Monica and Jessica's response

"Well, Jess, Marcie and Gina have read out story."

"Did they tell us how to get rid of these geek powers, Monica?"

"They both seem disappointed about the supernatural twist."

"At least they have some standards."

"No, I mean they're upset it didn't focus enough on the harem aspect."

"They're into that stuff? Degenerate! Degenerate!"

"That is an **** reaction."

“Let me ask you a question Gina. Are you familiar with Yu gi-oh?”

“In the original first few chapters of the manga, the plot was actually focused on many different games. From gambles to boardgames etc. It was quite the interesting concept.”

"Hey, Jess, that does sound like a good concept for CaptainAngel77 to use in her future stories."

"It better not include satanic shit like Dungeons and Dragons."

“What I am trying to say here is that the premise is good. This could have been a nice slice of life story about a girl building a harem. The concept is fairly unique. Certainly more unique then this generic highschool fantasy the author turned it into. If only the author had more faith in her original idea.”

"Actually, you're mistaken. This was the original idea. A slice of life story about a girl building a harem that suddenly has fantasy elements added into it."

"Like I said, Monica, Marcie and Gina are degenerates."

"If a bit of lesbian sex is your threshold, you're not gonna last long in my harem."

"I don't wanna be part of your harem!"

“Don't put your feet in my mouth!”

"DEGENERATE!"

"Oh, will you stop that? Anyway, its clear that they don't like the slow burn when it comes to sex. Its just as well that CaptainAngel77 didn't submit Superhero Academia or Monstergirl Academy."

Enrico was taken apart.

Suddenly, **** dealer Henry Pellegrino.

"So not only is our author a degenerate but she doesn't check her grammar."

"I get the feeling they have the opposite problem with our story. Well, the grammatical failures are certainly embarrassing."

“As for the whole girl getting process, its extremely lackluster. Some random girls just join up with Monica and get barely any attention, let alone a sex scene. Does the author know the point of a harem? You don't collect girls like gacha just for the sake of it!”

"Unfortunately, having that many characters makes it impossible to give all of them attention at the same time. Plus, CaptainAngel77 intended for this story to have multiple routes. We will try to have more sex scenes in the future."

"WHAT?!!!"

“Second, I think a story about an oblivious Monica who wants to build an harem, but doesn't really know what that is would be kinda cute as well. There really is a lot of squandered potential here. Frankly, I think CaptainAngel77 should read Ringmaster, where the concept was done very well.”

"Noted."

“You know Marcie. Is it just me or is this story desperately trying to appease us?”

“Its about a lesbian harem, well its supposed to. Main character has a bitch as mother. Then they call us out by name...”

"Thats just a happy accident."

"Someone's mom being a bitch is their fetish?"

"I think Marcie and Gina might have "mommy issues", Jess."

“Heh, if I didn't know it any better I would say she has a crush on you, Marcie.”

“...wouldn't it make more sense if she had a crush on you?”

“No, No, Marcie. It's definitely you.”

"Degen-!"

"Oh, shush it. CaptainAngel77 actually has no idea which one of you is which in the profile picture of this story."

“It is a shame that we never decided to adopt Zeebops format. Otherwise we could haven given her a show.”

"Maybe, we should read his stuff. It might help us with writing sex scenes."

“Next time you do this, you get a spanking.”

"Does Marcie have a crush on CaptainAngel77? Degenerate!"

"Kinky. I guess the slow burn approach was a mistake."

"I'm missing the part where this review helps our situation with your sister and her cyclops."