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Chapter 3 by Zeebop Zeebop

What's next?

Lois & Blaze read "King Edward" by AlexandraS90

The plug was a black, egg-shaped affair, about the same diameter as Lois Lane's fist, and as long as a can of Coca-Cola. The soft rounded tip gently punctured Blaze's anus. Even with a generous amount of lubricant, Lois had to take exceeding care to apply gentle but steady pressure. The scarlet succubus, on her knees and prying her buttocks apart so widely that Lois could see the little pink line that led up the crack of her ass toward her spine, wheezed slightly.

"Easy...easy...oh fuck that's big..." Blaze grit her teeth. "Fuck. Fuck, just keep going, keep going...fucking Nazarene piss..."

Lois grimaced. Her hands were covered in the clear lubricant, which made the sturdy silicone slippier than it might have been. Millimeter by millimeter, the demon's asshole gave way against the constant ****. By the time they had reached the midpoint, the thickest part of the toy, Lois was sweating badly. She nearly whistled...the butt plug was three inches in diameter at its widest, the demon's asshole was a taut pink rubber band. Holding it in place with one hand, Lois dribbled a little more lube on the toy.

"How are you doing?" Lois said. "Any pain?"

"No, fucking fabulous," Blaze growled. "This must be what birth is like, only in reverse."

"Easy now," Lois said, her right forearm starting to ache as she pressed on the base once again. "Easy, eaaasssyyy..."

Once past the middle, the toy narrowed to a neck only two inches in diameter, and then the flared base. Using great care, the reporter pushed...and watched the anus slowly contract, with no signs of burst veins or black blood...and finally, the whole of the toy sank into the demon's body, and the base pressed flush against the crimson cheeks.

"There. How does that feel?" Lois asked.

"Like...like I was fisting myself, but my hand fell asleep," the demon huffed.

Lois nodded. "Right. Now, do me."

The reporter turned around, reached back and spread her cheeks. Blaze, on all fours, a slightly cross-eyed expression on her face, began to lube up an identical toy.

"Why are we doing this again?" The scarlet succubus asked.

"Because...ah! That's cold...we're reviewing King Edward by AlexandraS90," Lois took a deep breath and let it out as the soft nose of the toy pressed against her buttocks. "Which, I have discovered, is a very long, mostly linear branch on a story titled A Fantasy Dynasty by merkros. And we're going to review it."

Blaze pressed. Lois focused on her breathing, eyes shut.

"When you say 'long,'" the demon said. "How long are we talking about?"

"240 chapters," Lois Lane's nostrils flared. "King Edward starts at chapter 10."

"So, we're stuffing these toys up our asses because...?" Blaze said, pushing forward slowly but steadily. Lois was surprisingly elastic—and had taken bigger toys over the course of her own story—but the demon continued to go slowly. It wouldn't do to have an anal fissure before they even got to the review proper.

"I...I think we should give the audience," Lois puffed. "A metaphorical idea of what this particular story is like."

There wasn't much to say after that. Lois wiped her hand on the white nothingness that was the place between the stories, and clicked on the screen of her tablet. As the demon slowly plugged her ass, the reporter began to read.

"So, our story begins as King Bryce is solicited by a female demon..." Lois begins.

"I like the cut of her jib," Blaze murmured. The demon gave all the attention to her task that a jewel thief does in cutting a piece of glass.

"...be he refuses her. This doesn't stop her, as the woman, demon, Marissa then rapes him by ****, for the purpose of impregnating herself with his child."

"Oooh, there's an idea. You doing alright?" Blaze asked.

"How far am I?" Lois said.

"About four inches."

"Great Caesar's ghost," Lois shook her head. "Anyway, Bryce dies, but knocks up Marissa in the process. The story proper now begins with her child, King Edward...who is a proper piece of work."

The reporter arched her back, and shifted her knees a little wider, in vain hope of making the insertion easier.

"Unlike a lot of the stories, this one doesn't shy on the sex, or the kinks. **** is just the start of things. Not that either of us can really throw stones on that score."

"I haven't fucked my family yet," Blaze noted. The reporter's asshole was now about two inches in diameter, and Blaze dribbled a bit more lube on the toy.

"Right. Well, we start with a babe bouncing on his balls, proceed rather quickly to **** with his mother Marissa, and things just keep going on from there. If there's a major difference between this story and ours, it's that it is all—or mostly—one huge long chain, with no variables and few actual choices. So game mode is a bit wasted on it, but there's never a boring chapter. The raunchiness level is pleasing high, and AlexandraS90 is relatively creative. Helps keep it fresh."

"Two hundred and forty chapters," Blaze gave a little shiver. "I'm going to start moving it now."

Lois swallowed, nodded...and almost lost her place as Blaze began to gently push and pull the fat plug, slowly fucking her ass with it. The familiar warmth started to build up in the reporter's asshole from the friction...and yet every time Blaze pushed it in, she made it go just a little deeper. It was all part of the process of softening her up for what was coming next.

"The writing is pretty solid. Unlike a lot of people, the grammar, spelling, and formatting are fine. Dialogue is fine. Characterization is a little on the light side, but nobody's looking for fucking War and Peace but with more fat fucking cocks being speared into tight little pussies. A few of the chapters are on the short side, but there's not much to complain about except...ungh..."

The reporter grunted. Blaze paused, holding the plug deep inside of her, not letting up. She watched the reporter's anal ring quiver...utterly patient, waiting for Lois to relax so that she could continue. All while feeling the big plug splitting her ass open.

"...it's...it's not got a lot of plot, you know? I mean, in our story, we've got at least a nominal end goal. Find the missing women. That doesn't always happen, and sometimes I get off into little side-quests and stuff, but that's usually the focus that I keep coming back to. The missing women, get my story, finish my article. Or if that fails, the sun comes up, and the night's over. Right? So there's a kind of arc. This just...goes on. It's not badly written, and sure there's a plot to it, but it doesn't end, it just stops. I can't even see where it might end, for real. Which isn't a bad thing for a CHYOA storeee..."

They'd gotten to the widest part of the plug. Lois was speechless. Her asshole felt like the eye of Sauron, a burning ring of inflamed flesh. She knew that she could take this...that she had taken worse than this, bigger than this...but it was always in that moment when she wondered if this was the night she was going to shit blood.

Then the moment passed, and Lois remembered to breathe again. Her aching ass began to close on the back of the plug.

"Other than that...you know, it's down to individual tastes. Not exactly A Song of Ice & Fire in terms of worldbuilding. Elves, demons, minotaurs...and I have to admit, I went off track on chapter 24."

"What happened at chapter 24?" Blaze asked as she gently slid the plug into place.

You're a little shocked as, taking firm hold of your arse, he guides himself to your virgin hole, the drooling head of his prick faintly searching for your entrance.

"...so I had to click the second option," Lois said. "I mean, I read as much yaoi as the next healthy young woman."

"Right," Blaze said. "Well, I for one salute AlexandraS90 for taking the Hershey highway less taken. But I take it that's the stopping point of that particular adventure?"

"Yes," Lois said. The reporter eased herself down so that she was sitting on the base of the plug, her legs splayed out in front of her. Blaze was doing the same. The human woman leaned back, feeling the pressure on her insides. "So, you know...if I had a suggestion, it would be to follow that spur on for a couple of chapters, and then do a link chapter back to the main story. It would make a pleasing little sidequest, you know? But, as we well know..."

"...it's a big pain in the ass." Blaze grinned.

At Some Point, What Goes In Must Come Out.

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