the competition, and the other two... she needed. Sure, she would have to let her body get fucked, and used, over and over. That didn't matter, as this body was one she didn't really inhabit as it was. It was more like driving a moving van than an extension of her will. It was why all her movements were jerky, and why she struggled to remember to do things like blink. At this point her real obstacle was that the audience didn't know her well, but perhaps their negative reaction to her form would encourage them to improve it. As the zombie thought of these things, Paisley went back to the master...
Wait, why was Paisley coming back? The question entered Max's mind as he saw her approach him once again. The announcement that followed was crushing.
"Last, but certainly not least, we have the second transformation for the Master," Paisley said. "After all, you, my dear audience, also get to vote on how to change the master."
- Aura of Lust: As someone with genuine hyper sexuality, Max is in the position of always being excessively horny relative to his partners. This transformation changes that, as it makes Max's arousal contagious, thus ensuring his partners can keep up with him. It is the kind of effect that increases with time in intensity. (Hypersexual)
- Well Studied: Often the key to winning a debate is research, and through said research, knowing exactly where the weak points are in an opponent's argument. This transformation gives Max knowledge of something from a contestant's past that either humiliates them, if he is in an argument with them, or if they have an audience, something that makes the contestant look like an untrustworthy hypocrite to whoever is listening to the debate.(Master Debater)
- What She Wants: Max wants to be a modern, progressive guy who respects women and their autonomy. To aid in such a desire, he should know exactly what the ladies in his harem want from him, so he can give it to them. When alone with a contestant in his harem, Max will know one significant sexual or romantic desire she has, and know exactly how to fulfill it. (Modern Guy)
Max's 1st Audience Transformation
"Many of you may be wondering why Max lacks a direct way to command his harem among his presented options," Paisley said. "Simply put, as his therapist, I don't think he is ready for such an option. He is too emotionally fragile right now, and too likely to use such an ability to avoid his harem. Besides, I think you'll find he's the type who wouldn't want to use that kind of thing anyway."
Paisley then bowed dramatically, pulled out her own chair, and waited for the results to come in. Max himself was still trapped and his mind continued to be clouded with questions. Like, what was this about commands? But all he could, like everyone else, was wait for the results...
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