Chapter 8
by
FreezeAntix
What do they do with Caroline?
A Deal is a Deal...
If Mark did not know Marie had an older sister, he would have thought that Caroline was her twin. The girl looked identical to Marie there were key differences but one would have had to look close to notice them. Caroline was a little taller and her face looked slightly older when next to her younger sister. Other than that the sisters were identical.
Marie's mother, Hope was a slender woman. She lacked the sexy curves of her daughters. Her face was pretty enough though and she did not look like a woman who had a twenty-four year old daughter. Marie mentioned that her mother worked as accountant for one the big tech firms downtown. She had recently been promoted hence why they were new to town. Marie's father was more or less of the picture. He was still married to Hope but he lived off on his own while making a living working for oil companies a drill foreman. The last Marie had heard from him was that he was somewhere out in Fort McMurray Canada. He was not dead beat though as he sent his family every other paycheck.
Caroline as Marie had mentioned was a college drop-out and she a apparently did not work either. Mark really did not know why she was treated so well by Hope. If he had dropped out of school his mother and father would at least make him work. Marie mentioned that Hope was trying her hand as being a social media influencer. Pretty girls were a dime a dozen on the internet though so her chances of hitting fame were slim but not impossible she was very pretty.
Marie invited Mark over after school. He was surprised that Marie lived in his neighborhood albeit several blocks away. Marie greeted him a the door, he could not help but stare her over, she was in tight-fitting t-shirt and short-short cotton shorts. "We just got out of class...you change fast," Mark said checking his watch.
Marie shrugged and stepped aside to let him in. "I like to be comfortable," she replied simply as she closed her front door. "You ready me to show me your super powers?" she then asked.
"I guess...where is she?" Mark replied casually with his shrug and asked.
"Caroline!" Marie called out.
"What!" Caroline called back from somewhere upstairs.
"Come down here I have someone for you to meet."
"Who?"
"Just come down here!"
"No, I'm busy!"
Marie rolled her eyes. "Do you need to see her?"
"I don't think so?" Mark replied and thought. "I've never used my powers out of sight before...but you did show me a photo..."
Marie smiled, "All you then."
Mark took a deep breath and focused.
A moment later foot steps could be heard padding down the stairs. Caroline soon appeared before Mark and Marie. Her face blank while she was dressed in a very revealing black sheer teddy.
"Well shit," Marie said her gaze locked on her sister. She waved a hand in front of Caroline's face. There was no reaction. "Do you have her under your control?" she asked her attention still on Caroline as she poked her in the forehead and got no reaction.
Mark turned his focus on Marie and the girl's face went blank and she moved to stand next to Caroline. "Yeah...she's under my control..." Mark smirked.
"I am also under your control..." Marie replied monotone her dark eyes blank.
Mark enjoyed eying the sisters as they stood at attention shoulder to shoulder blank faced and under his complete and utter control. He froze Caroline as he had agreed to do so before freeing Marie. He implanted a memory that they had a brief chat and erased the fact that he had taken over her mind for a bit and the fact the he was willing to do so if he wanted.
"This is so cool..." Marie breathed as she moved her sister's limbs about and played with her face. "A Caroline doll!"
"Deal is a deal, I get to keep her," Mark remined as he watched Marie pose her older sister.
Marie sighed, "Fine, but you still have to make my mom forget about her."
"I mean that's easy...." Mark simply replied. He watched Marie raised Caroline's arms up and then remove the teddy rendering the girl naked. She looked great naked. Athletically toned body with round breasts with nipples angled outward slightly while her sex was cleanly shaven.
"She doesn't need her clothes..." Marie smiled and examined the teddy. "I think I'll keep this..."
"She'll fit with my other dolls perfectly like that..." Mark said as he reached out and groped at the twenty-four year old's breasts.
"Okay...new challenge," Marie declared.
Mark could not help but grin, "What, we're not even done with this deal yet."
"Well since you say it'll be easy to make my mother forget about this one," Marie started to say and gestured at Caroline who stood idly by naked and oblivious. "I want you to make my mother a **** to me."
Mark thought for a moment. "What's in it for me?"
"Well, I never told you why mom just lets my sister do whatever..."
"You didn't. I was curious."
"Caroline has friends in high places."
"Hmm...how high?"
"Like you seen some of them in movies high."
"You turn my mother into my **** and you can meet these people."
"Well now, that's interesting. Real interesting."
As on cue the front door opened. "Caroline, Marie I'm home!" a voice bellowed from the front of the house.
"Deal or what?" Marie asked.
What does Mark Decide?
Disable your Ad Blocker! Thanks :)
Time Freeze
A boy discovers the ability to stop time
Average high school boy finds out he has the ability to stop time and uses it to his advantage.
Updated on May 29, 2026
by FreezeAntix
Created on Oct 5, 2015
- 8,185 Likes
- 2,095,415 Views
- 1,859 Favorites
- 1,631 Bookmarks
- 434 Chapters
- 106 Chapters Deep
Comments moved below the chapter.
Jump to comments
Comments