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Chapter 8 by blank97 blank97

Do you want to know about Brad, the party or do you want to continue with The Writer?

Party(Amanda's POV)

Note: In this chapter Amanda is having a vision of what really happened (before Writer's punishment) in the party. She is not aware of it like last time, she is just seeing it.

Warning: If you have a problem with reading Amanda getting humiliated, you should skim past the second half which is after the horizontal separator line. A better option would be to read these events from John's POV. Link for that is given at the end of this chapter. Remember to 'end game' if you are in game mode before clicking on the link.


I was in the shower massaging my boobs with one hand while fingering my pussy with the other when I noticed that the door started opening and John was the one opening it. I was so shocked by this, I just stared at him for a moment. But I quickly gained some sense and yelled,"GET OUTTA HERE, YOU PERV!".

He closed the door while faking an apology. After what he saw, he must be pretty happy with himself not sorry. I realised he must have broken the lock or something to try to take a peek while I shower but that little shit got more than he imagined. "Oh! what have I done?" I thought to myself while I quickly cleaned myself, wore the towel and checked if too much skin was showing. When I got out John was standing just outside with an evil grin on his face.

I rebuked him for entering the bathroom while I was still in there and he said to me," Maybe you are a secret exhibitionist who left the door open so that I could look." The balls on that guy telling me I was the one who left the door open while I clearly remember locking the door. Even though I knew he must have done something to the door, I let him have this little victory and went to my room to plan for the big ****.

I didn't want to be near him in just a towel after what he saw so I went to my room and got dressed for work. On the way to work, I called Suzan to tell her that John broke the lock of the bathroom. I knew she hated him too and she would tell all this to Kyle. Kyle had a crush on me since college but I didn't want a fight loving bull as my boyfriend so he started dating my friend,Suzan. I knew he would kill John at the christmas party tonight, if he knew what John saw. But I didn't want anybody to know exactly what he saw so I just told Suzan that he tried to take a peek while I shower. I knew even this would be enough to get Kyle to do something about John.

At the club , Kyle confronted John. John tried to talk his way out of this situation as he knew he didn't stand a chance against Kyle in a fight. But Kyle surprised even me when he said John had to strip naked and dance for everybody as a punishment for trying to see a girl naked. Even strangers around them started chanting "Strip! Strip! Strip!". So he started his striptease.

When John was down to just his underwear, I told him to stop. I didn't want to see his tiny dick. But Suzan said she wanted to see it. She was his ex girlfriend so she had seen it already but I had no interest in his dick. But before I could say anything to Suzan, Kyle started dragging John out of the club. I saw that John's pants were on the floor which meant he didn't have the keys to the flat. I called Chloe who was a college girl who lived across our apartment with two of her friends and told her if she and her friends go home early they will find a surprise. Micheal and Emily came to talk to me and told me to take John's belongings into a bag.

After enjoying the party for a couple of hours or so, I went back to the flat and was happy to find him lying in front of the door in just his underwear. There were a lot of marker drawings all over his face and body. On his forehead "cocksucker" was written, on one cheek "sissy" on the other 'a cock spewing cum in his mouth' was drawn. On his chest boobs were drawn with "I would suck your cock if you pay for my implants" written beneath it. On his stomach, an arrow towards his dick with "tiny dick" above it. I clicked some photos and started recording discreetly while I kicked him on his butt and told him to get up.

He woke up and checked his underwear. He said,"Did I just dream all of it?"and lowered his boxers' backside to look at his ass which was red as a tomato. Apparently someone spanked him hard. When he turned around I saw that on his back there was an arrow pointing to his ass with "Insert dick here to make money" written over it. I was glad I was recording it all.

I asked him,"Oh my god! Who spanked you so hard? Your ass is red as a tomato." He quickly pulled up his boxers and told me to open the door quickly. I could not contain my laughter any longer so I burst out laughing and told him,"If you wanted to check whether you were dreaming or not you should have just looked at your boobs."

He asked me what I meant by 'boobs' and looked down and finally saw all the graffiti. As soon as I opened the door he ran to the mirror. I gave him some time to look and when I thought he had seen enough I went near him to give the bag that contained his clothes and showed him my phone. As I scrolled through all the photos, the look on his face was one of shock but by the time I played the video he started fearing what I was going to do with all this. I told him if he just behaved nicely from now on, I wouldn't show it to anyone. He said," Please, ma'am don't show it to anyone. I will behave nicely from now on. Can I please go take a shower to remove this ink?" I gave him my permission. It felt great to finally get some respect that I deserved.


For the next couple of days, I enjoyed being called ma'am. After that I told him to make breakfast everyday and wash my laundry with hands. I could see on his face that he didn't like being ordered around but knew that he had ****. Then came the last day of the year and we went to the usual club again to party. I told him he had to buy and bring me my drinks and he obeyed. In fact he obeyed too much and bought me a lot of drinks. After I had too many drinks, I told him to stop and just then Emily challenged me for strip beer pong. I told her that I was already very drunk so it wouldn't be fair. But she said that she had been drinking too and reminded me how I used to say in college that I was the best beer pong player. Since she mentioned college days, I agreed but on the condition that we would stop after someone was in just their underwear and return the clothing immediately at that point.

I won the first round (I managed to throw balls in all 10 of her cups by the time she threw in 8 of mine. I missed some too but she was just terrible at this. Maybe she was more drunk than I). After losing the first round, Emily chose to remove her shirt instead of shoes or socks. I asked her, "Do you want an audience to see you lose?" as I saw many people gathering around us forming a circle to look.

I lost the next round and removed my shoes (I wasn't a slut like her). Some people booed, some left but by the time this game was coming to an end, there was a crowd around us. Somehow I kept losing and I was down to my bra and panties while she had just lost the shirt in the very first round. I was feeling tricked but I wanted to win at least one other round (maybe it was the **** talking) so I thought to continue the game. But before I could say something Emily told me I lost and the game was over. I tried to tell her to continue but this time John interrupted me and proposed an "ultimate bet"(as he put it). The bet was "Just one cup on each side whoever loses it becomes the stripper for the party and she will have to strip completely nude and dance erotically for everyone's enjoyment."

I thought about it, it was risky but "you have to risk it to win it". But again Emily rejected this offer before I could accept it so I mocked her for being afraid to lose. Emily ignored me and started whispering something to John and he just went away. I tried to convince her but she was not budging an inch. Before I could convince her two bouncers came and dragged me out of the club. As I was being dragged out, I saw John calling someone.

When the bouncers kicked me out, there was a homeless man pissing on the wall opposite to the door. They told him to go somewhere else and me to never come back as they threw me right beside him. What happened next could only be because of my extremely bad luck. I was telling those bouncers to "fuck off" just as the hobo was turning(while still pissing) and he ended up pissing all over my face, in my mouth and in my bra. The bouncers laughed as I spat out his piss and went inside.

The hobo offered me a blanket in exchange for a blow job, I told him to fuck off and ran straight towards home. But when I finally stood before my apartment's door, I reached for the key in my jacket and realized that I ran all this way just to stand before the door. Then I heard footsteps followed by giggles coming from behind me so I turned only to find out that the three college girls who lived in the apartment right in front of me were coming right towards me. When I turned, their giggles turned into hysterical laughter, I realized they saw the hobo's pee all over my body.

Victoria said,"Did the little girl peed her panties?"

Rose said,"No, look there is more pee on her bra than on her panties. She probably tried to suck a guy who peed on her and kicked her out just like that."

Chloe said,"No, I think that is how she bathes."

I said to them, "I am a former president of Alpha Delta Phi. If any of you is a member, I order you to give me your clothes."

Chloe said, "Oh! You are ordering us and why should we obey? Listen bitch, we are not in that sorority and you are the reason, so we want payback."

Rose said while almost crying, "How can she forget what she did to us?"

Victoria said to Rose, "She is just a mean bitch. It doesn't matter if she doesn't remember. Don't show your weakness like that, after we are done with her, she will never forget."

Chloe said to me, "Ignore them and start stripping. You were supposed to be a stripper tonight anyways. Remember to dance while you strip and after you are done stripping start masturbating and maintain an erotic vibe or you will be stuck out here in the cold."

"Who told you that? Did someone put you up to this?" I asked her.

Chloe started going towards her door and Victoria and Rose followed her. I realized they were really going to leave me out here in the cold so I said, "WAIT! I will do it." After hearing this they stopped and looked back. Since I had ****, I danced, discarded my bra and panties, and started masturbating. This was humiliating as it is but when I saw they started recording. I protested ,"Hey at least don't record it."

Chloe said,"Well don't worry, we won't show it to any one." I didn't believe her for a second but I had **** so I just had to find a way to get that video afterwards.

I was kneeling in front of them, massaging my breasts to "maintain an erotic vibe" but I felt some warm liquid being poured on my breast so I looked up and saw that all three of them had attached a funnel and were peeing on me. I remembered using a similar funnel on pledges that didn't make the cut and realized I must have done the same to them.

Just then I heard someone walking up the stairs(our elevator has been broken for what seems like forever). I pleaded with the girls to let me inside but they wouldn't budge. The voice started getting louder, whoever this person was, he/she could see me at any moment. I had to protect my identity at least so I covered my face with only thing nearby, my underwear. So I wore my panties on my face and bra on my head and the girls started laughing but didn't stop me from wearing it. Just as I wore it, someone opened the door to stairway and entered the hallway of the 4th floor(my floor). It was Mr. Johnson, the old perv who lived on the same floor(this apartment building has 4 flats on each floor). For some reason, as he entered, I came. It was probably because of the fear of being seen by some stranger who I could hear ascending the stairs but couldn't see, but these girls thought I came by seeing him and started laughing hysterically.

Rose said, "You came by seeing him" Mr. Johnson asked the girls who I was and they told him I was just a stripper. He came near me, fished out his cock after unzipping, and started stroking it. I tried to get up and run away but Victoria and Rose held me down by grabbing my hands and pushing down. Chloe was still recording. Just as he shot his load all over my tits, someone yelled at him from behind and he turned to look. It was Mrs. Johnson, she said, "BOB, How could you do this to me? You got it up after so many days and you blew the load on this whore."

"It's not my fault, Evelyn. This slut made me do it.", Mr. Johnson lied.

"Is that right? I will deal with you later." said Mrs. Johnson as she came behind him and smacked him on his butt with the cane she uses while walking.

"Girls, hold her like you did that young man a few days ago. And is wearing underwear on your head a new fashion? Seriously, Kids these days are just going crazy for fashion."

I realized she was the one who spanked John and she was going to do the same to me. Victoria and Rose **** me to stand up and bent me by the waist so that my ass was towards her. She started to swat my ass using her cane. For an old hag she used quite a bit of ****, it felt like my ass was on fire. When she was satisfied with the color of my ass she stopped and said," Yes, now it is red enough. Girls make sure this whore cleans the mess she had made." and went inside her flat after smacking Mr. Johnson again (this time on his side thigh) and taking him inside with her as he was stroking his dick again which was erect again. I could swear I heard her say "Now, use that on me." as she went inside.

The girls now told me I had to lick the floor to clean my cum and all their piss. Of course, I protested but I had to give in to their demands when they threatened to tell Mrs. Johnson who I really was. And they recorded even this humiliating act I was **** to perform. After all that was over, they formed a circle and started whispering. I was afraid they might **** me to stay outside even after all that, and I was right. They told me I was not "erotic enough" and quickly went inside locking their door. I kept banging on their door so they told me they would give me a blanket and a flask of hot coffee in exchange for my bra and panties. I gave them bra and panties as a flask of hot coffee and blanket seems like a good deal. But they had probably spiked the coffee as I fainted after drinking it.

The next thing I remember is John was pissing in my open mouth. I woke up when the warm liquid hit my mouth and quickly spat out the piss that went in my mouth. John was recording it so I tried to snatch his phone but he quickly put it in his pocket and said, "Wow! You are not even trying to cover." I quickly realized that I was completely nude(those bitches probably stole the blanket) and covered as much as I could. I told him to stop looking and open the door quickly but he was more interested in laughing. He gave me a bag that contained all my clothes and stuff. I told him to open the door(I didn't want to ruin my clothes by piss and cum). But he told me I had to delete all the files I had on him. I said, "I could just email all this to your boss."

"Well I could do the same and you are nude while I was wearing my underwear."

"Do you think I showed you all I have?" I bluffed but I figured if he got spanked like me those girls must have recorded it. I might be able to convince him I had those too. He thought for a moment and said, "Well, you made me a servant all these days. I had to wash your laundry by hand. I can't just forget that."

"Ok, what if I wash your laundry for the next week. Deal?", I said extending my hand.

"Deal. But I am not touching that hand. I don't know where it's been."

Everything started fading.....


Note: If you want to know more, you could read these events in John's POV by clicking here. Beware that if game mode is on, clicking on links will return you to current chapter so press 'end game' before clicking on the link and you can just start the game again to come back. Otherwise, click on the similar link at the end of that chapter to come back.

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