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Chapter 7
What's next?
To the parking lot
Jackie made it to the exit door and ran through it, slamming it shut behind her as she caught her breath and her face grew neon red. That was absolutely mortifying!
"No time to worry about that now." Jackie told herself as she looked around the alleyway she was in, clutching her guitar case tighter to herself. "Right now, I need to get out of here."
Taking a deep breath, Jackie scampered down the alley, her feet padding against the concrete as she looked around nervously. Coming to the edge of the alleyway, Jackie stuck her head out and looked around before spotting Dawn's van in the parking lot. All she had to do was cross the street and -
"Lose something, Lard Ass?!"
Jackie blushed and yelped as she turned and saw the two valets, a man and a woman, laughing at her.
"S-shut up!" Jackie snapped, blushing furiously as she made her way across the parking lot and towards the van, fully aware that the valets (and a few hotel guests) were now howling at her jiggling ass. She muttered angrily to herself, "I freaking hate you bitches right now!"
As she got closer and closer to the van, she prayed to every god she could think of that either Dawn accidently left the keys inside again, or she had left the van unlocked; giving Jackie a place to hide.
Is the van locked? If so, what does Jackie do now?
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