Lindsey and Susan read Lois & Blaze read Lindsey Shepard: The Path To Justice

"So do we wanna try having a sex scene while we do this response?" asked Susan.

"Yeah, sure, why not?" said Lindsey.

"So why didn't we do a response for Marcie and Gina?"

"Because they kept bringing up 'Hard Candy' and we needed to read that to understand what they were talking about. That's not an issue here"

Lindsey and Susan both stripped naked as their began their read.

READING IN PROGRESS

"It turns out that the 'reading in progress' format means our sex ends up happening offscreen" said Susan.

"Yeah, we both fingered each other, trying to see who would cum first" said Lindsey, "and it was completely offscreen"

"How do you even fuck an ear? Blaze's dick must be incredibly small. About the size of Rina in my own branch. Also, is Gambala a girl?"

"Profile doesn't say" said Lindsey.

"I assumed he was a male because he occasionally added images to his stories" said Susan.

"Wait, what? You assumed his or her gender because of that?"

"Well, men prefer images and women prefer text"

"I think you're generalising and Unknown7 has been doing the same thing. Look at her images in Arizelle Chronicles, Riceball's Chance In Hell and Reincarnated in a Fantasy Setting: A Isekai Story"

"Come to think of it, why did she use images of Saber and Rin Tohsaka for Marcie, Gina and my mom?"

"Well, apparently, that one in Hard Candy was not intended to convey that Gina is a closet nerd who's into Fate/Stay Night. Of course, Unknown7, being Unknown7, decided it would be incredibly funny to make that the case in your branch"

"Lois and Blaze do have a lot of points on this" said Susan, "Unknown7 sucks at writing description"

"The chapter about Frank and Fiona's home life is especially bad about this" said Lindsey, "for some reason they seem to think Frank is a masochist"

"That's the impression we were supposed to get from Hard Candy but Gambita wasn't able to convey this well. I hope Unknown7's improved on my own storyline and isn't just using images of get away with skipping out on the description. I mean I've made Gina suck on Rina's one inch dick, that better be more than one sentence. But if this is fanfic, Hard Candy is fanfic"

"That defence only works on Marcie and Gina or Marel. Its not hypocritical when Lois and Blaze do it"

"The whole 'it should have been a branch of Hard Candy' is ironic given the number of branches Unknown7 did. She's deleted some of them but is planning on creating others"

"I don't think it would have worked given that the premise is me getting control of Gina instead of that sociopath Marcie. From what I've read on the other Cursed Punishment, there seems to only be about ten scumbags in this school"

"Oh, everyone's mom seems to be a cunt, except Gina's" said Susan, "she's probably the only one who's actually a good parent in this story. The scary thing is I could totally see everyone else's mom, except Marcie's, actually whipping their kids in an attempt to breed on **** baby"

"Yeah but according to Marcie, Gina's mom is 'abusive' because Gina doesn't live in luxury" said Lindsey, "I am surprised they don't think No-Name High is worse than any other school given the fact students can **** each other and the police don't arrest them for it"

"I'm pretty sure that in a normal school, if a student had whip marks, the teacher would think they were being abused. I had no idea Riceball was a slur"

"It turns out that on top of being a **** monster, Marel is also racist against the Vietnamese"

"So why does Marel keep calling me that?" asked Susan, "I'm not even asian, I'm Caucasian with some Irish ancestry. For some reason, I don't have the accent"

"Its Irish ancestry, you've never been to Ireland" said Lindsey, "the closest you've been is your mom acting not a drunken Irish stereotype by smashing a glass bottle over your head when you were like five or six"

"I think another reason why Lindsey does what she does is because her mom beat her and her brother with whips to the point of permanently scarring the upper half of their bodies and because Gina killed her brother"

"I am disappointed that they finished at the Doki Doki Literature Club ripoff, I don't know what Unknown7 was thinking there. There were about thirty more chapters and those choices were not intended to be endings. I think Unknown7 was trying to do the CHYOA equivalent of an interface screw when a videogame pretends to shut down. That whole arc was a mistake"

"I think that about covers it"

"Until next time, readers"