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Chapter 11 by fantaghiro
What's next?
Sarah returns that night
You waited up anxiously for her, concerned about how her night had gone. When she came back near midnight, she was still laughing — not the warm, low laugh he knew, but a higher, careless sound. She smelled like bubblegum vodka and someone else’s perfume.
Sarah was in a great mood when she walked in. You were shocked to see that your hypnotic suggestions had held up - she was still acting like Renee. You gave her the command to go back into a trance and quickly returned her to herself. Her mood remained buoyant.
“It worked,” she said, dropping onto the couch. “They didn’t suspect a thing. For a few hours… I was her.”
And then, more quietly, almost to herself: “It felt… natural.”
You felt a knot tighten in your stomach but you weren't sure why.
Sarah was still pumped from the success of her night out. "It was so amazing ... the best night out I've had in years!" she exclaimed.
She gave a small jump of joy, embracing you, then giving you a kiss. "Thanks James! You're the greatest! I couldn't do this without you!"
She then pulled you into the bedroom to 'celebrate', explaining that the evening of dancing with cute guys rubbing against her made her incredibly horny. Though you felt weird, with Sarah dressed and seeming so much like the real Renee, you couldn't deny how attractive she looked. Even after her busy night, Sarah's youthful energy let her outlast you, and you dozed off within the hour.
What's next?
The Ultimate Transplant
Someone you know is given a new body & life
PLEASE ADD CHAPTERS! A close friend or family member is horribly injured in an accident. As they lay dying in the emergency room, another patient dies of a brain aneurysm. Both of them are organ donors, so a surgeon decides it's the perfect opportunity for him to try an experimental surgery. He transplants the victim's higher brain (the cerebellum) to the donor's body in an attempt to 'save' a life. Amazingly it works. But the surgery was not approved so the hospital convinces the families to keep quiet, arguing that revealing this operation to the public would bring never-ending media attention to all involved. That means that the patient will have to publicly assume the identity of the donor. What will this mean to your friends and family? Who else will you tell? Although you will spend a lot of time and effort giving support, how will all this alter your relationship to the patient? And how will he or she adapt to a complete change of body and identity? Many transformation stories focus on the change or victim, so I thought it would be interesting to instead have the POV be someone who sees the change from the outside. Writers feel free to explore a change in age, gender, class or ethnicity - and the repercussions that change would have on the main character (and others). This is from my writing.com story with thanks and credit to other contributors, especially Wassel, Wordsmitty, and Enigma. Please see the original at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1886863-The-Ultimate-Transplant for the original authors' posts. Also you should check out Wassel's version at https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1974478-The-Transplant ).
Updated on Jun 24, 2026
by takacube
Created on Jan 19, 2021
by fantaghiro
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