Part 3: Really, Gina?! You serious?!

"Okay, so question" said Susan, "why has the will of the universe only cursed Gina? And I'm not just asking because it hasn't cursed Marcie for some reason. Why go for a high school student over a mass murderer or a war criminal?"

"Well, its never actually stated that didn't happen" said Lindsey, "it just doesn't factor into this story"

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"Lindsey has some good ideas on how to deal with Gina" said Susan, "like with the vibrator and the urinating, especially making her get horny from it"

"But damn, her mother. I can see she had a point" said Lindsey, "given the way her daughter behaves, I can understand why she wouldn't trust the word of what appeared to be her lackeys. However, I can clearly see that a lot of Gina's issues stem from her"

"Really?"

"Yeah, she just doesn't come off as the abusive psycho she's made out to be be, more like a normal mother having to deal with a gigantic shit of a daughter. Since she is supposed to be the reason that her daughter is the way she is, it instead makes Gina come off as hiding behind weak excuses"

"Oh, you mean issues regarding the way Gina has been written" said Susan, "I can't believe Marcie feels sorry for her just because she's not living in luxury like she imagined. If she thinks this makes her mom an abusive psycho, SHE must be a haughty rich girl, being spoiled rotten by her own parents"

"And not only do Frank, Tom and Susan have it far worse than Gina but they have it far worse BECAUSE of Gina"

"Yeah, I felt really bad for Gina when she used me as a sex ****" said Susan, sarcastically.

"In fact, I'd say that Gina deserves to have an abusive parent" said Lindsey, "there, I said it and anyone who thinks I'm a dick for it but has no problem with telling Susan she has to earn the forgiveness of her own abuser is a bitch"

"Yeah, Gina's about as sympathetic as the shit we made her eat on our route" said Susan.

"If she was supposed to be sympathetic, it should have been shown from the start" said Lindsey, "have her do something good, show her mom **** her. I suspect that Gambio didn't originally intend to go down this road"

"I liked it better when she was just an asshole victim and hate sink. This feels ****"

"Moving onto the subject of Marcie. I don't even believe her story of how she got her scar"

"You think she cut herself while fainting due to the bad grammar of my suicide note?"

"Gambio seems better at resisting jokes than Unknown7 even if they both have stupid names so I doubt that. The thing is that I find it hard to believe Susan would have been able to muster the courage to cut Marcie even if Gina ordered it. She'd be more afraid of the consequences of such a felony. I doubt Marcie would have cut herself but I suspect there's something else to it that she's not saying"

"Yeah, given how quickly Marcie begins bullying people and her contempt for boys, I imagine she'd be more likely join in if she saw Gina bullying one. This smells like a retcon made to justified Marcie's earlier betrayal"

"Oh no, its allured to multiple times before this but it actually makes some of the earlier scenes between them harsher in hindsight. Marcie now actually comes off as emotionally abusive to Susan who seems to be suffering from some kinda trauma. I mean the way she flinches and how Marcie now seems to have been calling her a monster"

"It's pretty bad when the person who cuts you ends up coming across as more sympathetic than you do. Damn, this story is dark. And this game doesn't make a lot of sense. What actually stops Gina from breaking free after the year is over? And it seems blatantly rigged in Marcie's favour"

"This version of Emma supposedly reminds Marcie of her past self" said Susan, "you know, the shy, quiet doormat that Marcie is described as early on but never behaves like. Apart from being nerds, they've got nothing in common"

"And if Marcie was worried about the curse disappearing, she should have gone with Susan's piss on Gina idea. That way, Gina is no longer able to rule and Marcie could easily put the number two Susan in her place if she tried anything. I mean for all Marcie knew, the curse could have disappeared at any moment during the past few weeks and then Gina would have been able to eat her alive"

"Oh my god" laughed Susan, "you know what this means? For all the times Marcie called other me a moron..."

Susan laughed again.

"This other me is actually smarter than Marcie!"

Susan fell down, laughing at the irony.

"There's something else I don't understand" said Susan, "wouldn't it make more sense for the chess club to be male and the tennis club female?"

"Why?" asked Lindsey.

"Well, like I said in part 2, how many girls are into chess? I mean no wonder its only got three people. And with tennis, who would masturbate to a guy wearing that outfit? A girl wearing those tight shorts is certainly more erotic that nose picking"

Suddenly Susan vomited.

"Are you okay?" asked Lindsey.

"I made the mistake of watching one of those nose picking videos Gambio mentioned" said Susan.

Susan vomited some more.

"Okay, Marcie clean it up" said Susan.

Marcie was brought in naked, crawling on her hands and knees. She began to lick up the vomit.

"Hey, Marcie, what do you think of this CHYOA story?" asked Lindsey.

MARCIE READING IN PROGRESS

"This moron version of myself disgusts me!” said Marcie.

Lindsey and Susan both laughed as Marcie was dragged away.

"Well, I just find those clubs being gender specific to be unrealistic but onto the volleyball clubs. Rina is too similar a name to Gina and admitting that's dumb doesn't change the fact that its dumb"

"Shouldn't Rina have been cursed for being such a bigot?" asked Susan.

"Apparently other people being cursed takes away from the core premise of the story for some reason. I agree it doesn't make any sense that she and Marcie have been spared"

"Wouldn't it have made more sense to make Ben and the Leaders the sexist douchebags instead of Rina and the Wildcats? The way Gambio did it made me side with the Leaders. The fact that them winning would make Gina their personal fucktoy is just another reason to root for them. It would have been awesome if that really was Marcie's plan all along"

Susan groaned.

"Why does he keep teasing me with better ideas than what actually ends up happening?" she asked, "I mean first he has Gina just get money from Marel instead of getting fucked in the ass for 5 bucks and now this"

"The reason Marcie sides with the Wildcats is extremely petty" said Lindsey, "from a purely pragmatic standpoint, it would have made more sense for her to chose the Leaders. I mean the fact that the Wildcats have to resort to cheating indicates that the Leaders are obviously more skilled"

"Aren't nerds supposed be smart? And how is Gina supposed to look dignified while publicly masturbating?"

"I think that was sarcasm"

It was Lindsey's turn to groan.

"If I didn't know any better, I'd say Marcie and Rina were being set up as the villains but Gambio is clearly trying to make me out to be the token evil teammate. Unfortunately, this other version of me instead comes off as the token GOOD teammate"

"What made Marcie think I expected Gina to not pee at home?" asked Susan, "I know other me didn't state that the pee command wouldn't apply at home but it seems too obvious to mention. Wait a minute, other me expected Marcie to grant her an extension. The same Marcie who rewarded her loyalty by making her Gina's ****. I take it all back, she is a moron"

"I don't know about that" said Lindsey, "I think she might have just been **** for some emotional support from literally anyone. Marcie and Gina's **** has clearly messed her up"

"Why does Gambio hate me? He obviously intended me to be a hate sink and I don't know why. Did I do something on a previous route?"

"Unfortunately, he hasn't give us any reason to hate Susan. As a result, she's iconically ended up being the most sympathetic character because of how everyone else treats her. We're meant to view her as a pathetic coward but she comes off like she's just broken inside and unlike Marcie and Gina, she doesn't actually do anything wrong. We're meant to think that Gina is the way she is because of her mom. Well, I get the impression that Susan is this way because of Gina"

"But Gina is the one we should feel sorry for because she doesn't live in luxury" said Susan, "I see now why Unknown7 promised us free counselling and offered to pay us for this without any prompting. This is driving me to drink"

"Yes, the whole thing just makes me hate Marcie and Gina more and more" said Lindsey, "well, at least Marcie frees Susan. Unfortunately, the Leaders are still slaves thanks to a game that she rigged"

"On a lighter note, Gina has a dream about Saber and Rin Tohsaka. Is she a closet nerd?"

"Yeah, that seems outta character for her. Wait, how do you know about Fate/Stay Night?"

"I watched both animes at Vanessa's" said Susan, "we don't mention it at school because we don't wanna be seen as a nerds. In fact, a lot of members of the Royal Magnificence are nerdier than they let on. Also, my mom would beat the shit outta me if she found out"

"Yeah, domestic **** is so much lighter" said Lindsey, "its possible Gina has some interests she'd rather her cronies didn't know about. Honestly, no one in this story comes off the way they're presented as"

"I have a good picture in my head of Marcie as an abusive moron, Gina as having petty reasons to be evil, Gina's mom as a normal mother, other me as a broken down victim and Lindsey as the only sane woman. Frank and Emma are pretty much the only ones who's characterisation seems to match Gambio's intention"

"What is even the point behind Frank? You could take him out the story and nothing would change"

"Gambio says he was more of a test to see how the readership would react if he introduced some malesub humiliation. The answer is not great"

"Then why keep doing it?" asked Lindsey, "if nobody likes Frank, or Cutie, as he's called, he should have either made him more dominant, killed him off or put him on the bus. And why introduce more malesub humiliation with the Leaders?"

"Yeah, it all seems outta place in a story thats supposed to be about a GIRL being humiliated. Well, its Frank who has decided to punish Gina with hot springs so maybe he'll be important later"

"Until next time, readers"