Part 3: Survive The Night

"Okay, so we're gonna try Ruby's path again" said Lindsey, "and hopefully find an official ending"

"Oh come on" said Susan, "what I did totally counts as an ending. Also Engin hasn't created any official endings yet"

"What has Engin got?"

"An end to the first night"

"Okay, we'll just try to reach that, then"

READING IN PROGRESS

"So Lindsey decided to take the stairs" said Susan.

"It seemed more sensible than going near junkies" said Lindsey, "I think Engin should have stated that Ruby would be unable to do anything if she did get attacked on the stairs BEFORE we made the choice. That would have made the decision much harder. The way she did it seem like there was no reason not to use the stairs"

"So Lindsey had chose between two packages" said Susan, "one job was a low risk, low reward, the other a high risk, high reward"

"Well, because it is not stated how much money I need, I went with the easy job" said Lindsey, "if it had been stated that I really needed the 1000$ quickly, I might have chosen the high risk job. I also decided not to peek as there was no reason to do so. I'd be taking a risk for no reason whatsoever"

"Is it just me or does Engin keep telling us the risks behind the choices after they've been made? This is a weird way to set up choices"

"Apparently, the package had guns since the score says we didn't see them even though we now know about them when our character doesn't. This is killing the immersion"

"Lindsey decided to avoid the party"

"Our objective this time is to survive the night so I didn't wanna take any unnecessary risks" said Lindsey.

"Returning to the post office, Ruby's boss got the crap beat outta him for reasons that apparently relate to the risky job"

"But we survived the night"

"Marcie and Gina were certainly right about the lack of sex in this route" said Susan, "I think our critique of this story is very similar to their's"

"Apparently, we have act like complete dumbasses if we want sex in this story"

"Until next time, read-"

"Oh no, we're doing the risky job. This review is too similar to Marcie and Gina's"

"Didn't the two also read through it again?" asked Susan.

READING IN PROGRESS AGAIN

"Obviously, I did not look inside the package" said Lindsey.

"The choice on giving the package to this woman is better" said Susan, "did the client's plans change or is she just trying to steal the package?"

"Well, I decided to feign ignorance as there was no proof that the plan had changed"

"Returning to work, we find our boss is dead and whoever did it took the reward money"

"Until next tim-"

"Nope, we're doing another round" said Lindsey, "I wanna see what happens if we hand the package to the woman"

READING IN PROGRESS AGAIN AGAIN

"Stalking Cat night club?" asked Lindsey, "I assume the job the woman offered Ruby is to be a stripper or possibly a prostitute"

"It just leads to the same route" said Susan, "well, until ne-"

"We're doing a fourth round"

"Why are we doing these re-reads?"

"The original read through isn't long enough and the previous re-reads are even shorter. Lets see what happens if we open the package"

READING IN PROGRESS AGAIN AGAIN AGAIN

"So the package turns out to contain a photo of master ties Lilah" said Lindsey, "and Lilah will kill anyone with information on her. This explains what happened to the boss"

"So we went back and it turned out the gang of some guy called Claw killed them" said Susan, "why did the boss die in one route and just get beat up in another? All we did was take a different package"

"I ran like hell"

"But she was captured, stripped naked, **** and is probably gonna be a sex ****"

"Yeah, like I said before, its clear you have to act like a complete dumbass to get the sex scenes in this story"

"Unt... we're not doing yet enough re-read, are we?" asked Susan.

"No, this is it. Until, ne-" said Lindsey.

"Until next time, readers"

"Susan!"

"You kept interrupting me on this. The last thing I want is for you to say my line"