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Two and two.

Two wins.

Two losses.

And both losses because of the fucking Reynolds bitches!

First Michelle fails at actually being a lesbian, and now Janice, her cunt of a sister, the only who could actually hurt me physically, gets bent over and fucked against a window like she's never seen a gym in her life.

The fucking bitch.

I had to actually watch her cum.

Through the glass.

I watched her mouth open and her eyes roll back and her knees buckle and I couldn't even hear the disgusting sound she probably made.

But I could see it.

And I wanted to put my fist through the glass.

Hope she enjoyed it.

It was the last orgasm she would ever get.

What was her plan in there? What was her strategy?

She just… threw kicks like some kind of idiot! And such a shitty attempt at trying to choke the woman!

I was pointing at the vibrators! I was screaming at her to grab one! To go on the offensive! To shove something buzzing against that flat-topped freak's clit before the freak could do the same to her!

But did she do any of that? No!

Could she see me pointing? Yes!

Did she fail? OF COURSE SHE FUCKING DID!

I swear to God, if I survive this... if I somehow pull a win out of the next bout and walk out of here a free man... both Reynolds sisters are going to wish they'd never been born.

I had been saving this for a rainy day, but…

They’re about to get a lot more intimate with each other.

Oh yeah.

Maybe stuffed together, at the back of my trunk.

In a 69 position.

Mouth to cunt.

Taped together.

Heads stuck to each other’s wet cunt.

A good little sisterly package.

No, no. That was way too simple.

Something else.

But it needed to be good.

I'd figure it out.

I was creative.

The door to the next area hissed open.

No point standing around here watching Daphne blow kisses at her muscle freak, and watching Janice still leaking juices in a collapsed pile.

I started marching toward the doorway, fists jammed deep into my pockets, my jaw clenched so hard my molars were grinding together.

"Jack."

I didn't stop.

"Jack, wait."

That voice.

That smooth, carefully modulated, always-in-control tone that made me want to rip my hair out.

I stopped in my tracks. Turned around slowly.

She was standing a few feet behind me, arms resting at her sides, her chin tilted down just a fraction.

It was a posture I hadn't seen from her all day.

Something almost... submissive?

No. Not submissive.

Not Daphne.

It had to be something else.

"I was too angry earlier," she said.

I stared at her.

"After you... after what you did with Six. I said things."

She paused. Worked her jaw.

This was hard for her.

"I didn't mean it. Not entirely." She took a breath. "Whatever happens in the next bout... I want you to know that I respect your cunning. Your skills. The way you handle your subjects... it's impressive, even when it's infuriating."

Was she serious right now?

Was she actually...

No.

No, she wasn't.

I could see it.

The calculation behind the softness.

The way her eyes stayed sharp even as her voice went gentle.

She was hedging her bets.

She was thinking: What if I lose the next round? What if this guy ends up owning me? Better start laying groundwork now. Better start building bridges I can use later.

Was everything she did just an act?

"I hope..." she continued, and she actually swallowed, like the next words tasted bad, "...that maybe there's a tiny chance we could continue as partners. After all this. Real partners."

Partners.

She wanted to be partners.

She even extended her arm.

This was…

Such a fucking stupid move from her.

Did she really think this was going to work?

That I’d actually be this stupid to believe her, after everything I had seen from her today?

Like I was some clay doll she could manipulate at her will?

She really thought I was a dumbass, didn’t she?

It made me angry.

It made me really angry.

So angry it was getting hard to control.

Something was coming out. Something that had been building up all day.

I took a step toward her.

Then another.

Daphne didn't retreat, but I saw her weight shift, her center of gravity dropping a fraction of an inch.

Ready. Alert.

The body language of someone who had been in dangerous situations before.

"Partners," I repeated. "Sure. We can be partners."

Her eyebrows rose slightly.

"In the same way a man and his dog are partners."

The eyebrows stopped rising.

"I've been thinking about it, Daphne. Really thinking. And I've decided something." I stepped closer. Close enough to smell her perfume, something dark and expensive. "When this is over... and it will be over, and I will be the one still standing... I am going to love watching you skimper up to me."

She didn't blink.

"Wearing nothing but a collar."

Still didn't blink.

But something in her jaw tightened.

"Running up to me on all fours when I get home. Whimpering. Hoping. Begging for that glorious moment when I finally allow you to…" I leaned in, dropping my voice, "...to bite your teeth around my zipper… and pull down. Slowly. And then… then you’ll do everything you can to show me how what a good little puppy you are, and why your master should keep you."

Silence.

A beat.

Two beats.

And then Daphne's eyes changed.

It was subtle.

If I hadn't been standing that close, I might have missed it.

But the veneer of diplomacy, the calculated softness, the bridge-building, it all just... evaporated.

Her mask was gone.

"I'm going to add that to my list," she said quietly.

Her voice was different now.

Lower.

No performance in it.

No charm, no manipulation, no strategy.

Just... intent.

"The growing list of activities I've already planned for you, Jack." She tilted her head.

She held my gaze.

"I'm going to love seeing the energy you put into recreating that artistic vision of yours. Every detail. The crawling. The whimpering. The zipper." A ghost of a smile. "We have all the time in the world, after all. Nothing but time to practice. Until you get it just right."

We stared at each other.

For a good while.

Just two predators who had decided to drop their guards.

And the thing that coiled through my gut wasn't anger.

Not exactly.

It was... fear?

No.

It couldn't be fear.

I had broken women who were stronger than Daphne, meaner than Daphne, more determined than Daphne.

Hadn't I?

Had I, though?

Had I ever actually broken anyone who was truly my equal?

…

We held eye contact for another second, and then we both turned and walked toward the next area without another word.

There was nothing left to say.

The winner would take all.

The next room was simple.

Just a rectangular space with blank walls and two doors on the far end.

One labeled JACK. One labeled DAPHNE.

No windows. No equipment.

Then the AI voice filled the room.

"The rules for the fifth and final bout will now be explained."

Final bout.

This was it.

This was actually, really, truly it.

"Each user will enter their designated room, where one of their subjects is waiting. The user will issue one command. A single command. This command is intended to showcase the full and complete devotion of the user's subject."

One command.

One shot.

"Once both showcases are complete, a panel of judges will evaluate the performances and hold a vote to determine the victor. The user whose subject demonstrates the most compelling devotion wins the bout, and the duel."

A… panel?

So there was multiple of them?

I mean, of course, there had to be, but…

The AI voice transmission cut out.

My heart was hammering.

Okay, focus.

One command.

I had been thinking about this since I first saw the rules for the matches. Turning it over and over in my mind, examining it from every angle, discarding options, circling back, discarding again.

What did you order someone to do that proved devotion?

Something painful?

Something degrading?

Something that goes against every instinct they had?

Or something... else?

Daphne and I approached our respective doors.

We stopped at the same time, hands on handles.

I’m not going to lie. I was curious to know who she had in there. Another bully from her school? Perhaps a second sister she hadn’t mentioned yet?

But I didn't ask. I wouldn't give her the satisfaction of seeing me wonder.

Daphne pulled her door open.

And just before she stepped through, I heard her voice, soft and almost affectionate.

"Hello there, mommy dearest."

I stumbled.

Mommy?

Did she actually have her own...

No. I couldn't... did she just say...

No.

I closed my eyes. Shook my head.

Don't think about it. Don't spend another second on it. Whatever Daphne had going on in that room was Daphne's thing. Her strategy. Her shit. Her perversions.

I had my own.

I opened my door.

Gretchen.

She was standing in the center of the room, arms wrapped around herself, completely naked.

The room behind her was... extensive. A king-sized bed dominated the center, sheets pulled taut and pristine.

But everything else, every wall, every surface, every corner, was filled with equipment. BDSM equipment.

An X-cross bolted to the far wall, leather restraints dangling from each point. A St. Andrew's cross beside it. A spanking bench. A suspension frame with chains and carabiners. A rack of floggers arranged by size. Riding crops. A bullwhip coiled on a hook. Paddles, wooden and leather. Ball gags in three sizes. Nipple clamps, both adjustable and clover. A Wartenberg wheel. Spreader bars. Rope, miles of it, in various colors, neatly wound. Anal plugs arranged in graduating sizes. Dildos mounted on a pegboard like tools in a workshop. Vibrators, wands, eggs. Electro-stimulation pads. Candles. Blindfolds.

It was like someone raided every sex shop in the country and dumped the inventory into a single room.

Almost as good as what I built in Mirage's basement. Almost.

Okay, perhaps a bit better.

Gretchen's eyes found mine and I could see the panic in them.

Raw, desperate, pulsing.

Her mouth moved. Tried to form words.

Nothing came out.

Right. I told all of them to stay quiet earlier today.

God, she looked terrified.

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Standing there shaking, goosebumps spreading across her pale skin, her white pixie cut messy over her face, her new tits shaking, her hands gripping her own elbows so hard the knuckles were white.

She was so far from the ruthless boss I used to have.

She didn't know where she was.

She didn't know what was happening.

She just knew she woke up naked in a room full of instruments designed to cause pain and pleasure, and now I was walking toward her, and the last time she had seen me I was dragging her into a warehouse and telling her to shut up.

I crossed the room.

She flinched when I raised my hand.

I placed it on her throat.

Not squeezing. Not threatening.

Just... holding.

I knew she liked this.

Sure, her choking trait wasn’t active right now, but she had to get some residual pleasure from me choking her by now even without it.

I felt her pulse jackhammering against my palm.

A hundred and forty, maybe more. Rabbit heartbeat.

"Shhh," I murmured.

Her breathing stuttered. Hitches. Started to slow. Fractionally.

"Look at me."

She did. Blue eyes, wet at the edges, locked onto mine.

I kept my voice steady. Low. The voice I used when she was spiraling. The one that worked better than any restraint. "Listen to me. I need you to trust me. Can you do that?"

She swallowed hard against my palm, and nodded.

It was time.

Probably the most important decision of my life.

What command to give.

Something physical?

Order her to take pain without flinching?

Order her to degrade herself?

Order her to perform some act so extreme that the judges couldn't deny its power?

But every time I went down that road, I came back to the same problem: Daphne could match me. Whatever extreme I reached for, she was already there.

She was the definition of a sadistic, ruthless psychopath. Her subjects were hardened, rebuilt, broken and reassembled from the ground up.

I couldn't out-torture her.

I couldn't out-degrade her.

But maybe...

Maybe I could do something she couldn't.

I had been thinking about what Gretchen had become.

Not just the submission.

Not just the obedience.

Something deeper than that.

Something that started in the office, and grew in the bedroom, and kept growing every time I pushed her past a boundary she never thought she would cross.

Not only because the app made her.

Because something in her wanted to.

I was pretty sure about that by now.

I took my hand from her throat.

I stepped back.

I looked at her standing there.

Nude. Her newly enlarged tits standing stiffly. No longer shaking.

"Gretchen."

She straightened slightly. Instinct.

I was silent for a while, building up the weight for my next words.

This was it.

This HAD to work.

There was no other option.

"Worship me."


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