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Chapter 4
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MegaMarshmallow
Where is our main character from, when does our story begin and who are they?
Alexis (18 Years Old – Lone Wonder): About to Take the G.O.A.T.
Alexis the Lone Wanderer
Level 1 – EXP: 0/5
Perks:
Voice of the People (Decisions are best made by groups: Comment Suggestions)
Corruption = 0
Karma = 0 (Neutral)
Alexis sighed as she made her way out from her dad's office. Now she had to take some stupid test? God she was so done with all this bullshit. 18 years old and still in school like a little kid. At least, this one would be the last. But then it was onto the montous life of a **** to the overseer or whatever he wanted to call it. For the greater community of the vault her ass! She approached the classroom but before she got there she noticed the usual gang of thugs known as the tunnel snakes or some nonsense harassing her girl Amata.
Amata could more than stand up for herself so Alexis was about to carry on when she noticed them getting handsy with her. She did a double take as she noticed Amata looking like a deer in the headlights. Her previous assessment about Amata being able to handle these creeps may have been a bit misjudged. She looked lost and frozen as Butch, the bastard, put his hands on her and went for the zipper of her jumpsuit. He was bold to be doing that right out here in the open but with his gang backing him up the power he felt must have made him think he could do anything. Alexis worried how far this would go. She should do something to help. Or better yet go get help. Then again… she could just walk on by and go take the G.O.A.T. rather than getting involved. She notices one of the vault security officers comes around a corner and sees Amata being harassed only to turn his back on her and go the other way. Alexis really is the only one that can do anything.
Before she could act, voices filled her head, suggestions, ones that she had been hearing and ignoring for a long time but as of turning 18 found herself unable to anymore. Despite this, she continued to fight them and the often filthy actions they tried to get her to indulge upon.
Comment suggestions from the voices for Alexis.
What Do the Voices Suggest(Comment)?
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The Curse of Corrupting Comments (Open)
A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
Updated on May 20, 2026
by MegaMarshmallow
Created on Feb 26, 2023
by MegaMarshmallow
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