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Chapter 34 by ghostwriter53
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Max goes home
"Hello, Master Max. Master Thorsten is meeting with one of his clients, and Mistress is out shopping with Miss Randall," Bridget said, greeting Max almost as soon as he entered his family's home with Caroline following behind on a leash.
“How long ago did they leave?” he asked.
“About an hour or so I would guess,” Bridget said with a smile. “Do we have a new girl?”
“Only momentarily, Caroline here will be staying for a week. She gives incredible blow jobs. I plan to have her teach Rachel and Daniel.”
“I’m sure they will benefit from her skill, Master Max. After all, Danielle hasn’t been a **** girl for all that long, and Amazons owned Rachel.”
“Speaking of, where are my slaves?”
“In your room, Master Max. I’m sure they eagerly await your pleasure. As do I,” Bridget said giving him a wink. Max smiled at the longtime **** girl and led Caroline up to his room. He found the way her cowgirl boots thudded against the stairs interesting. It was certainly different from the clicking of stiletto heels that he usually heard.
He entered his bedroom and smiled as he saw his two slaves, their leashes tethered to rings in the wall. They stood facing the wall, bent over offering themselves up for use.
The beautiful redhead’s hair was cascading down her back like waves of shimmering copper. She was dressed in a pale purple satin half-bra with white lace trim, a matching short satin skirt, and black six-inch stiletto-heeled shoes. A pale purple leather collar was around her neck and a white leather single glove kept her arms trapped behind her back. A white silk blindfold covered her eyes and a white ball gag filled her mouth.
Standing next to her, standing in the same way was his former classmate Danielle. Her long light brown had been styled into long pigtails. She was dressed in a white satin half-bra with black lace trim, a short satin skirt that was pleated and in a plaid pattern, and like Rachel, a pair of black six-inch stiletto-heeled shoes had been placed on the eighteen-year-old’s feet. Her blindfold, collar, ball gag, and single glove were all red.
Max gave a gentle downward jerk on Caroline’s leash and the brunette obediently lowered herself to her knees. Max then walked over to Rachel untethered her leash and gave a jerk. Rachel turned in place and then knelt when she felt a downward jerk. He repeated the process with Danielle. He then removed their blindfolds and loosened their ball gags until they fell from their mouths. He then re-buckled them so that they hung around their necks.
“Rachel, Danielle, this is Caroline. She’ll be staying with us for a week and helping you learn to give me better blowjobs. Isn’t that nice of her?”
“Yes, Master,” they both reply.
“Caroline come here,” he said pointing to the floor in front of Rachel and Danielle.
“Yes, Sir,” she says as she crawls to the indicated spot.
“Now I know you don’t have a cock in front of you, but I want you to demonstrate that technique you have with your tongue to these two.
“It would be my pleasure, Sir,” she says before sticking out her tongue and beginning to slowly flick and roll her tongue through the air. Her tongue moved with grace as she performed a complex series of flicks, swirls, and rolls, constantly changing direction and tempo. “Remember three key points,” Caroline said pausing briefly. “Every cock is different so always pay attention to your master’s responses. Vary the pressure you apply on your master’s cock as well as speed and direction. And Lastly, keep your jaw relaxed.”
After a few more minutes of demonstrating Max called a stop to it and faced Rachel. “Rachel Demonstrate. Caroline, provide some feedback.
“Yes, Master,” Rachel responded, her voice muffled slightly by the residual presence of the ball gag around her neck. She positioned herself in front of Caroline, mimicking the stance and angle that Caroline had just shown. Her tongue moved tentatively at first, trying to replicate the complicated dance she had witnessed.
Caroline watched intently, nodding occasionally. “That’s a good start. Try to relax your shoulders more; it will help with your jaw tension,” she advised gently. Rachel adjusted her posture and resumed her efforts, this time with more ease.
“Better,” Caroline commented, “now remember to vary your speed based on feedback. Watch your master's reactions closely.”
Max observed the interaction with a pleased expression. He knew integrating Caroline into his household could offer a fresh perspective and enhance his slaves' skills effectively.
Turning his attention to Danielle, he beckoned her forward. “Your turn, Danielle. Apply what you’ve just learned.”
“Don’t forget to use more of your tongue, not just the tip,” Caroline reminded, and Danielle adjusted accordingly, showing marked improvement in her technique.
Max watched as his two slaves practiced under Caroline’s tutelage, satisfied with the progress they were making. After several minutes of practice and critique, he decided it was time for a practical application.
Max pulled out his phone and opened the stopwatch. Before taking out his cock. He handed his phone to Caroline.”Both of you are going to take turns sucking my cock. Whoever makes me cum faster is the winner. The loser will be punished,” Max paused letting his words hang in the air.” Rachel, your up first. Start the clock when she starts sucking,” he said looking at Caroline.
“Yes, Sir,” Caroline said with a smile.
Rachel, eager to prove her obedience and skill, moved into position immediately. She took a deep breath, steadying her nerves, then opened her mouth and began to put the techniques Caroline had taught her into practice. Caroline started the clock as Rachel's lips made contact with Max’s cock.
Max watched Rachel's every move, how she flicked her tongue and maintained eye contact to gauge his reactions. It was clear that the girl was still processing Caroline's advice while trying not to let her nervousness get in the way of her performance.
Danielle attentively watched in the background, biting her lip as she dissected each move Rachel made for future reference. She knew Rachel was setting the bar quite high by the look on their master’s face, and his labored breathing.
After what felt like an eternity but was a few minutes, Rachel looked up at Max for any indication of his orgasm. She knew he was close and took him back in her mouth. She **** herself to take him all the way down until his balls rested on her chin. He groaned loudly as he filled Rachel’s mouth.
After taking a few short minutes to recover, Max motioned Danielle over. Danielle took a step forward gingerly, conscious of Rachel’s panting form next to her and aware that she had a tough act to follow. Her heart pounded in anticipation as she knelt before Max. A mixture of fear and thrill surged through her veins as she opened her mouth, rolled out her tongue, and started sucking on Max’s still-hard cock.
Caroline started the timer anew as Danielle went about her task with meticulousness that surprised Max. Danielle had been paying close attention during Caroline’s demonstration and Rachel's attempt. Her movements were mindful yet fluid, and Max had a hard time concealing his reactions. After a handful of minutes, Max was panting heavily and clutching Danielle’s hair.
With a shuddering breath, Max gave the final signal. “Stop,” he whispered hoarsely. Caroline stopped the clock and looked at him with a raised eyebrow, signaling she knew Danielle's time had been significantly shorter than Rachel's.
Max cleared his throat and addressed the room. “Well done, both of you,” he began, “but there can only be one winner.” He raised an eyebrow at Caroline who showed him the timer on the phone.
“Danielle,” he declared, looking straight into her eager eyes, “you’re the winner.” He saw Rachel bow her head in defeat, already resounding herself to whatever punishment he had in mind. “Stand,” he said as he turned his attention to Rachel. The redheaded **** girl obediently stood. Max undid her single glove and set it on the floor he then removed her half-bra and short skirt.
Caroline watched intently as Max led Rachel over to the wall that she and Danielle had been tethered to. “I bet she’s in for something rather harsh,” she thought, a small smile creeping across her face.
“Bend over, hands against the wall, legs spread,” he ordered. Rachel did as she told without hesitation. “Arch your back, stick out your ass.” Again Rachel quickly obeyed. Max walked over to his nightstand and picked up a black leather strap with a dark wooden handle. The strap itself was made of supple leather and was about a foot long and close to an inch thick. “Do not leave position,” he said after walking back to Rachel and placing the strap against her ass.
“Yes, Master,” she replied her voice elevated with nervousness.
“You did well, Rachel, but since Danielle made me cum so much more quickly, you have earned a very severe strapping,” Max said as he moved the strap back and forth across Rachel’s milky ass cheeks.
“Yes, Master. I promise to do better.” Max’s only reply is to gently tap the strap against Rachel’s ass a couple of times before pulling it back until it was well behind him. He swung it forward as hard and fast as he could.
The sound of the strap meeting Rachel's skin echoed through the room. She gritted her teeth, staying perfectly still as her master had demanded. Tears welled up in her eyes but she refused to let them spill over. She was determined to take her punishment with grace.
Max was almost taken aback by her stoicism. He had expected at least a slight flinch or gasp. But Rachel remained as steady as stone, only her ragged breaths revealing any indication of discomfort. With an impressed look on his face, he swung the leather strap again, leaving another solid imprint on Rachel's pale ass cheeks.
Danielle's heart pounded wildly in her chest as she watched Rachel take her punishment. Somehow she couldn't tear her gaze away, and she felt a mix of relief and guilt knowing she wasn't the one receiving the strapping.
Several more times Max brought the strap down on Rachel's reddening ass cheeks, each stroke eliciting somewhat more visible responses from the redhead - a sharp inhale here, a suppressed whimper there. When he finally dropped his arm and stepped back to admire his handiwork, Rachel's ass was an impressive shade of pink that stood out starkly against her paler skin.
"Good girl, Rachel," he praised in a husky voice that held a hint of satisfaction, "you took your punishment well." He set the strap aside and ran his palm gently across the hot skin of her punished flesh before turning his attention back to Caroline and Danielle. He walked over to his bed and pressed a button on his nightstand. A few seconds later, Bridget entered his room and curtsied.
“How may I be of service, Master Max?” she asked.
“You may take Caroline and Rachel down to the **** pens. Danielle will be remaining with me for her reward.”
“Yes, Master Max,” Bridget said curtsying again. She then moved to her two fellow slaves and took their leases in hand. “Come on girls,” she said giving a gentle tug.
As they began leaving, Max removed Danielle’s single glove and guarded her to his bed. He shoved her onto it so she landed face down. He watched with appreciation as she lay perfectly still as he removed his clothing. He flipped up her short satin skirt completely exposing her to him. He mounted her, guiding his hard cock into her glistening pussy, making her moan loudly against the mattress. He grabbed her wrists and pinned them to the bed above her wrists.
“From an anti-slavery activist to a needy **** girl,” he said with a mocking laugh as he began to fuck Danielle hard. “Of course, you make a much better ****, don’t you” he said over the combined sounds of their slapping flesh, and the creaking of his bed that filled his room.
“Yes, Master! Yes, Master!” her screams of pleasure were barely muffled by his silk covers and the mattress. She lifted her hips allowing him to fuck her even deeper. “Oh fuck!” she screamed as she clenched her fist around the silk covers and began to kick the tops of her feet against the bed as her body writhed in pleasure.
“Cum all you want you little bitch,” He growled in her ear as he increased his relentless pace. Danielle screamed into the mattress as her orgasm hit her like a freight train. Her pussy confused and clamped around Max’s cock, and he increased his pace further driving Danielle into a second Orgasm and then a third. Her body melted into the mattress as Max continued to take his pleasure from her, his pace as unyielding as his grip on her wrists. Soon, she could do nothing but lay under her high school classmate-turned-master, and moan like the **** girl he had turned her into as he continued to use her.
"Eyes up, Danielle," he commanded and the girl quickly complied, lifting her exhausted gaze to meet his in the reflection of the bedroom mirror. The sight of herself beneath him, her body marked and taken, sent a fresh pulse of pleasure through her.
A smirk danced on Max's lips as he saw her reaction. He tightened his grip on her wrists even more, forcing another whimper from her lips. He loved it. Loved how obedient she had become. How she had surrendered herself completely to him.
The room was filled with the sound of their rough breathing, strangled moans, and the rhythmic slapping of their bodies colliding until finally, Max grunted one last time.
His body tensed, then shuddered as he emptied himself inside her. Danielle's whole body trembled beneath him as she felt him fill her, her name a near growl from his lips as he collapsed onto her.
Max remained still for a while, pressed against Danielle's back as he caught his breath. His chest rose and fell heavily against hers until eventually, he withdrew.
Turning her onto her back, he surveyed his work. Danielle lay there spent and raw but there was an unmistakable glow about her that pleased him immensely. Her cheeks were flushed and there was a satisfied smile playing on her lips despite the exhaustion etched on her face.
He leaned over to press a quick but possessive kiss on those tempting lips before standing up to dress himself. Once he had dressed he took her leash and led her down to the pens to join the rest of his family's **** girls.
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Society Rebuilt
Society has fallen and rebuilt itself around the enslavement of women for the pleasure of others
After reading Joe Steel's very well done re-write of the story Girls in Bondage the original of was written by Kilogram on the site bdsmlibrary, I decided to write my own version of the story that has been bouncing around in my twisted mind for some time now. I hope you will check out both Joe Steel's excellent version as well as Kilogram's original.
Updated on May 14, 2026
by ghostwriter53
Created on May 12, 2022
by ghostwriter53
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