I'm sure it's just some nice home movies no doubt.
It all comes tumbling down, tumbling down, tumbling down...
âWhat the hell?!â A young man with dusty blonde hair sat upon a throne set on a very familiar stage. He looked around in confusion at the empty beach chairs in front of him, scanning the shore with his eyes for any sign of life. And then his eyes landed on the man standing over him, cane in hand, face indecipherable, and he froze. âWho-?! Where-? Why-?!â
âAll good questions,â the mysterious man said with a laugh, tapping his cane on the deck of the stage. âBut Iâm in no hurry to answer them. Before any of that, shall we get to the formalities? You are Jacob Evans, right? Jake?â
âI⌠y-yes, thatâs my name, butâŚâ Jake shook his head, feeling a throbbing headache start to come on. âWhy am I here? Whereâs Rebecca? We were just at the movies, and-â
âOh, sheâll be coming around soon,â the man crooned, stepping closer. His cane made a menacing tapping sound with each step he took. âFor now, allow me to introduce myself! My name is Mr. S, and I am the host of this little show.â
Jake mouthed the word first before repeating it in confusion, âShow? What⌠what do you mean⌠show?â He squirmed uncomfortably in his seat, but made no move to stand up.
Mr. S narrowed his eyes, which lacked any distinguishing features that could be latched onto, such as shape, color, or size, and yet they were clearly eyes. âThe greatest show around,â he said with a smirk. âHarem Hotel! Thatâs right, young man, youâve been selected as the next master of the grand hit reality show, âHarem Hotel: Island Holiday Seasonâ!â
He paused, and the hollow sound of artificial clapping filled the air. Jake looked around, his mouth flopping open and closed as he tried to identify the source of the sound, but saw nothing. It didnât make any sense!
âB-but-â
âShh, shh,â Mr. S said, pressing his finger onto Jakeâs lips to shut him up. âWeâll cover all that shortly. Iâm sure you must be very confused, so allow me to explain!â
Mary couldnât believe what she was watching. Her body had moved automatically to sit on the couch, and now she was staring at the screen without blinking, trying to process.
âItâs⌠an old season?â She mumbled into the air, not even aware she was speaking aloud. âWhat⌠why is this here?â
She recognized the producer, this must have been back when he was a host. But why would Dakota have this tape hidden away in the depths of the hotel?
Wondering if the answer would be made clear, she leaned forward and continued to watch.
âNow that weâve gone over the rules for our dear master, itâs time to bring on our contestants!â Mr. S said, waving his cane jovially.
âWait!â Jakeâs eyes widened. âYou canât, thatâs not-!â
âTo start, our masterâs lovely girlfriend of three years! The most serious relationship heâs had with a woman!â Mr. Sâs voice oozed with gleeful sarcasm. âCould it be true love? Letâs give her a hand, folks, our first contestant! Rebecca Johnson!â
With a wave of his cane, a young woman appeared, sitting in the first beach chair with a startled expression on her face. She was pretty, in a plain sort of way, with a slender, willowy frame, neat black hair, and delicate features. Her blue eyes were frantic with confusion and she looked at her boyfriend with trepidation and alarm.

âJake?! Whatâs going on? What is this?â She cried. âI thought we were supposed to be watching a movie?!â
âItâs a complicated situation,â Mr. S informed her. âYou and your boyfriend have been invited to take part in a wonderful and exciting reality show, called Harem Hotel! Isnât that just phenomenal?â
âH-Harem?â The woman looked confused. âWhat⌠that⌠I donât⌠âŚJake, what is he talking about?â
âI donât know,â Jake said, shaking his head. He looked weakly back at his girlfriend. âA-apparently, I⌠I was chosen for this weird show⌠theyâre planning on making me date a bunch of girls at once? I donât, IâŚâ
Rebeccaâs eyes widened and she looked at her boyfriend in horror. âBut that⌠but why would they want that?â
She turned to Mr. S, angered. âHe already has a girlfriend! Me!â
Mr. S looked at her like she was a pathetic loser. âExactly. Just one girlfriend? Talk about boring. The audience is never going to go for that. Hence why weâve decided that the best course of action is to give him his pick of girlfriends! Thatâs right, here on Harem Hotel, we exist to make the dreams of our master come true- whether he wants them to or not.â
Mr. Sâs eyes twinkled with delight and Rebecca shivered. A look of terror crossed her face. âB-but⌠weâre in loveâŚâ she said quietly.
âI know, and isnât that a wonderful thing?â Mr. S chortled. He let out a long sigh. âAh, true love⌠nothing else like it. âŚGets rather repetitive, though, donât you think? Anyway, weâve spent enough time on you. Time to meet our next contestant! This lovely lady grew up next door to Jake, and when they were young, they were thick as thieves. Of course, they drifted apart as they got older, but sheâs always had a special place in his heart! Presenting, Jennifer Summers!â
With a wave of his cane, another woman appeared, sitting in the chair right beside Rebeccaâs. The dark-haired girl recoiled in surprise when she saw the gorgeous blonde pop up beside her, and Jennifer herself also looked stunned and upset.

âWhat!? I donât, I- âŚWait, Jakey? Is that you?â She squinted up at the stage, recognizing the familiar face of her estranged childhood friend. âOh my gosh! I havenât seen you in- âŚWhat, six years now?â
âJenâŚâ Jakeâs voice wasnât quite working properly. He was too stunned by his childhood friendâs sudden appearance. âH-heyâŚâ
âWhat am I doing here?â Jenniferâs happy expression quickly turned sour as she looked around the beach. The picturesque scenery wasnât maintaining her pleasant mood. âI was at home talking with my roommate, and now here I am, on some beach in the middle of nowhere with my old friend? AndâŚâ
She turned to Rebecca and looked at her for the first time. ââŚSorry, who are you again?â
Rebecca sank into her seat, intimidated slightly by the gorgeous blonde. âI-Iâm Rebecca,â she mumbled out. âRebecca Johnson⌠Iâm⌠Jakeâs girlfriendâŚâ
Jennifer blinked, processing that for a second. âOh. I see, well, nice to meet you, Becky!â She introduced herself with a handshake. Rebecca hesitated to take it.
âItâs, um, RebeccaâŚâ
âRight, sorry.â
Mr. S clapped his hands together. âHow sweet! Weâre all friends now. Anyway, letâs move on, we have more girls to meetâŚâ
âMore girls?!â Rebecca squeaked, jumping in her seat.
âOf course Jake here is getting a full-course harem, with eight lovely ladies, you two included. Itâs the least he deserves, donât you agree?â Mr. S asked with a smirk.
Rebecca paled. âI⌠thatâs, umâŚâ
âI donât want a harem!â Jake protested from his throne. âIâm in love with Rebecca! You canât just bring us here and make us play your stupid games! âŚAt least send Jen back! She doesnât even want to be here, weâre just old friends!â
Mr. S laughed. âOh come now, Jakey, you know thatâs not how this works. I just told you, didnât I? Youâll be meeting eight girls. Theyâll be joining your harem. All of them will be trying to appeal to you, so they can earn those sweet, sweet Victory Points. And if anybody makes it to 100 by the end of the season, well, congratulations! Theyâll be made into a perfect match for you! âŚOf course, if they donât, well⌠not so good. But no need to worry about that.â
âBut I donât want that!â Jake protested. âI just want-â
âRebecca, I know, youâve said it a thousand times already,â Mr. S scoffed, rolling his eyes. âYour first girlfriend, your true love, blah blah blah. âŚWeâll see. Donât worry, Jake, this season was specially-made, just for you. Normally, all the girls in your harem will be bound to you no matter what, so long as they maintain a positive amount of Victory Points. But in this season, weâre doing something a little more⌠dramatic. When she show comes to an end, youâll be allowed to cultivate your harem as you see fit! Any girls who donât make the cut, well, youâre free to sever all ties with them. You wonât have any connection at all, and they wonât be part of your harem.â
Rebeccaâs eyes widened.
Jake looked at Mr. S uncertainly, not sure if he could trust the hostâs words. âSo⌠does that mean I could just choose Rebecca and have a harem of one, then?â
Rebecca nodded her head vigorously, heart pounding hopefully in her chest. Beside her, Jennifer remained silent.
âYou could,â Mr. S conceded. âIf thatâs what you want. But- this show is going until the end. If, by the time it concludes, you still feel like Rebecca here is your one and only, well, more power to you! But I have a feeling that youâll come around. Remember what I said, about the transformations? Well, those are happening either way. And just because a girl is no longer a part of your harem, that doesnât mean sheâll go back to normal.â
âTransformations!?â Jennifer recoiled in shock. âWhatâs this about transformations!?â It was the first sheâd heard of it.
Mr. S turned his gleeful smile towards her. âOh, yes, all manner of transformations! Physical changes, mental ones, and all of them sexy- it all depends on what the audience votes for! Youâll get one a round. Make the most of them and try to seduce our besotted master to look your way! âŚIf you wish to, of course.â
Rebecca turned pale. She looked hesitantly at Jennifer, and saw the wheels turning in the other womanâs eyes. So this really was a competition⌠and she would have to compete with a beauty like this? Who had been such an important part of her boyfriendâs life for so long? Rebecca remembered when they had started dating, and Jake had told her that heâd gotten a late start since heâd spent so much of his childhood infatuated with his childhood friend, who had never returned his feelings. The devastation heâd felt was why it took so long to try again, and why he hadnât gotten his first girlfriend until his twenties.
Rebecca had to compete with that⌠âŚAnd six other women too?!
Her heart pounded with anxiety. She could do this. She just had to trust Jake. All the times he said he loved her⌠they were real. She knew it!
Mary felt sick to her stomach. The premise of this show⌠being able to just kick any woman you wanted out of the harem at the end of the season⌠it was so twisted. This was so much worse, so much more ruthless than Sylvia, or even Dakota had been.
But she couldnât stop watching.
âWhat!?â Rebecca couldnât believe the transformation sheâd been given by the audience. âWhy⌠why did they choose that one!?â
She looked down at her frumpy clothes, and at the other transformations she could have gotten. The audience could have given her an alluring and seductive figure, but theyâd chosen to go a more natural, wholesome route. Physically, anyway. Normally, Rebecca would have been relieved by that. The last thing she wanted was some physical transformation to turn her into a sex doll, or a mental transformation that turned her into a bimbo.
But what the audience had given her insteadâŚ
- Happy Boy, Girl Feels Joy: Rebecca is so devoted to her beloved Jake, her very first boyfriend. She would do anything to make him happy! His happiness is her happiness- quite literally! Now, Rebecca will find that her deepest goal is doing whatever she can to please her boyfriend and make him happy, as a good girlfriend should! (Devotion)
âI wonder,â Mr. S mused. âPerhaps they felt like you were being too overbearing last round, trying to keep Jakeâs eye from wandering towards other girls? This is Harem Hotel, after all. If heâs caught up in you, heâll be closing himself off from potentially finding happiness with the other women in his harem! And that would be just tragic. So apparently, the audience thinks it would be better for the both of you if you were now completely devoted to making your boyfriend happy as can be- even if that means letting him be with other women!â
âIâŚâ Rebecca turned to Jake, trembling. He looked at her, stunned.
ââŚBut heâs my boyfriendâŚâ she mumbled out.
âTh-thatâs right!â Jake nodded, only hesitating a second. âIâm happy with Rebecca, I donât⌠I donât need the other girls.â
Mr. S raised his eyebrow. âOh, really?â
âJakey, calm down,â Jennifer said, walking up to him. Her breasts were almost double their original size thanks to the last few rounds of generosity from the audience. She tucked a lock of flawless blonde hair behind her ear. âWe all know youâre in love with Rebecca, but think about things from our perspective, too. Weâre all trying to get to know you and do our best for you, but if you just focus on her, it isnât really fair, is it?â
âJenâŚâ Jake didnât know what to say to that.
âItâs for Rebeccaâs own good, too,â another girl, Madison, pointed out. She worked across from Jakeâs cubicle at his office, and often joked that she was his âWork Wifeâ with him. âSheâs been plunging in the popularity polls, and why do you think that is? Because she keeps insisting that you stay monogamous, even though this show is called âHaremâ Hotel. Now, I know you donât want to betray her, but think about whatâs best for you both, alright?â
Jake averted his eyes. Thanks to Madisonâs most recent transformation, she had been explaining this to him while showing him her boobs. The audience had decided that any time she gave advice now, it would be with her tits hanging out.
He didnât know what to say. He just looked at Rebecca, then at Jen, then at Madisonâs tits, then at the other girls. What was he supposed to do here?
âYou slept with her.â Rebecca wasnât even upset. She spoke with a resigned voice, looking defeated. The round had barely started, and nowâŚ
âRebecca, Iâm sorry,â Jake pleaded with her. âI⌠I had to, itâs for the show⌠look, Jen is my best friend, she understands what we have. This is just so she can get to 100 VP and make it to the end of the season without anything worse happening!â
Rebecca looked up at her boyfriend and wondered if he really believed that was true.
She smiled. âItâs okay,â she assured him, even though it wasnât. âAs long as youâre happy⌠that makes me happy.â
If only her transformation actually made her happy for him, instead of just compelling her to go along with it.
âWell, would you look at that?â Mr. S crowed. âJennifer is at the top of the Popularity Poll again! You know what that means! Sheâll get to spend the first night of the round with the master again! Lucky girl! And Rebecca, well⌠since youâre still at the bottom, youâll get the last night with him. But thatâs okay with you, right?â
Rebeccaâs heart ached. She glanced at Jake, and tried not to notice how excited he was by the prospect. Jen had just gotten another transformation for her Sex Bomb path, which would double the pleasure of anyone who slept with her. Jake obviously couldnât wait to try it out, judging by how he was mooning over her. Like a schoolboy in love. Looking at Jen the way heâd used to look at her.
ââŚOf course itâs okay,â she said, forcing a smile to her lips. âWhatever makes him happy! Thatâs what being a good girlfriend is all about!â
âGlad to hear it!â Mr. S crowed. âBecause your new transformation is quite a doozy.â
Rebecca bit her lip.
- Devoted to You: A good girlfriend should love her boyfriend more than anything. From now on, Jake will always be Rebeccaâs number one priority. All of her love will be for him, with hardly any left for anyone else. Friends, family members, even pets, Rebeccaâs love for them will all be turned towards her boyfriend instead! (Devotion)
Theyâd even taken away her ability to love. That was fine- Rebecca had grown up in foster care, so sheâd never known her parents. It didnât matter that she couldnât love them. She didnât have any friends, either- not after Mindy stabbed her in the back last round, sleeping with Jake after promising her for years that she didnât see him that way.
So why did it matter if she wouldnât be able to love anyone else but Jake? Jake was all Rebecca needed to be happy anywayâŚ
Mary covered her mouth, horrified by the twisted transformation. She couldnât believe it. âThat poor girlâŚâ she murmured.
âWhereâs Mary?â Nick looked around, frowning. It had been a long time since sheâd gone to the bathroom. âIs she okay?â
âIâm sure sheâs fine,â Mr. S assured him. âNo need to worry.â
Dakota frowned. Nick was right, Mary had been gone a long time. Using her powers, she took her attention away from the maze for a moment, and focused on tracking down the redhead.
She froze.
âNoâŚâ What little color there still was in Dakotaâs face drained away. She slowly shook her head. âShe couldnât be⌠âŚNo!â
With a furious stab of her cane into the ground, she vanished, startling Nick. âDakota!?â He exclaimed, jumping out of his seat. âWhere-!?â
âIâm sure sheâs fine,â Mr. S said, giving Nick an intimidating look. âSit back down, thereâs nothing you need to be concerned about.â
Nick doubted that. His heart pounded anxiously in his chest.
âWhat should I do?â Rebecca- or âBeckyâ as she was now being called- was a complete wreck. She looked up at Mr. S with a pathetic look of defeat in her eyes.
âIâm the host, my dear, Iâm not allowed to show you any favor,â Mr. S crooned. âI have to remain neutral.â
âBut Iâm losing him!â Rebecca wailed. âHe⌠he doesnât even look at me anymore⌠he just cares about Jennifer, and Madison, and Mindy, and the rest of them! I⌠if I donât do somethingâŚ!â
âYouâll lose your position as girlfriend?â Mr. S smirked. âMy dear girl⌠thatâs already been the case for some time now. He just hasnât made it official yet.â
Rebecca was crushed.
âPlease,â she begged, falling to her knees. âThereâs gotta be something⌠some way I can get him to love me again⌠please! Heâs the best thing thatâs ever happened to me, heâs all I have, please! Youâve gotta do something, PLEASE!â She sobbed, tears streaming down her cheeks.
Mr. S looked down at her, unmoved. âWell⌠I suppose⌠there is one way you could show your devotion to him. If youâre really that serious.â
Rebeccaâs head snapped up and she gazed upon Mr. S as though he were the avatar of her salvation. âYes!â She cried. âIâll do anything! Please!â
Mr. S smirked.
ââŚNo⌠no, Jake, you-you canât!â Rebecca shook her head frantically. âIâm your girlfriend! Remember?! You-you canât just-! Why-?!â
Rebeccaâs whole world was ending. The season had ended, and Jake had decided that their relationship, or what was left of it, had ended too.
âSorry, but⌠you were always holding me back,â Jake said, looking coldly down at the girl heâd once claimed to love, while Jennifer hung off his arm, looking more gorgeous than ever in her triumph. âI like you, Rebecca, but⌠look at everyone. Theyâre all beautiful, and youâre just⌠you.â
âBut thatâs because of the audience!â Rebecca howled. âTHEY didnât want me to get any physical transformations! I-I would have done anything, looked like however you wanted-! But they-!â
âAlways blaming other people.â Jennifer crinkled her nose and shook her head in disgust. âPathetic, really.â
Rebeccaâs voice cracked in her throat. ââŚBut I love youâŚâ she squeaked. âI⌠Iâm pregnant, with your child! Isnât that-?!â
âThatâs exactly it,â Jake said. âYou think I want to be a father? When I could spend my time having great sex with Jen and everyone else instead? Becky, you wanted to have my kid for you. Because, what, you thought you could tie me down that way? That Iâd end things with the other women I love and go crawling back to you like the pathetic loser I used to be?â
Rebecca whimpered. âNo, I⌠I just⌠I just wanted to make you happy⌠I love you, JakeâŚ! I always have⌠I never thought you were a loser...â
Jake let out a tired sigh. âWell, you know what would make me happy? If you left and I never had to see you again. We had fun, Becky, but Iâve always known I could get a better woman than you deep down.â
Jennifer purred, running her fingers along his transformation-enhanced pecs. âAnd now you have several.â
âBut Jake! Please!â Rebecca blubbered, one hand clutching her swelling abdomen while the other reached desperately out to the only person she would ever be capable of loving. âI canât live without you, please!â
Jake shrugged, already bored with plain, frumpy Rebecca. âBye, Becky.â
Season End
âWhat are you doing here?â
Mary jumped, frozen to the bone by the ominous voice. She scrambled to her feet and turned to see Dakota standing in the doorway.
She looked angrier than Mary had ever seen her.

For the first time, Mary wasnât sure that she was safe from the other womanâs wrath.
âDuh-DakotaâŚâ Mary took a shaky step backwards, her hands trembling. âI-â
âYou saw. Didnât you?â Dakota advanced, murderous rage blazing in her golden eyes.
Mary whimpered. âSo⌠that was what I thought it was⌠that woman⌠she wasâŚâ
âMy mother.â Dakota said the word with more venom than Mary knew was possible. âThatâs right. The worthless, pathetic wretch.â
âShe⌠she was a contestant⌠on one of these showsâŚâ Mary scrambled to put to words what sheâd figured out while watching that season. âAnd your father, he was-â
âI donât have a father,â Dakota hissed. âWerenât you paying attention?â She clutched her cane tightly, tapping it loudly on the ground with each step she advanced towards Mary.
âThwomp. Thwomp. Thwomp.â
âMy mother,â Dakota continued, ânever loved me. Not really. Even as a child, I could tell⌠she wanted nothing to do with me. I was worthless to her. Dakota Johnson? Worthless. Unwanted. Unloved. But Dakota Evans, wellâŚâ
She shook her head. âIt doesnât matter now.â
âIt wasnât her fault!â Mary could only imagine what Dakota must have gone through⌠but after what sheâd seen⌠âYou saw it yourself! It was this show! The audience! They voted, they made it so that your mother could never love anyone but that⌠that son of a bitch!â
Dakota stopped, surprised for a moment by her language. She stared at Mary, her eyes stony and her expression unreadable.
ââŚAnd?â
Mary blinked. ââŚEh?â
âAnd, so what?â Dakota took another step forward. âDoes that change anything? Does it magically make it all better, like Amelia kissing one of Nickâs boo-boos?â
Mary gulped. âNo⌠n-no, of course it doesnâtâŚâ
âItâs ironicâŚâ Dakota sneered, shaking her head. âAll my life I wondered what was wrong with me. Why my mother couldnât love me. I thought I was broken. Wrong. But⌠the truth is, that she just never could. All because of this show. And I didnât realize⌠until it was too late to change things.â
She took a deep breath and exhaled.
ââŚI hate this show, Mary,â she confessed finally. âIâm so tired. I just want it to end. Itâs all meaningless, pointless⌠but⌠I canât let it end⌠I canâtâŚâ
âBecause then youâll never be with NickâŚâ Mary realized. âYouâll never see him againâŚâ
Dakota sneered at her. The pain in her golden eyes made Mary weep. âLike mother like fucking daughter, howâs that for irony?â
She shook her head.
ââŚIt doesnât matter now.â She took another step forward. âI thought⌠that I could do it differently. That as a contestant, I could get a better outcome than that wretched woman. But in the end⌠I wasnât chosen.â
Then Mary realized the truth. Like a slap across the face. Tears welled up in her eyes and she looked at Dakota in bitter betrayal.
ââŚThatâs why you gave me those pills, isnât it?â She spat. âWhy you pushed so hard to get me pregnant.â
Dakota let out a tired sigh.
âMy father abandoned my mother after he knocked her up. Never thought about her again. Youâre right, Mary. Youâre completely right. I thought that if that happened to you, if Nick got you pregnant⌠then heâd abandon you, just like that man did with herâŚâ
She actually smiled. If you could call that twisted slash across her face a smile.
âBut in the end, the joke was on me.â
Mary clenched her fists. Frustration, anger, and betrayal shot through her like molten lava, and she struck Dakota across the face.
âSMACK!â
Dakota didnât even flinch. She hardly even registered it. She just slowly turned her head back, and looked at Mary with sunken, tired eyes.
âFeel better?â She mocked the redhead.
ââŚIâm sorry for what happened to you,â Mary said. âAnd for what happened⌠to your mother. That was horrible. But why hide it?! If Nick knew-â
Dakota lunged forward and wrapped her fingers around Maryâs throat. The wild look in her eyes froze Mary in place, and she stared, horrified, at the woman in front of her.
âNick is never going to find out about that tape,â she rasped, tightening her grip. âNo one is. Do you understand me?!â
The painful truth Dakota had tried to hide for so long had now been exposed. Brought out into the light.
She couldnât allow that. She would drag it back into the darkness if it was the last thing she ever did- even if that meant dragging Mary into the darkness along with it.
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