Notes and comments

Hello all

First, thank you for reading this far. It was been almost a year since I started these two threads for Logan and Zack. It went on longer than I thought it would and that's considering what I left out a couple of things. for example, Ashley's sweet 16 with Logan and Zack hooking up (with girls) and Peter going on a wild fuckfest. I think I will add it later, either here or has a flashback. But I really really want to start the cabin trip.

This would end what I like to call the first phase. I will now start writing the cabin first cabin trip for both our heroes.

Why did I write a backstory? Well to be honest... I like backstories. It helps me (personally) understand the characters better than going through a flashback. And it also helps me practice.

Could I have done it differently? Absolutely. Near the end, I realized that I could have done something very similar and have the main characters already 18 years old. But I still think this was better.

One thing I will ask of you, the reader, is your feedback. What did you like so can continue to do that, and also, what do you think I can improve in my writing style. Place then in the comment section or send me a message thru the site if it is long.

Again thanks for reading and I hope to see you all reading the cabin trip of our heroes.

regards