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Chapter 9 by Regin34 Regin34

What is John's punishment?

No punishment, more suprises

Not so fast.

It was suprising but suddenly some other voice call in my head. Weird, Writer just leave me and I didn't expected it again so fast. But it wasn't the same voice, I'm sure it sounded something diffrent.

Because I'm not the Writer my dear Amanda but some other person with the same power as your creator.

"Wait, don't mess with me. So you want to tell me, there are others who have such power over my world?!

Yep, you are smart enought to get that fast. I like that in fictional characters.

I noticed the time around me is stopped again and John is standing before me frising in waiting for his punishment.

"Umm... Could you tell me about others people with such power? I hope there isn't too much of them..."

Bad news is that, that kind of power is possessed by everyone who read that story even Josh Lancaster has it. Well it does need some spare time and ideas what should happen to you, there are no limits of possibility for your fate Amanda. But good news for you, is there are just a few who want to do that by themself and is fewer than that, for people who could do it right, with good writing, intresitng plot and sexy scenes.

"Wait, what? There is too much of that things! And why my own words sounds diffrent and so many gammatic errors?"

Oh that is simple. My English is realy, realy but honestly realy bad and I don't like making betareading before publish my chapters. But, I'm the secend writer who write something to this story and I chouse your storyline so you should feel honored. You can call me just Writer Two if you like.

"Why I have so bad feeling about this? And why I should started worry about my life? " I said to myself sarcastic, but I know he/she will know about it.

Oh, don't worry I'm not going to kill you but in my opinion your storyline should be change in few places. And I'm curios for reaction of your first writer, so don't take that to yourself okey? But to be honest... I will be honest with you, your world doens't suit me. It is too classic.

"What do you mean by classic? And why..." I gasp when all my clothes are vanish and my hands are tied behing my back, so I standing before John naked as the submise? Wait, where it come to my mind? Oh right, Writer Two.

Correct again my dear! I realy like you! But don't worry, non of your friends and family won't get know about your, let's say adventures. Tell me, do you ever play in DnD?

"Wait what?! What is DnD? And why I have to be naked with tied hands like ****?!!! Oh come on, why you can't just leave me alone?!"

I just told you, I want to see reaction of Writer One. I don't know him/her but I want play in my own way with his/her idea for story. I'm too lazy for creating my own, so I will use this. And for you, be ready for trip, because we will go to world of sword and magic! The perfect place for sexy girls like you.

Probably it was just his magic things, but I realy enjoy being called "sexy", by misterious owner. Before I could answer, ground under my feet disapear and I fall into the light, screaming and moving legs like crazy. I look up and I saw John still standing up to my falling but his clothes started changing.


Where did she land?

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