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Chapter 16
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Transactional
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Melanie gets eaten out again
This time, Melanie sits on the edge of the bed herself, her legs spread for Josh to eat her out in a more relaxed fashion. Josh drops to his knees, and lowers himself into position, squeezing his face between her soft thighs. He finds her clit with his tongue, and begins to make circles, occasionally breaking pattern to run his tongue up and down directly over it, or to make a figure-eight pattern.
Melanie begins breathing heavily, followed a minute later by the beginning of audible moans. She runs her hands through Josh's hair, gently pulling him towards her. She tries to be gentle, though, so as not to interrupt the rhythm. Josh responds by trying hard to maintain the motion, slowly stiffening his tongue in order to increase the intensity of Melanie's sensation. Melanie soon begins to lose some of her self control, and tightens her legs around Josh's head, lifting up her calves and wrapping them around his shoulders.
The weight of her legs on his back pushes Josh into Melanie's pussy, further intensifying the sensation from his tongue. Her moans become louder and louder, and soon she is as **** to cum as Josh was.
But unlike Josh, Melanie isn't holding back. She desperately wants to get over the edge, and Josh is doing all the right things. But somehow she feels a mental block, and no matter what he does or what she thinks of, his tongue just isn't doing the job. The feeling is magnificent: he is holding her as close to the edge as it is possible to be, but close isn't enough.
She sits there enjoy Josh's effort, and resists finishing herself off out of fear of disappointing him; he has been so enthusiastic after all. But eventually her patience runs out, she opens her legs to release Josh, and starts to masturbate. Just like before, barely has she touched herself when she is rocked by an incredible orgasm, causing her to fall back, screaming in ecstasy with her legs still wrapped around Josh.
As she relaxes, so do her legs, which fall to Josh's side, freeing him. Again he has failed. Again he composes himself, then stands up, and lies on the bed next to Melanie, giving her a kiss.
"Sorry to interrupt you," she says apologetically. "I had been right on the edge for so long, and just couldn't resist. You really are amazing, you know. No-one has ever edged me like that before. I don't know how you do it."
"Thanks. I was really hoping to get you there this time, but I'm just glad you enjoyed it," Josh lies, angry at himself for failing three times in one day. He thinks back to his femininity plan. He could still ask for a blowjob without breaking the rules if it's for her to snowball him, but it's not the time yet. He isn't really mentally prepared to start drinking cum yet, and either way, it's probably a bit too early to ask Melanie for anything weird.
Perhaps another time.
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You find a Rulebook that lets you rewrite the rules any organization has to follow
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