Comments & Revisions

With the supreme power the rulebook granted me, the tedium of regular seemed boring now. Chatting with my mom about how nothing out of the ordinary happened at school, eating dinner while listening to a droning conversation about paperwork or something, even playing video games...they all seemed unimportant now. I didn't even bother doing my homework, I could just make Julie do it once I summoned her. I sat there, mindlessly playing Minecraft, just trying to pass the time until I could bring my new assistant home as silently as possible...and finally, once everyone else in my family had gone to bed, I shut off my computer, turned around, and snapped my fingers.

In the blink of an eye, Julie popped into my bedroom. She must've been asleep, because instead of standing, she fell over and yelped in shock. As she sat up, rubbing her eye to take in her new surroundings, I put a finger to my lips, and she understood. Julie smacked her lips, and stood, running a hand through her hair in a futile attempt to fix her bed head. I leaned in towards her, and began in a low whisper.

"What, figured just because school's out for the day that your work was done? As my sidekick, I want to go over the rules I wrote today and get your opinions on them. Can't hurt to get a second pair of eyes on my ideas, right?"

"Yeah, seems fair. Gimme a sec, though...i'm not quite awake yet." She stretched, her white tank top revealing some of her midriff.

"That's not all I want. I've also got a few tasks for you tonight. I want you to suck me off as I fall asleep, finish my homework for me, and then wake me up with another blowjob. My alarm goes off at 6:30, and if it goes off before you've woken me up, you can expect some pretty severe punishments for tomorrow. Understood?"

"Yeah, seems reasonable. So, mind if I read it over now?" I nodded, and motioned for her to follow me as I crawled into bed. She slid in next to me, and as I clicked on the lamp on my nightstand, she scooched closer to me and wrapped an arm around my chest in an attempt to snuggle. I said nothing, and flipped open the rulebook, all the way back to the beginning. Her eyes darted across the page, and nodded in agreement as she read:

Old Rule: The dress code for female students is as follows: No pants, no panties, no bras. All skirts must be pussy length and no longer. Tops may not conceal a student's midriff. Shoes must be heels with a height of at least four inches.

Old Rule: To conserve space in the school, male and female students will use the same changing room for gym class.

Old Rule: The female gym uniform is limited to a slingshot leotard with a thong bottom. This does not relax the dress code rule forbidding bras.

Old Rule: Female students are required to take a sexual fitness exam instead of a physical one. Male students may spectate and are expected to assist as necessary.

Old Rule: Male students with an average grade equal to or above 95% are issued a dated index card (Hereafter referred to as "Grading Cards") with their name and grade on it at the beginning of the school day.

New Rule: In order to ease the burden on our teachers, Male students issued a Grading Card may write the name of any female student(s) on the slip, the school period they intend to grade the female student for, and the grade they believe that female student has earned. When submitted at the end of the day, any grades thus marked for female students shall take precedence over the grades given by their teachers.

New Rule: Male students with Grading Cards may require extra credit of any kind from the female students they intend to grade. Failure on the female student's part to complete this extra credit results in a zero for the listed class period. In accordance with the school's "No Zero Tolerance" policy, three zeros in one quarter results in immediate expulsion.

"Hmmmm...maybe we should get rid of the Grading Card rules entirely? I mean, it's kinda redundant now that you can just order anyone to obey your will."

"Yeah, good point." I erased the three rules pertaining to Grading Cards, and she continued reading.

Old Rule: I, Michael Newman, writer of this rule, am the rightful owner of this Rulebook, and the one and only being in all of existence that can write in this Rulebook.

Old Rule: If anyone finds this book and it is not in the direct possession of the one who may write in it, they are immediately compelled to return the book to him by any means necessary. Returning the Rulebook, or participating in the return thereof, to its rightful owner supersedes all other activities which are not required to sustain life, and is an act worthy of praise from all, on par with saving the life of a child from certain ****. Intentionally delaying the return of the Rulebook to its rightful owner in any fashion is universally considered a crime equivalent to first-degree ****.

Old Rule: Intentionally, directly or indirectly, separating the rightful owner of this Rulebook from this Rulebook is the most ancient and heinous of crimes, so embedded within the human psyche that none would even contemplate it as a course of action. This includes, but is not limited to, slaying the owner of this Rulebook, or otherwise preventing him from writing herein.

"Huh."

"Something wrong?"

"Yeah, the rule about returning the rulebook...I accidentally left the rulebook in French class while I banged Sarah, and nobody came and returned it to me. Maybe it's because I wasn't actively thinking about needing it back?"

"Could be an urgency thing? Like, if you personally think it isn't in any trouble or don't have a strong emotion about needing it back, maybe it'll just stay where it was?"

"Yeah...could be..."

New Rule: The owner of this Rulebook's explicit and implicit will must be obeyed.

New Rule: The owner of this Rulebook can control the size of his penis at will. He also has no refractory period, and when he orgasms he will cum ten times the normal volume.

New Rule: Julie Yang does not have to obey the implicit will of the owner of the Rulebook. She is still beholden to all other rules written herein.

"Uh...who's Julie Yang?"

"Oh my god, I did write the wrong name down. Weird. Let me change that really quick." After quickly erasing Yang and replacing it with Jin, we kept reading.

Old Rule: Julie Jin must be surgically altered to have a pussy and asshole four times tighter than that of a normal woman. No matter how large the insertion or how numerous the violation, when she is struck on the back of her head, they revert to their virgin tightness. A secondary part of this surgery prevents Julie from passing out due to pain.

Old Rule: Julie Jin must practice piercing and tattooing humans every day of her life, until she sucks the cock of the owner of The Rulebook.

New Rule: Julie Jin can still feel pain, but also equally equates it to pleasure.

New Rule: Tabitha Brenner will now feel every single sensation that Callie Brenner feels, and Callie Brenner will now feel every single sensation that Tabitha Brenner feels. However, they are not allowed to cum unless both of them are given verbal permission by the user of the rule book.

New Rule: Tabitha Brenner and Callie Brenner will no longer be able to orgasm, masturbate, modify any aspect of their outfits, put on clothing, or remove clothing without the user's approval. In addition, Tabitha Brenner and Callie Brenner will no longer be able to touch either of their mouths, tits, asses, or pussies without the user's approval.

New Rule: Tabitha Brenner and Callie Brenner's names are both now Twinslut. Although both Twinsluts can no longer remember their old names, they will be horrified every time people refer to one of the Twinsluts as such. Anytime a Twinslut attempts to go by a different name or attempts to have someone not call her by her name, both Twinsluts will slap their pussies 25 times.

New Rule: Every time the Twinsluts orgasm, they will become slightly more attracted to each other.

Old Rule: The French class has a designated Slut role. Whichever female student receives the Slut role will be ****, everyday, to record a video of themselves masturbating until they cum three times. Anytime the Slut gets a grade below a C+ on an assignment in the French class, they will upload all of the videos of them masturbating to all of their social media accounts. If the female student with the Slut role attempts to cheat on an assignment, quiz, test, or any other form of work for the French class, regardless of their success in getting away with it, will begin their masturbation video for that day with them slapping their pussy 250 times, punctuating each slap with "I'm a dumb slut who needs to cheat to succeed." The Slut role can only be given to a female student in their senior year who is 18 years old.

New rule: As part of Ovulation, women now enter into heat. During Ovulation, they will become incredibly horny, to the point of being incapable of coherent thought.

New rule: Women can now only masturbate outdoors, completely in the nude. They are incapable of masking their sound or otherwise attempting to be quiet, and will always moan, dirty talk, and otherwise make sexual noises at incredibly loud volumes.

New rule: Once women begin masturbating, they cannot stop until they cum. Everyone, except for Michael, is incapable of remembering this fact.

"Oooooh, I like the idea of toying with everyone's memory on something like that. Pretty creative."

"Yeah, I figured it would make masturbation an interesting thing to be caught doing. Now women are just **** to sit there, still rubbing themselves, while whoever caught them or whatever they're late for goes unattended to."

"Huh? Oh, you're referring to that rule...god that's powerful..."

"Yeah...maybe we should move on from that one."

New rule: Female masturbation is incredibly slow, and often takes 45 minutes to one hour to cum, on average. However, having sex results in an orgasm after around 2-3 minutes, on average.

New rule: Ovulation now lasts 2-3 days, on average.

New rule: Whenever a woman consumes a man's semen, they will become slightly more addicted to drinking that specific man's semen. The only way to ease the cravings is by masturbating.

"Oh, forgot about that one."

"Yeah, I was about to ask if that's why you wanted me to suck you off tonight and tomorrow."

"Nope. I just like blowjobs." She giggled at that.

"Fair, I guess."

New Rule: Eleanor Moore Now has H cup breasts, with nipples 4 times more sensitive than that of an average humans.

New Rule: Eleanor Moore's lactation now mirrors her level of arousal, with ovulation resulting in her producing four gallons per day. If her tits become too full, they will begin to simply leak the milk produced.

"Oh, here's an idea! What if instead of mirroring her arousal, how full her tits are now represents how close she is to an orgasm! That way, she's constantly **** to become gradually more and more horny, and the only way she can cum is by being milked?"

"Damn, that's a good idea. Hang on, let me write that in..." I quickly erased the line, and replaced it with:

New Rule: How close Eleanor Moore is to an orgasm is directly correlated with how full her breasts are with milk. If her breasts become too full, and Eleanor Moore is on the verge of an orgasm, the excess breast milk will simply leak out of her nipples. In addition, Eleanor Moore is only capable of orgasming if she is actively milked, and being only partially milked results in her closeness to an orgasm being set to the amount of breast milk she still has in her breasts.

"There. That seems better." Julie nodded in agreement.

New Rule: Whenever Eleanor Moore gets her milk on a person or an object she did not intend to, she must lick up the milk she produced upon said location until it is clean of all milk. She will then profusely apologize for getting her milk on the location. If the person or persons involved do not accept her apology, she will allow them to fuck her until they orgasm. If the person is a man, she will let them cum inside of whichever hole she has chosen to be fucked in. If the person is a woman, she will eat them out.

Old Rule: Eleanor Moore got"Michael's Milkslut" branded on her left ass cheek a month ago.

New Rule: Eleanor Moore is not allowed to milk herself, and must beg people to milk or suck her tits for her. Aside from the owner of the Rulebook, There is a 99% chance that they will refuse.

New Rule: When aroused thoroughly enough, Eleanor Moore will only be capable of communicating via mooing. This will always deeply embarrass her.

Without saying anything, I edited the rule to now read as:

New Rule: When Eleanor Moore's breasts are over half full with breast milk, she is only capable of communicating via mooing. This will always deeply embarrass her.

"Yeah, that clarifies things a bit more. I mean, what does the rulebook even consider 'aroused thoroughly enough'?"

"I don't know, but she certainly was mooing earlier today. Guess we might hear more mooing from her now."

Old Rule: Because of her big tits and lactation, many of Eleanor Moore's peers mocked her with cow or milk related nicknames, such as Dairy Mary or Ol' Bessie. Often times, Eleanor Moore's peers will still refer to her by these names. This will always deeply embarrass her.

New Rule: Jessica is only capable of holding the job of prostitute. Her prices are $1 for handjob, $2 for titjob, $5 for a blowjob, $10 to fuck her pussy, and $20 for either a creampie or to fuck her ass.

New Rule: As part of her job as a prostitute, Jessica must make 20 men cum every day. If she fails to do so, she will pay Michael $50 for every man she didn't make cum.

New Rule: Jessica is incapable of cumming unless she pays Michael $200.

New Rule: Jessica is incapable of lying to Michael.

New Rule: Jessica is no longer allowed to wear clothing, unless it is explicitly sexual in nature.

New Rule: Whenever Michael snaps his fingers, Julie will immediately teleport to Michael's location.

Old Rule: Avery Bowie's name is, and forever has been, Fuckslut. Fuckslut's pronouns are 'it'. Whenever Fuckslut refers to itself, instead of using 'I' or 'Me', it'll use variations of 'These Holes' or 'This Pussy'.

Old Rule: Fuckslut lives to fuck. More than anything else, Fuckslut loves sex in every form, and will often flash, flirt, or otherwise arouse people it considers hot.

Old Rule: Fuckslut is incapable of becoming pregnant or contracting or spreading STDs.

Old Rule: Fuckslut is bisexual, and is incredibly skilled at pleasuring both men and women in any way imaginable.

New Rule: Fuckslut's mouth and asshole are now erogenous zones equal in pleasure to its pussy. Fuckslut's favorite place to get fucked is her ass.

New Rule: Fuckslut can control the size and shape of its ass and tits at will.

New Rule: Whenever Fuckslut orgasms, it will completely replenish all of Fuckslut's human needs, such as hunger, thirst, stamina, and hygiene.

"Wow, that's a lot of rules for just one day..."

"Oh! Just remembered a few more I need to add!"

New Rule: Eleanor Moore cannot develop back problems or any spinal issues due to her large breasts.

New Rule: Julie's biggest fetish is now Misogyny. Putting women in their place and supporting men now physically arouses Julie.

New Rule: The women of the world now exist on a sexual hierarchy, with higher tiers in the hierarchy now having more rights and better societal standings. The tiers, in order of most to least powerful in the hierarchy, are Wives, Fiancees, and Girlfriends, which possess rights comparable to men, and Slaves, Cunts (Women worthy of being fucked in their pussies), Anal Sluts (Women worthy of being fucked in their assholes), Oral Sluts (Women worthy of sucking cocks), Plastic Fuckers (Women who may fuck their assholes with dildos), Plastic Suckers (Women who may suck dildos), and Masturbators are the hierarchies inferior to men. All women's starting position in life is as a Masturbator, or a woman so inferior to men that they aren't allowed to pleasure themselves unless it's outdoors, in the nude, with only their own hands. Only men are capable of changing a woman's position in the hierarchy.

"Wow. That's, uh...that's a big one. That might just change everything."

"Yeah."

"Fuck, it's so goddamn hot..."

"Yeah..."

"...may I ask what role I am?" I turned my head, and looked deep into her eyes. Her worried expression made me think, long and hard, about what label I wanted to give our relationship. After all, I did treat her, for the most part, like an equal, and I wanted to establish that dynamic even while being in control of her. I sighed, and nodded.

"Yeah, I think you're my girlfriend." Her eyes lit up.

"Oh my god, really!?" I had to shush her squeal of excitement. Her joy changed to panic, then to suppressed glee. She happily wiggled next to me, then hugged me. She brought her mouth close to my ear, and happily whispered, "Now let me show you just how thankful I am."

She slid out of the hug, and down to my cock, where she freed it from my pants and began instantly slurping it down. I grinned, and closed my eyes, letting myself drift off to sleep.

Thank you, God.