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Chapter 33
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Last but not least
Today was finally the day. Beatriz was on one hand glad she got to go last. It meant she got to put off worrying as everyone else figured things out. On the other hand it gave her way too much time to think.
Marcos had clearly done something with Eric. He wanted to tell her, but she didn't want to hear it. He also wanted her to do something with Eric. It was an odd place to be in, your own boyfriend encouraging you to get intimate with someone else.
She didn't know that she wanted that, or that she didn't want it. She still loved Marcos, but she knew that he would never again satisfy her sexually. She was still young, she had needs. She couldn't spend the rest of their lives going solo. At some point she would want to make love to a man again.
She never bothered reading the rules, but the others assured her that she wouldn't have a choice, she would be part of Eric's harem forever.
She resolved to at least get to know him better. She had no BP to spend, but not everything costs money. She'd learnt about the amenities in the suite from the other girls, and decided they could have their date there.
She didn't have the BP to spend on fancy outfits or even to replace one of her missing bras so she went simple. Shorts, a tank top, and no makeup. She said bye to Yaz and headed to the suite.
She was greeted by Three of course. "Welcome Ms. Alvarez. Would you like to join us in the kitchen? The Master is preparing dinner."
Curious, she followed Three. Eric was standing beside a stove with a sizzling frying pan. He noticed them enter. "Hi Beatriz. I hope you don't mind that I picked dinner. Do you like scallops? Three insisted you weren't allergic."
The three of them sat ate Eric's pan seared scallops. Beatriz had to admit, it was pretty good. Three had no trouble admitting that.
"Oh Master, thank you for cooking dinner. What a wonderful treat. However, I should be going. I hope you have a good evening, call if you need anything." Three took the dishes away and left.
"So Eric, cooking for me, trying to impress me?" Beatriz asked.
"Yes actually. Of everyone here I know the least about you, but also have the least drama with. I thought maybe we could try and be friends."
"Friends? Or friends? I am supposed to be in your Harem after all."
"No, seriously, no ulterior motive. You are an attractive woman but I don't need someone else to sleep with. I do need someone as a friend though."
Beatriz smiled. "Attractive? Now I know you're just buttering me up."
"No I'm not. I mean it. I can see why Marcos is so enamored with you. So please, tell me about yourself."
"I don't know. There isn't much to tell. My father died young. I've been working since I was old enough to help support my family. I love my job, even if the pay sucks. I love Marcos but I'm afraid we won't survive this crazy thing. I'm afraid for tomorrow, I'm the last one without any transformations and I'm worried it's going to mess me up worse than everyone else."
"Wow going deep early. I don't know what to say about that, I think you are just going to have to fight for the things you really want. Also you're not the only one without a transformation, I'm still myself too."
"Sure, Mr. Big Spender. Did you manage to spend it all by the way? I'd hate for Isla to get her hands on it."
"Not all. Just 300 left. Here you can help me decide." He went and got the tablet. As he started to hand it to her his eyes went wide. "Oh no. 1300BP? How did that happen? It must have something to do with Stephanie getting her voice back. Crap."
"Ok, don't panic. We will spend it right now. Here, let me see." She took it and started to scroll. "Wow, some of these are awful. There isn't actually a lot left you can buy. Hmm, we want to be sure to use every single one. Ok. These two."
"Really? I mean the first one is just weird, but do you really want the second one? It will overlap the challenge tomorrow."
"Yes. I have a feeling I'm getting a physical transformation. Nobody wants a thin tall girl like me. So let me show off for once in my life."
Eric hesitated, but again he decided to let the girls pick their own temporary transformations.
Green with envy - Beatriz had always been the jealous type. Now she will literally be green with envy, green skinned that is. Skin tone will last until Beatriz deactivates it by spending 5x the cost. - 100BP
Nothing to hide - Beatriz has never felt she had anything to show off, but really she has nothing to hide. Will be unable to cover her body in any way for 48 hours - 1200 BP
Eric 1300BP -> 0
As he clicked he watched as her body shivered then slowly began to change until her skin was a brilliant emerald colour. Then she stood and stripped all of her clothes off.
Showed Master her naked body +6VP
Eric watched as she moved her arms towards her breasts but stopped. "Wow. It feels so weird. I just can't bring my hands any closer. Ok well here I am. I'm sorry I'm not beautiful like the other girls."
Eric looked her up and down. Her green skin made her look extremely exotic, but she was wrong about not being beautiful. It's true her chest was small, and she was tall and thin, but her whole body was nicely toned. She had large prominent nipples, just a hint of abs and a hairless pussy.
"You're wrong about that Beatriz. You really are beautiful."
Beatriz blushed, but then hurried to change the conversation. "So do you bowl? Jenny told me you have a private alley here."
A short time later they were bowling. Three served them beer and nachos and they were having a great time. Eric felt a little awkward as he stared at her ass and pussy every time she went to throw a ball, and Beatriz felt a bit awkward every time she noticed Eric watching her. As time went on, the fun and booze made all the awkwardness disappear.
They were neck and neck throughout the game. Not they either were particularly good, just equally as bad. Beatriz had fallen behind near the end only to catch up with two strikes in a row to tie it with one frame remaining.
Beatriz was getting pretty worked up with the **** flowing and her total nudity. She looked over at Eric, he was a good looking guy, and Marcos had been pushing her to do something. She had an idea.
"What about a bet? Loser gives the winner oral?" She proposed.
"You're on." Eric replied. He hadn't had a lot of experience giving oral sex before Stephanie, but Stephanie had been a huge fan of giving and receiving and he'd gotten quite good by his estimation.
Beatriz went first. Her first ball got all but one pin. Her second got her the spare. Before she threw her last ball she made sure to wiggle her butt and bend all the way forward to touch her toes. Eric felt himself getting hard as he stared right at her pussy. Beatriz threw and got 7 extra points.
It was Eric's turn and he was fully erect now. He was distracted and threw a gutter ball.
"Oh, were you thinking about me instead of the game?" Beatriz teased. "I am looking forward to you eating me out."
Eric tried to focus and managed to get every pin with his next ball. Now we just needed more than 7 to win. He threw the last ball, it wasn't a great throw. It wobbled its way down towards the pins and…a 6.
"Well you win. How would you like this to happen?" He asked.
"Well as hot as it sounds to just ride your face on the floor right here, take me to the bedroom and do me properly."
Eric led her to the master bedroom and she lay down on the bed and spread her legs. He knelt down between them and started to slowly tease her thighs with kisses. He worked his way towards her vulva but continued to tease with light little kisses. He heard her give a slight moan and decided to dive right in, lapping at her pussy, trying to rub her clit with his tongue. Soon her moans were getting louder and louder and finally she came with a cry. He looked up at her and she smiled back.
Master ate her out +3VP
First x2
"That was amazing, now it's my turn." She got up and pushed him down on the bed. She pulled his pants off and started to rub his penis. Then with little warning she straddled him and sunk herself down on his dick. She moaned as he filled her and he cried out in pleasure.
She began to thrust her hips and he thrust back and soon they had a good rhythm. Eric felt fantastic, this was totally different from how he felt having sex with Stephanie. Stephanie always just seemed so **** to get off but Beatriz was taking her time and enjoying the ride.
He knew he was about to cum and briefly panicked as he worried about pregnancy. Beatriz saw the look on his face and soothed him, "It's ok, it's safe, give it to me. Come inside. Now, give it to me now." She started moaning harder as she came a second time, Eric followed her and started to fill her up.
Sex with Master +10 VP
First x2
She collapsed in bed beside him, both of them panting. Neither said anything for a while. Finally Beatriz broke the silence. "That was amazing. Thank you for following my lead there. I know you must be worried about Marcos, but don't be. He fully supports this. I know it's weird, and you might feel guilty, but don't. We might not have chosen, not really, to be here in this circumstance, but what we just did, that was our choice."
"You're right. It was amazing. And I do feel guilty, but I'll try not to."
"Do your best, but now we should get ready for bed. We have the competition tomorrow and I want to be well rested."
They got ready for bed and then Beatriz realized she couldn't even pull the covers over herself. She asked Eric to spoon her to keep her warm and he was happy to oblige. They soon fell asleep.
Eric woke up to find himself alone. As he sat up, Three came into the room. "Good morning Master. Ms. Alvarez is already up in the kitchen making breakfast. She says, 'I hope he appreciates this bacon because I nearly burnt my tits off.' Also you'll find your paper and coffee in the dining room, I didn't want your breakfast to get cold."
Eric joined Three and Beatriz in the dining room for pancakes and bacon. Beatriz said she had tried to use an apron, but of course couldn't. She was a bit embarrassed by her nudity, but Eric and Three didn't mind at all and she settled her nerves again. As they ate Eric read the paper.
Harem Hotel Gazette. Issue 7.
The First Challenge
Today is the first challenge. Who will rise to the top and who will flounder in last place. We asked our top oddsmakers for their predictions.
Two-in-Valerie: Valerie is totally going to win. Her body is just so perfect. I love being her. My BP is on her.
Isla: I can't make a prediction. That wouldn't be fair. Instead I'll say the true winners will be the audience.
Eric: Yaz
Dear reader, you are probably wondering, when did I give a prediction? Simple, I asked you in your sleep.
There you have it, Yaz and Valerie predicted to win it. You heard it here first.
Isla is sitting at her desk in the Captain's Quarters. The room is large but not as well appointed as the Master suite. There are binders overflowing with paper everywhere. On shelves, on the bed, on the floor. All labeled with names like Transformation ideas, BP costs, and Evil Schemes.
Isla is watching a large tv screen. It is replaying events last night with Eric and Beatriz.
"Well dear audience, I really didn't think she would be the first to sleep with him. Kudos to her though. The other girls need to relax a little and grab the bull by the horn so to speak.
Now that all the dates are done we will be docking soon and preparing for the first challenge. Before that though we are going to open our poll line for best girl. The poll will be open for a couple days, but no fixed end time. It will close after the competition is over, however long that takes.
In addition to BP for polling high we are also going to give our a prize to the highest rise, and some extra motivation to the biggest fall.
Fear not dear audience, the poll will have no impact on the results of the competition. Their fates are already written. This is to be a skill based competition, but there will be future completions with more audience participation."
(Poll is now closed)
Pre competition standing
Beatriz 36VP
Marcos 26VP
Yaz 22 VP
Alexandra 12 VP
Sarah 12 VP
Valerie 7VP
Jenny 6VP
Stephanie 1VP
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