Lois Lane & Blaze read "Advanced Fantasy" by Iam_DickMan, Part 1

In the space between the pages, where characters of stories wait for their next chapters to be written, two women laze naked in the vast emptiness that represents the infinite possibilities of the world...or writer's block.

Lois Lane lay on the flat, infinite plane that represented the floor. Soft toes led to pink soles; well-shaped ankles swelled to muscular calves, slim thighs, a pert, heart-shaped ass. Through the gap between her thighs, an eager eye could just make out the soft petals of the reporter's labia.

Behind her, stalking like a cat, came a scarlet figure—lean almost to the point of emaciation, long of limb, skin the color of fresh blood on parchment. In outline she was much like a woman, with small breasts, triangular face, and flaring hips, but between her legs hung a pendulous crimson scrote, heavy with outsized testicles, the jutting cock thin and curved, ending in a head flanged with soft pink spikes. Dark horns curled back from the demon's brow, and the white eyes that burned beneath those beetling brows were pure white, without pupil or iris.

"What are we reading today?" Blaze said, a long, forked black tongue sliding out of her mouth to kiss the reporter's toes.

"Advanced Fantasy, by Iam_DickMan," Lois said. She pointedly ignored the scarlet succubus as she concentrated on her tablet, scrolling through the page, reading aloud as Blaze's tongue slithered over and around her toes, leaving a trail of saliva behind.

"Dungeons & Dragons-style fantasy in a contemporary setting," Lois summarized, at the end of the first page. "Buxom orcs and dishwashing machines, centaurs in cubicle jobs, all that."

Blaze blinked, then shrugged. "Just as long as it isn't Bright."

"Our hero is Arthur, a human," Lois said. "Because none of the other paths is quite developed enough for a review, yet. So there will be a bit of retread with the other reviews. Definitely a story that is more about depth than breadth, and is generally linear."

The demon's lips pressed against sole of Lois Lane's left foot, and the reporter instinctively kicked...but the demon dodged, and smiled. "It has over a million views. Can't be that bad."

Lois gave an indeterminate snort. "There's a bit of a Douglas Adams approach to style, at least in the early chapters. Not really trying to be funny, but...observational humor. There's a tiefling."

"A what?" Blaze asked, cutting short her tongue running up the rougher part of Lois Lane's foot.

"Like you, but with smaller horns, less power, no cock," the reporter managed. "It's a D&D thing. Imagine a human with a devil grandparent."

"Hmm. Would like like a few tiefling grandchildren?" The demon wrapped her lips around the reporter's big toe.

"Please, Angie! You've knocked up enough in my own story..." Lois shook her head. "Anyway, Arthur gets a MacGuffin. These first chapters tend to be short, Iam_DickMan really feeling his way. But he does know what he likes."

Inside was a giantess, grass green and at least seven feet tall. She was dressed business casual, and that couldn’t hide her toned physique. She had the body of a warrior from ages past, and could crush his head between her thighs like a water balloon. Her small tusks poked out of her mouth with a slight curve.

Blaze's toe-sucking increased to signal her approval. Lois Lane's lips curled back as her other foot explored the demon's face, her toes poking at the demon's lips, finding the hard little shields of her teeth. Tusks would be interesting...

"A few allusions to classical fantasy, but really the MacGuffin allows him a kind of low-key mind control, and has a will of its own," Lois said. "So he immediately uses it to seduce the orc girl, and the MacGuffin immediately guilts him for it. A bit rapey, but we can hardly throw stones, can we?"

A grunt was the only answer Lois Lane got. The demon had all the toes of the naked woman's right foot in her mouth now, the tongue squirming between the little tootsies.

His cock twitched, and he could feel some pre cum soak into his boxers. He looked her up and down. Her nipples were poking through her top and her face was flushed. She was practically panting. He stood up and walked to the other side of the desk, and carefully lifted the business skirt to expose… bright pink panties. Soaked bright pink panties. He felt his mouth water and his cock jerked again in his pants.

“Kira, from now on your cunt will always be this wet.”

"I think there's an interesting bit of restraint in these early chapters. Arthur could have bent his orc over the desk and plugged her right away. Instead, he seems to be enjoying the control...the power. Which is really what mind control fiction is all about. Control, power relationships, seduction...playing with your food..." Lois wiggled wet toes in the air as Blaze took to kissing her ankles. Though the reporter could not see it, the scarlet succubus had drawn herself up on her knees, those heavy balls in her lap, crimson cock jutting out just inches from her feet.

"Do they fuck?" Blaze said, in between kisses. Her hands were now stroking the reporter's shins, working her thumbs up toward those calves.

"They do," Lois said, and couldn't hide a little smile. "And things quickly snowball."

Neither of them knew it, but his seed was the most potent around. I’ll need a morning after pill. She thought. No. You won’t take any birth control. You’ll forget all about that. “No birth control, forget all about it.”

"Damn, going straight for the impregnation kink," Blaze said, pausing a moment in her own worship. "I know you said we can't throw stones, given how many times it's cropped up in our story, but that does seem...sudden. Not that I'm at all displeased at the idea of her swelling up with Arthur's half-orc babies."

"I think it's the shortness of the chapters. The sex isn't bad, but the pacing feels off a bit," Lois said. "And honestly, this could all be part of the meet-cute. Except she has a goblin roommate."

"Oh. Is this a harem situation?" Blaze said...and held her breath as Lois Lane's big toe touched the rubbery, swollen tip of the demon's dick.

"Maybe. Arthur immediately works to magically **** the little gobbo. Reminds me more than a little of OrcBarbies..." Lois said. "Although making her think 'Goblin dicks are pathetic' shows some deep-seated insecurities. In any event, at least Iam_DickMan allows room for branches, even if there aren't any yet. But that's about twenty chapters...and there are over eighty more, if we can find the right route through..."

"Shall we continue, then?" Blaze said, leaning forward...and the tip of her cock slid into the spit-slick gap between Lois Lane's toes.