The Dark Presence: A Ninja No More

The ninja had no energy left as she walked down the narrow path, surrounded by trees. The Hidden Leaf was still so far away, and every step she took further drained her energy and will to live. Her body had changed. She was broken. Her ninjutsu and ability to use chakra was gone. Finally, a figure appeared off in the distance.

"Help..." She tried to call out, but the word left her in a dehydrated, quiet gasp. Then, she fell to her knees, teetered for a moment, then collapsed face first into the dirt. Her surgically enlarged breasts cushioned her fall.

Brook had been looking over the last of her trade goods when she heard a soft voice and someone following into the dirt very close behind her. Turning around, she happened to see an incredibly curvy female moved to lift her form up so she was at least in an upright position. "My, where did a sexy lady like you come from?" she asked as one of her hands began to shamelessly grab one of the woman's fat tits and rub them. "And how did you find yourself this far from any town or village?"

Hinata flinched from the groping, her large breasts still sensitive from the special work done to them. "N-nnunnn... P-please, help..." She whined, fading in and out of consciousness. Her cheeks reddened in her semi-aware state as the stranger groped her tits. Why wasn't this person helping her?

"I don't remember... what... happened..." She managed to whisper before she finally properly lost consciousness and passed out in the stranger's arms.

The girl felt that the woman could at least fetch a good price if she was nursed back to health and lifted her up before carrying her into the wagon she owned. While the wagon was somewhat cramped, even for one person, it still had everything one would find in a proper home. Walking over to her bed, she let the woman lay down in her bed, those massive breasts spilling off to the side and smiled at the sight of it. "Hmm, if I can't find any use for you, perhaps you'll at least be worth quite a hefty sum" she idly commented as she moved to fill up a bucket of water and grabbed a ladle to give the woman water.

After some time, Hinata began to stir. The wagon was on its way to wherever the merchant intended to go, driven by chakra-powered Golems likely bought from the Hidden Earth Village. It was a bumpy road, and perhaps that's what brought the girl out of unconsciousness. Her eyes opened to see a woman with golden-blonde hair watching her.

"Where am I?" Hinata asked - and then noticed the ladle filled with water, and realised how thirsty she was. She hurriedly sat up and moved her head close enough to be able to sip from the offered, life-saving tool.

She calmly smiled at the woman waking up as the wagon moved to its next town and moved the ladle filled with cool water to her lips. With care, she began to start pouring the refreshing liquid into her mouth until it was empty. "You're certainly an oddity, I've never come across a young lady like you…" she commented as she refilled the ladle and returned it to the woman's lips. "What are you doing so far away from town with that skimpy piece of fabric on you?"

Hinata kept sipping the cool, refreshing water. She felt it revitalise her severely dehydrated body and felt her gratitude towards the stranger grow. "I... I was on a mission," she said, a hand coming up to hold her head as if it hurt all of a sudden. She groaned. "I got separated from my squad... and now," she looked down at her body, as if only now noticing the lack of clothing she wore. She covered her chest in embarrassment, frowning. "I don't remember how I got this way..."

Brook nodded a couple of times and lifted up the ladle to deliver another serving of water before letting it splash down into the bucket. "A ninja, eh?" she asked as she looked the woman's body up and down. While she had planned on selling this woman just for the money she'd make, if she really was a ninja, even a former one, her blood line would be a valuable commodity. One the trader was intent on monopolising. "Well, regardless of how you got this way, I need to find some way to make use of you. Be it through free labour, or in the worst case, selling you off to the highest bidder. What are you willing to do for me?"

Those cruel, cold words came out so casually that Hinata didn't register them at first. When they sunk in, she furrowed her brow in anger. "W-what? Aren't you taking me to get some help? Why would you say that?" She asked, becoming weary as her fight or flight response began to heighten. "I-if you just take me back to my village, the Hokage would surely give you a massive reward for helping me. I'm sure everyone is worried sick about me."

Brook chuckled softly and shook her head a few times. "You really don't understand the situation, do you? I may be a trader, but I don't know where the main villages that the ninjas raise and train the next generation are at. Any time they want to trade, they send someone to me and request I wait at a specific point. To say nothing of my own personal supply. I may have water in abundance, but food I have to trade and barter with from other villages. And you may not have noticed, but this is a rather small wagon. I carry most of my stock on the outside of my wagon, so I can carry the most food and the most valuable goods inside."

Frustration with the woman grew in the ninja, and Hinata decided it was time to take action. She planned on activating her Byakugan to see if the trader had any allies nearby, but her head throbbed in pain that caused her to whimper and reflexively cower away, shivering in the corner on the bed. The moment passed shortly after, and she was just left confused. Then, she tried to activate her doujutsu one more time - and the same throbbing, tear-inducing pain bounced around in her skull.

"I- I can't activate my Byakugan?!" She exclaimed, her eyes staring daggers at the trader as if she was the cause. Although Hinata had no reason to suspect that was the case.

Brook shrugged at the woman when she turned to glare at her, wearing a grin before reaching out to grab a handful of one of the woman's massive breasts. "Don't ask me why you can't use any of your chakra skills. I found you passed out. If you hadn't had the weak gasp for help, I'd probably have left you behind to die, not knowing you were there. So I suggest you count your blessings that you still have your life."

Hinata went to slap the woman's hand away from her tit, her face twisting into an angry scowl. But before her hand came into contact with the trader's wrist, another sharp, red blearing pain throbbed in her skull. Tears began to stream down her cheeks as she sobbed from the pain and lack of understanding of why things were the way they were. And that invasive, disrespectful hand only continued to grope her massive breast.

Hinata grabbed the woman's wrist and tried to pry the hand away, but that terrifying pain shocked her again.

Then, she began to understand. Whenever she tried to use her chakra, that pain would **** her. But it didn't end there. The way she saw it, if she tried to prevent someone from doing what they wanted with her, it would happen as well.

Sobbing with her powerlessness, Hinata lowered her hands and allowed the trader to grope her freely. "T-thank you for saving my life," she whimpered.

Brook saw the woman realise something that she hadn't become aware of while she continued to **** her breast. "You're welcome babe. Now, either I find any use for you. Or I sell you to the highest bidder. Why don't you make your choice?" She said before she began to start using her hands to lift up and remove the thin fabric covering the woman's body so she could see her naked body. "And to be honest, I can't guarantee whoever buys you will be as pleasant as I am." With that comment, she began to start rubbing the woman's bare breasts.

In her mind, she imagined returning to the village to be greeted by her friends and family. To see Naruto again and his cheery, welcoming smile. And then she saw herself in third person - a massive pair of tits, wide hips and unable to use chakra. She saw everyone treat her differently - she imagined Naruto wanting nothing to do with her and even treating her like a common whore.

While she struggled with this turmoil, the trader continued fondling her tits. It was the worst moment in her life, and when she depended on the kindness of a stranger, she received nothing but indifference and selfishness.

"What can I do to be useful?" She finally asked.

Brook looked up into the woman's pale eyes and playfully cupped her chin as she smiled at her. "Well, if you're willing to let me use your body as I please, and do housework for me while I do my trading, I'll be sure to provide food, water and shelter for you in exchange. I'm sure you'll at least find that agreeable. Besides, with a body like this" she stated, giving the woman's breast she had been molesting a rough squeeze. As if to emphasise her point before continuing.

"It'd be a shame to use you for anything but sexual pleasure."

That last sentence sounded so cruel, as if it didn't need to be there and Hinata wondered if the trader intended to hurt her feelings with it. But everything she said sounded like it came from a place of business and nothing more. And when they got down to it, she was right. What could Hinata do with a body like this? Her tits were huge and of course anyone would want to use them.

Hinata grimaced at the painful, rough squeeze. She was about to protest, but before she could get the words out, she felt that familiar sensation in her skull. The feeling that came before that throbbing pain - as if her body was warning her that there was only one right answer.

"Yes, please. Thank you for taking me in... What should I call you?" Hinata asked, trying to keep a straight face while the woman shamelessly fondled her tits.

Brook hummed softly and leaned in to teasingly kiss her on the lips while her other hand continued to idly rub and tease that hefty breast. "That IS a good question. Since you're effectively giving yourself up as a **** to ensure your own future. Why don't you go ahead and call me your Mistress? And before you ask there is more to me than just what you can see." She cryptically stated before pulling both of her hands away from the woman to start pulling her own long, flowing skirt down her slender, tan legs. The moment she did so though, a thick, hard cock that easily surpassed what the average man had sprung forth. And an equally large pair of testicles hung underneath that dick. "And before you ask. Yes, it is fully functional. And yes, I do intend to get you pregnant."

"Huh, you have a ... A penis," Hinata observed, sounding as if she was stuck in a dream. Not because Brook had a dick - it was just the whole situation. It was like her life was stolen from her and she was **** into someone else's. Maybe if she pretended the trader's cock was Naruto's, it wouldn't be so bad. She was trying so hard to accept that this was going to be her new life, but it was so surreal. So unfair, so unreal.

And that cock was already rock hard, like from groping her breasts, Hinata thought. "I've never done anything like this before, Uh... M-Mistress," She said, blushing from how weird it felt to call someone such a word. "What should I do?"

The trader climbed back onto this bed and smiled as she playfully cupped one of the woman's cheeks. "Well, if you're going to live for my pleasure, why don't we start with the basics? Why don't you try getting me off with nothing by your mouth?" She said as she brought her cock up towards the woman's mouth, her hands using those hefty udders she had to balance herself as she waited. "I did want to start breeding you as quickly as possible, but if you don't know how to please someone with a cock, then I may as well start letting you learn how to."

Hinata became curious about something as Brook fondled her tits. She stared down at that throbbing cock, then decided to experiment. "O-okay. I'll do what you want, but... I want to test something, is that okay? Please give me an order - anything, even if it's silly. Or - or even if it's very lewd," she said, then lowered her head down to give the woman's cock a kiss. It smelled of arousal and musk. It twitched at the touch of her lips, then Hinata gave it a quick lick before straightening her back and waiting for the woman to do as she asked.

Brook looked down at the woman and nodded as she began to start thinking of a simple order she could give the woman. Even as she felt the warm lips and wet tongue brushing up against her cock, she quickly came up with a simple one. "Alright babe. I order you to swallow every drop of my cum whenever you get me off with your mouth. That should be rather simple to do. Want me to keep giving you orders? Or just experiment with just one for now?" She asked as she waited for a response.

That order sent a feeling of dread through Hinata. It was an order that had no expiration date. Hinata's experiment was to see what would happen if she ever did the opposite of what Brook asked her. "I... I think I have to do what you tell me, no matter what it is. Well... Uh... More like, I'm not allowed to refuse what anyone tells me.

The order to suck her cock was still there, and Hinata's lack of using her mouth caused that dark cloud to swim in her mind again - a warning she was about to be punished for not following orders. So, she lowered her head again and gave Brook another suckle. Her tongue moved up and down over the cock head this time and saliva drooled down the length. A trickle of precum filled Hinata's mouth, and she swallowed it. Then, wanting to continue her experiment, she broke the kiss again.

"Unmm... Something like... Uh... Maybe just a simple order, which I'll say no to.'

She listened to the request and began to think harder about what could be simple for the woman to do, but would still possibly allow her to say no to. "That's a rather interesting chakra to have been put under. A shame I can't use any myself. Otherwise I'd change it so you'd obey only me" she idly commented out loud. Even as the wagon continued along its journey, she happened to glance down at the bucket still half filled with water and had an idea. "Alright, I want you to drink all of the water within this bucket as quickly as you can." She stated as she lifted the bucket up and set it in the woman's lap. She herself was curious about the limitations of this chakra the woman was under, and since she couldn't manipulate it directly, this would be the next best option.

The moment Hinata even thought the word 'no' that dark, fearsome cloud filled her mind. But she had to know. "No," she said, and the pain struck her so fiercely that she almost dropped the bucket of water. She managed to right herself, though. After a few seconds, the pain stopped. However, the dark cloud remained. It grew denser and denser, and she imagined it like the throbbing pain was recharging itself, preparing to **** her again. And unless she followed the order, it would keep repeating itself until she did what she was told.

The former ninja began to drink. It was a lot of water. By the time she took four full mouthfuls, she already began to feel full. Then she stopped, wondering if her hunch was right. She guessed that, since the order was to drink all of the water in the bucket, the pain wouldn't completely disappear until she did exactly that. And then after several seconds, that cloud returned. She kept drinking.

Brook smiled and sat at the foot of the bed, still well within arms reach to the woman should she somehow pass out for one reason or another. Seeing the reaction that struck her when she uttered the word no, almost made her want to catch the woman before she fell off the bed. Though it seemed as if she needn't worry about her, even as she continued to drink all of the water as she had been ordered to do so.

There was so much water that Hinata's belly began to expand as she felt bloated. It got painful. She had to take another break. She had never drank so much water in her life and it was a miserable experience. By the time she finally finished, she felt sick and uncomfortable. But with one order complete, it wasn't enough to satisfy whatever dark presence ruled her mind. That cloud began to swim in her mind again as she put the bucket down.

She still had to suck the woman's cock. "The pain wouldn't go away until I fully obeyed what you ordered..." Hinata said, looking at the trader. She lowered her form and took the cock in her mouth again. She massaged it with wet, overly hydrated strokes of her tongue. This time she moved her head back and forth, allowing the cock to fill her mouth before taking it back just enough so only the head remained in her mouth.

The dark cloud was gone for now because she was following Brook's orders. 'Suck her cock' kept playing in her mind.

Brook seemed content with allowing Hinata to suck her cock, just relaxing while the downtrodden ninja did all the work.

Hinata's tongue massaged the underside of Brook's fat length, slurping and suckling up and down on the cock. "Ssshhhrrrpft, ssshhrrkkt,". She moved deeper, feeling the head of Brook's dick teeter on the entrance of her throat, tickling her uvula. "Gggghhrrk, ggghhhk," she gagged quietly, then retreated a little - not enjoying the sensation of gagging. Sucking dick was all new to her.

Brook sighed softly and let one of her hands rest upon the woman's head as she began to explore oral sex to her heart's content. "You know, I could easily think of a few other orders to give you, but at the same time. I don't want to overwhelm you with them. At least until you've become more comfortable with sexual acts in general." She said calmly as the hand that was on top of the woman's head began to start rubbing it. "It's been quite some time since I've had a chance to get off, so I'm looking forward to when I can use the rest of your body for my personal pleasure as well."

Hinata stopped sucking for a moment, allowing herself to regain her composure and take a breath. "Thank you for being gentle with me..." She said, then gave the tip of Brook's cock a kiss. "I understand my position and how much power you have over me. Thank you for not abusing it." Then, Hinata took the cock back in her mouth and resumed sucking. Brook really could order Hinata to do anything she wanted - even if she didn't like it.

Brook playfully patted the woman's head in response to what the woman had said and sighed once more. "You're welcome. I figured a willing toy would be more likely and eager to please than a broken one. I am curious about something though. If I gave you an order that was directed at your body rather than you, would you still feel the pain you felt earlier?" She asked as she felt her orgasm beginning to grow closer.

Hinata wasn't sure what the woman meant, so she brought her mouth back up - but swallowed as hot precum sprayed her tongue just before she took her mouth off it. Leaving the cock twitching for a moment, Hinata licked her lips. "Um, what do you mean? Do you have an example?" She asked, feeling that black cloud already begin to swirl in her mind after only taking a few-second break from sucking Brook's cock. She lowered her head and took it in her mouth again.

The trader nodded and smiled as already had an example in mind. "I do have something in mind actually. Whether it works or not is something I want to know." With that she reached down underneath the woman's body and began to start using her hands to rub and squeeze her massive breasts, almost as if she was milking a cow's udder. "I want your breasts to provide you with incredible pleasure whenever and wherever I rub them."

Hinata had grown aroused from sucking Brook's cock, but that was entirely different. She waited, keeping still while the cock just twitched in her mouth. Brook continued to fondle her tits, but nothing happened. No ominous cloud filled her mind. She broke her kiss with the cock and took a breath. "I guess it doesn't work like that," Hinata said, sounding disappointed. "Shame," she smiled without any mirth. "Maybe it wouldn't be so bad if things were that easy, huh?" Then, the dark cloud filled her mind again, and she was compelled to take the cock back in her mouth. It seemed only Brook would get any pleasure out of groping her tits.

The trader figured things wouldn't be that easy with getting the woman to enjoy sexual acts as much as she herself did and released her breasts, letting them swing and slap into each other as she did so. "Well, I do have a few rare odds and ends I wouldn't mind sacrificing if it would make your body much more receptive to being molested and groped. I feel that you should at least enjoy your body as much as I do. Also, I'm about to cum, so get ready" she said and pushed her hips just a little further forward to present her cock to the woman.

That, in itself, was an order as well, although Hinata had already planned to take the cock in her mouth anyway. She closed her mouth around the twitching, fat dick and felt another rope of precum spray on her tongue. The act of sucking Brook's dick had made her pussy damp, so she was certainly excited about getting her off. Part of her hoped that one day, however, she'd find a way to fix herself. She still imagined Naruto's cock while using her mouth to please the trader. She gave the cock a few strokes with her tongue, readying herself for the mouthful of cum waiting for her.

Brook placed a hand onto the woman's head as she began to feel that blissful orgasm wash over her caramel coloured body. Biting her lower lip as she let out a long moan, jet after thick, sticky jet of seed was sprayed into the woman's waiting mouth. While the hand on the woman's head wasn't forcefully keeping it in place, it did certainly seem like the woman was wanting to encourage the woman to become depraved quickly.

The cum exploded in her mouth with more **** than Hinata was expecting, quickly filling her gullet up and forcing her to swallow it. "Gulppp, Gulpp, Gulpppp, Gulp!"

"Gggghhrrgghk!" She gagged on it, not expecting it to have such a salty taste and slimy texture. She cringed her eyes as the orgasm slowly subsided, but kept her mouth on Brook's cock. She just idly nursed the dick, draining it of the remaining few drops of sperm.

After a while, she pulled her mouth off the cock and licked her lips. "How was that? Did I do okay, .. Mistress?"

Brook let out a long, delighted sigh and gently patted the woman's head upon hearing her question. "Yes, you did well for your first time. And I'm sure you'll become even better as you learn and experiment with various methods and techniques. Though admittedly I'm still a little unsatisfied. Now, another order I want to try out." She said before looking down into the woman's pale eyes with a grin. "I want you to tell me whenever you're at the peak of your fertile period. Understand?" A part of her did expect that the woman wouldn't be able to follow through on that request, but was more than willing to take a chance.

Hinata blushed, thinking of Naruto when the woman asked that question. She so badly wanted to spend the rest of her days with the love of her life and always imagined he would be the one to bear her children. And because of her extensive research, she had her clan run tests on her body. They were able to predict what age she'd be for peak fertility. She would have preferred to keep the information a secret, but since it was an order she was able to follow, the dark presence swirled in her mind again. She had **** but to tell her.

"According to my clan's research... I will reach peak fertility when I'm nineteen and a half years old," She said, a defeated, surrendering tone in her voice. She had to give up on Naruto, or ever go back to the village.

Brook nodded at the information she had received and gently kissed the woman's forehead. "That's rather nice to hear. I still have a number of questions for you babe. What's your name being the next big one I want to know. Followed by how old are you now, and how easy are you to breed currently?" She asked, expecting to get at least two of the three answers she sought from her.

"My name is Hinata Hyuuga, I'm seventeen years old. And... Uh... I guess I could probably be bred..." She answered, hating how the words sounded coming out of her mouth. Some silence passed between them, and then Hinata spoke up. "But... Um... Look, Mistress. I'm in love with someone back in my village. I wanted to spend the rest of my life with him. I know that this is a lot to ask, but please, please don't turn me into a baby factory. I want my first born to be with the man I love."

Tears spilled down Hinata's cheeks as she poured her heart out and spoke the truth. "I've watched him since I was young and even though it feels like sometimes he doesn't know I exist, he is such a caring and loving person. I love him more than anyone in the world, Mistress."

She sniffled and wiped her eyes and cheeks, drying her tears. She could still taste Brook's cum in her mouth while saying those words, which made the confession of love sound hollow.

"Maybe instead of breeding me... You could... Uh..." She blushed darkly, then swallowed while looking at the woman with determination. "You could use my other end. My b-butt. I could even get good at using these enormous things," she gestured at her massive tits. "And I'm sure I could become really good at using my mouth to please you! I could wake you up every day with my mouth, showing you how much I appreciate you taking me in and giving me a new purpose in life!"

She paused again. "But please, don't take away the chance for Naruto to give me my first baby. I'm willing to do anything. Just... Just please, don't take that from me."

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