Chapter 8
by
Zeebop
How does Moonstone use this power against Sue Storm?
Moonstone Makes Sue Storm Take More Risks
The smartphone was like an extension of Moonstone's self. She could feel whenever the Invisible Woman used the phone. Hear her phone calls. Read her texts. Through that strange link, she could see the decision points in Sue Storm's life. The moments of tension. The opportunities.
What was more, she could influence them.
"Some of the other heroines are getting together for margaritas," Janet van Dyne said. "Put the kids to bed, put on something sexy, and meet us at Adonis!"
Sue hesitated. Adonis was a male strip bar. She really shouldn't...
Subtly, imperceptibly, the phone began to vibrate in her hand. The Invisible Woman's head swam, as if she had already taken a shot of tequila. Sue blinked as her line of thought was waylaid, and Jan continued to coax her.
"That...that sounds fun," Sue said. She blinked. "I'll be there in an hour."
In her apartment, Moonstone sat crosslegged. Her eyes closed. Mouth twisted into a smirk. Through her link to Sue's smartphone, she could sense as the heroine chose her dress. An imperceptible nudge pushed Sue to pick a more daring dress than she had initially intended, and the Invisible Woman found herself in a blue-and-white tube dress, blue thong, and matching heels. She blew Reed a kiss, not wanting to smudge her lipstick.
A neon Adonis greeted her as she stepped out of the cab. Seven feet of green womanhood greeted her before the door, She-Hulk smiled wickedly and waved her over. Sue felt her unease fade away as her as she strode forward. Inside, well-muscled men gyrated on the stage. Pitchers of margaritas in bright colors were poured. The assembled heroines were ready to let their hair down.
Moonstone's smile widened. Wondering how far she could push Sue...
What is the riskiest thing that Sue Storm does on her night out?
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DOOMED
Susan Storm is Doomed...She Just Doesn't Know It Yet
Doctor Doom has decided to break up the Fantastic Four by targeting Sue Storm, the Invisible Woman. Yet Reed Richards knows too well the strategies that Doom would try. So Doom decides to enlist a partner to aid him in the downfall of the Invisible Woman...by whatever means necessary!
Updated on Jun 10, 2026
by Zeebop
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