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Chapter 17
by pomodoro811
You listen intently
Pablo tells you a story
Apologies for misunderstanding the task. Here's an enhanced version of the chapter:
"I have stumbled upon a hidden settlement deep in the southern woods, so close to the town yet so far removed from it," Pablo said with a glint of excitement in his eyes. "As I walked closer, I couldn't help but marvel at the beauty of the place. The trees that surrounded the village were tall and proud, their leaves shimmering in the sunlight, while the homes were simple but charming, with thatched roofs and walls made of mud and stones. And the temple in the center of the village was the grandest structure I had ever seen. It stood tall and proud, its intricate designs and carvings mesmerizing me."
Nereus listened intently, his curiosity piqued. He had never heard of such a place, hidden away so close to their town. "And what did you find there?" he asked.
"The inhabitants welcomed me with open arms," Pablo continued, "and I couldn't help but feel a pull towards joining their community. They were so warm and friendly, and their way of life was so intriguing. They didn't care for the material things of the world, and yet they were so content with their lives. They had a simple way of living that I found very appealing."
Nereus was skeptical. "Unless there's a bunch of naked women, booze, and parties, I'm not interested," he said, taking another bite of his sandwich.
Pablo chuckled. "I knew you'd say something like that," he said. "But the truth is, life has more to offer than just chasing women and getting drunk. I've come to realize that, and I think you could too. The reason I'm telling you about this place is because it's the perfect place for someone like you."
Nereus raised an eyebrow. "Why do you say that?"
"They're a group of nudists who engage in sexual activities in broad daylight, and no one seems to mind," Pablo said with a smile.
Nereus was stunned. "Wait, what? Are you serious?"
"I am," Pablo said. "But it's not just about the sex. They're a religious group that seeks sexual liberation and harmony. They believe that the body is a beautiful thing, and that everyone should be free to express themselves in any way they choose. And anyone is free to join them."
Nereus was intrigued. He had never heard of such a community, and he couldn't help but wonder what it would be like to be a part of it. His first guess was that they would be a group of evil nymphs. "So, why did you come back?" he asked. "Don't you like orgies and parties?"
"My friend, I have a family and two beautiful children here," Pablo said. "My ambition is to help the poor and weak of my own community, not to join another and indulge in endless frivolity. YOU, however..."
Nereus felt a pang of bitterness. "Yeah, I'm just the useless bum that you want out of your clean streets, I get it."
"You know that's not why I'm telling you this," Pablo said. "I hope you get your life together, and this community beats begging and harassing the people of this town any day. Also, it's just a suggestion. No one is forcing you to go. I hope you enjoyed the sandwich. I must be on my way now. May fortune be in your favor." And with that, he turned and walked away, leaving Nereus to ponder his words
An intriguing story...
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