John and Lucy being tormented by "generic body control story"

"So, sis, ready to read the story starring those two jerks who failed to roast us?" John asked sitting in front of the screen of his PC.

"Yeah, I guess. I am bored of fucking." Lucy said yawning in John's bed "Welcome to our favorite ince... I mean family category."

"Actually," John chuckled "It is Mind Control. I wonder why didn't rename it to Mental Games or something."

"Oh, so it is one of those stories? When an author gives god-like powers to a protagonist and he or she uses a nearly limitless power doing nothing but screwing family members?" Lucy stayed in the bed, too lazy to get up "And what is the name of this masterpiece?"

"You won't believe it. generic body control story"

"Seriously?" Lucy sounded nearly as annoyed as when John asked for anal sex

"Yea, rather lazy naming."

"Nah, it is not that. Obviously, the author pretends originality by using an intentionally lame name. Stupid but... tolerable." Then Lucy raised her voice "But putting 'BODY' control in mind control is FUCKING STUPID!"

"I dunno, those are similar." Still, John was the only one actually reading the text "So the app is the method of control."

"No, they are not!" Lucy wasn't going to calm down. "Mind control is about rewriting personality! Controlling bodies is an absolutely different thing! And this shit already had a reason to be in a different category."

"Sis, it is unfair to call something shit without even reading it, you know." John chuckled, he liked his sister's aggression... when it was not directed at him.

"One doesn't need to eat shit to understand what it is. Smelling it from afar is enough. Let me guess, for some reason, that fucker Ben decides to test the app on his sister despite not believing that this thing will work at all.

"Actually, it is Rina who is the protagonist."

"Female psychopath with mind-controlling powers? Well, at least there are some tiny bit of originality," she got up from the bed and finally joined John on the second page only to roll her eyes. "She made him go outside in underwear? It is some ENF, I mean ENM shit, right? One more reason to have this story in another fucking category! Keep my mind control clean!"

"Your? Are you into this, Lucy? Perhaps we need some magical timelines with me getting mind control? John grinned in his trademark, perverted style

"Not Hvast's style, so don't dream about it." Lucy rolled her eyes, "Besides, I usually fall for you so quickly and shrug off being **** so easily, that some form of subconscious mind-control is the only reasonable explanation."

"Back to the story, where do we go? Fun for science or using Rina's photo?"

"Don't tell me that she will use her photo and somehow her brother will get the phone... But a story from the POW of someone being mi.. body-controlled is a good variety," Lucy bit her lightly lip, clearly expecting something steamy.

"FUCK!!!" Those were the first word exclaimed of Lucy when she read the first part of the next chapter "She handled him the phone!? How can I sympathize with a protagonist who is this dumb? I need to go grab a beer, I am afraid I won't be able to handle this crap fully sober"

John was next to complain when Lucy returned. "Remember I said that Ben is impotent? It is confirmed. Well, that or he is gay."

"Are you sure? Maybe he just starts slow? Enjoying non-sexual favors like you did in some blackmailing timelines." Lucy asked, sipping some beer from a bottle.

"Nah, he gave her the phone back."

"Oh, a nice guy then. See John, he is just not a perverted jerk like you are."

"He wasn't even tempted!" It was John's time of becoming emotional "I say you - gay or impotent! Or both! Anyway, he added some elaborate safeguards to prevent her from using the app, she'll now try to work around those."

They read in silence, having few things to comment. "Well," Lucy finally said," punishments are ramping up. I expect her to blow him any... WHAT THE FUCK!? Did he just make her pee her pants?"

"Please, no kink shaming."John giggled at his sister's annoyance.

"Now I want this jerk to suffer. Let us..." she froze with her mouth open and then her half-empty beer bottle flew into the wall."

"What happened?" John asked surprised by this feat of rage.

"This fuck of an author managed to make me root for Rita against her brother and then... Then he made her exploit his compassion, making him look nice and sweet, and threw her firmly into the villain territory. Who the fuck does that!?"

"I don't understand you, I never rooted for this bitch... Oh yes, bitches like each other, OUCH!" after an elbow in his ribs John went silent surprising his giggles.

"At least there must be some sexy stuff now. "Lucy said grabbibng control over the mouse and clicking to proceed to the next page."

"Kill me," Lucy said somewhere in the middle of the next chapter. "We are at what? Chapter 6. Where is my sex!? I agreed to do this to roast bad sex scenes. What can I even say about this sadism devoid of any eroticism."

"Lucy, just because it does not match your kinks..." John started only to be interrupted

"I want them doing something fun with their private parts! Even humiliation and ENP stories should have sexy descriptions of funny body parts! Whatever, a no-mercy chapter. I have no hopes at this point."

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"Yep, I was right. ENM. Kinda. Except for the nude part, of course. Does the author hate dicks? Who would hurt if he would wave his, undoubtedly tiny, cock around?"

"I dunno. I liked the twist of making him think that he is mind-controlled while he wasn't." John said, seemingly enjoying Lucy's reaction "Last punishment... It must be something hot. I expect she'll order something that will lead to sex without her planning for this"

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Siblings read the next chapter in full silence, throwing shocked glances at each other.

"Yeah, you know Lucy... Sorry for calling you a bitch. She has more or less **** him to transition to another gender. Who the hell does that to anyone they don't hate? Rita is freaking psychopathic! Any usual jerk protagonist of mind-control story is "

"Neither will I call you a sick sadist ever again. Remember that never to be written timeline when you **** my ass with a baseball bat and then beat me with it to ****? Pfffff. It was tame. "

"Do we really need to read further? Lucy? "I am afraid at this point. Will she make him cut his balls off or something?"

"Nah, Nah, Nah." Lucy shook her head. "Don't be a pussy. We must see how this ends."

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"Oh common... What is this universe?" John lamented "Why is every girl a sadistic fuck?"

"I have a better question, how did Rita manage to organize a performance in a musical? Did she start to use the app on tons of other people or just some magic?" Lucy sounded tired and visibly annoyed "Tell me that this trainwrek will end with him fucking a guy or getting gangbanged, I'll accept any sex at this point."

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"Oh... Well. I admit. I didn't expect the twist." John said " She didn't put her brother through a real terrible traumatic experience. Only a simulation that could drive him mad. How thoughtful of her!"

"And a diaper... Diaper full of pee! Who the fuck needs this detail? Also, why was no shit mentioned? Or did I miss something?" Lucy wasn't even truly angry anymore, story has sucked all energy out of her.

"Maybe in the next chapter... Wait." John quickly read the epilogue "They ended a branch of an erotic story on an erotic site with zero actual sex scenes from beginning to the end? What the fuck!? I need to browse other branches to see if there is ANY sex in it.

"John! Fuck! No! NO! I prefer some lubeless anal to reading more of this abomination"