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Chapter 722
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Exarch-of-Sechrima
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“So Nick? Who gave you a better kiss?” Rose demanded.
“I would also like to know,” Dawn said, looking intently at him.
Nick was stuck in a situation where there were no correct answers. He looked from Rose to Dawn and then back to Rose again, wondering if there was some way he could get out of this.
“It’s not a competition,” he struggled to say.
“Yes it is,” Rose bluntly interrupted him.
Whelp, so much for that.
“You’re different people,” Nick tried instead. “You kiss in different ways, comparing them isn’t going to work.”
“The kisses were different,” Dawn agreed, “but there was still one you enjoyed more, wasn’t there?”
Damn it, Dawn.
Nick found himself under immense pressure from both girls, and wasn’t sure how to leverage that into an escape. His eyes leapt between the two girls, wishing it was as easy as deciding which kiss he liked more. But things weren’t so simple! They were both sensual and intimate in their own ways, and both had stimulated him!
He might as well flip a coin to determine the winner, and that would have made him feel even worse!
As Nick’s mind raced, he found himself hoping for salvation the only way he could.
He needed a distraction, and a good one.
“Look! There they are! See, what did I tell you? You want to find Rose, check the movie theater! She’ll definitely take Daddy there!”
Nick had only been this happy to hear Sylvia’s voice once before. And if you were comparing your situation to when she’d been brought back from being turned into sand, that spoke volumes about how serious things were.
He turned, and flinched. Sylvia wasn’t alone. She had Carly and Marley with her, and Morgana as well, though it took a second to recognize her because the goth girl wasn’t dressed in her usual style, she was wearing more casual, brighter clothes.
What Nick noticed most, though, was the presence of Vivian Carrington. As the group of girls drew closer he saw the heiress tense up almost imperceptibly when their eyes met, and in that moment he knew she must be feeling just as uncomfortable about this as he was.
She did a far better job of hiding it, though.
“Sorry to interrupt!” Vivian chirped, flashing a wide smile. “We’re just going to take a minute. We aren’t getting in the way of anything important, I hope?” She added, her voice carrying the faintest tinge of anxiety.
The last thing she wanted to do right now was give Nick another reason to be upset with her.
And that was the furthest thing from Nick’s mind.
“No, you showed up just in time!” Nick said a little too enthusiastically. “We just finished watching a movie. Did you guys need something?”
Vivian was taken aback slightly by how eager he sounded. The other girls were a little surprised as well, it wasn’t like Nick to focus so intently on an interruption, especially when he was on a date.
Rose and Dawn both glared at him, unimpressed.
“He weaseled out of it,” Rose muttered.
“Coward,” Dawn pouted, puffing up her cheeks.
Both girls glanced at each other.
Well… he’s just doing it to spare her feelings since he’s such a nice guy, so I guess I can let it slide. We all know he liked my kiss better.
That was more or less the thought shared by both of them.
Vivian cleared her throat. “Well… glad to hear we’re not interrupting anything. We’ll be really quick. A certain young lady would like to say hello, and get your opinion on something, if you don’t mind? Morgana?”
The fashionista stepped aside, and beckoned Morgana to come forward. Her earlier confidence had waned slightly due to having some time to think clearly again, but now that she had been put on the spot her excitement had flared back up and she stepped forward, holding her head up high. She crossed her arms over her chest, emphasizing her breasts, and looked Nick right in the eyes. Her cheeks were red.
“W-well?” She stammered out, but only a little! “What do you think? Do you… like it? I’m trying out something new, and I wanted to get your opinion.”
Morgana played it cool, not wanting Nick to think that his opinion was the most important thing in the world to her. She did a pretty good job of it, trying to look disinterested, even though she was secretly hanging on his every word.
When she saw the look of desire in his eyes, she nearly collapsed with relief.
“Wow, Morgana, I’ve never seen you in those colors before,” Nick said, his eyes widening as he took in her new clothes. He was pretty sure that this was the first time he’d ever seen her wear something that wasn’t black or dark purple. “You look really good! I think it suits you!”
Morgana’s eyes widened and her mouth fell open. Hearing she looked good was one thing, but that these clothes suited her?!
“You… you really think so?” She asked, looking down at her outfit. She tugged awkwardly at the neck of her sweater. “I don’t look weird dressed in bright colors?”
“I think it depends on the color, honestly,” Nick said. “But yeah. I mean, you look good in just about anything, but I think if you wanted to wear bright clothes, then you could.”
“It’s her complexion,” Vivian jumped in. “Paler complexions go great with blacks, but cool colors like blue, green, and pink also work well. But because of Morgana’s dark hair, the deeper, warm yellow also stands out too, and draws an excellent contrast. It was a little difficult getting the shading right, but I think…”
Her voice trailed off as she noticed Morgana looked like she was about to pass out. She wasn’t used to people talking this much about her appearance and it was starting to get overwhelming.
Vivian coughed. “…Anyway, I’m glad to hear you like it! That means I did a great job!” She winked at Morgana. “And I could only do such a great job because I had such a great subject!”
“Congratulations, Morgana!” Sylvia applauded. “I agree, you look really nice!”
“It’s definitely a nice look,” Dawn said warmly, making sure to compliment her friend. “I’m really proud of you for stepping out of your comfort zone and trying something new. That must have been difficult. But it looks really great!”
Morgana’s chest swelled with an inflated sense of self-worth. “It wasn’t that difficult,” she boasted. “I just did my best, that’s all!”
Vivian decided not to share how many times Morgana had tried to back out. The important thing was that she liked the look now.
“…One question though,” Carly said, raising her hand, “why is Rose dressed up like the witch now? That I don’t get.”
Morgana blinked. She turned and noticed Rose for the first time, and let out a surprised yelp when she saw the other woman dressed up in black.
“Those… those are my clothes!” She stammered in confusion. “How-!?”
“I think I pull it off quite well, don’t you?” Rose crooned, striking a pose. She tipped the brim of her hat and pushed her expanded chest out. “Nick certainly thinks so.”
Morgana began to sweat. Had she made a mistake, changing her outfit? Or…
That was close… I’m actually glad Vivian made me change my outfit this morning. Rose looks so great in that… do I really want to be compared to her? What if she makes a better goth witch than me!? Or maybe-!
She quickly shook her head.
“Being… being a goth is about more than just looking nice in dark clothes!” Morgana declared, pointing an accusatory finger at Rose. “Same with being a witch! It’s all about the attitude! You can’t be all… all… perky!”
Rose smirked. “Sorry,” she apologized with a shrug that made her breasts bounce. “These girls don’t really know any other way to be!”
Morgana turned red and her hand fell limply to her side. “Awawa…”
“Besides,” Rose continued, sauntering forward, “that’s some pretty tough talk coming from a girl who interrupted my date with Nick just to show off her new outfit. Don’t you think that’s rather rude of you? One might think you’re trying to start a fight!”
Nick frowned. He didn’t like the tone of Rose’s voice, but he could understand her irritation. It was his fault, though, not Morgana’s. He couldn’t just stand back and let her take the heat for this.
“Ros-”
“I’m sorry I interrupted your date!” Morgana loudly apologized, drowning out Nick’s attempt to mediate the situation. “But you stole my style, so I think that makes us even!”
“She raises a valid point, Rose, let it go,” Dawn said, coming to her friend’s defense. But she was also a little miffed at the interruption, which Rose picked up on.
“Aren’t you upset as well, Dawn?” Rose asked, frowning. “Because they got in our way, Nick never decided on a winner!”
“Huh?” Marley frowned.
“A winner?” Carly looked confused. The twins glanced at each other, then at Vivian, who also seemed a little surprised.
The heiress scratched her cheek. “Sorry, um… look, we can get out of your hair…”
“Winner?” A cheerful voice piped up.
Nick froze. Just a couple minutes ago, he’d been overjoyed to hear Sylvia come and interrupt their discussion.
But now her curiosity was piqued. And in a bad way.
“Winner, you mean like of a competition? A challenge, maybe?” Sylvia bounced forward, rocking on her heels. Her eyes gazed excitedly up at Rose and Dawn. “Fill me in! I’m just dying to hear about this competition involving Daddy, my girls.”
Rose smirked. Before Nick could stop her, she told them the whole story.
“…And that about sums it up,” Rose finished.
“It’s really not that big of a deal,” Dawn said, pushing her glasses up her nose. “Just a kissing contest. I mean, I definitely won, thanks to my transformation. But it’s no big deal.”
Nick sighed. “I told you, there wasn’t a winner,” he said, shaking his head. “I liked the kisses from both of you. Can’t you ladies save the competition for tonight, in the Master’s Suite? Wasn’t that the whole point of your transformation, Dawn?” He pleaded.
“Gotta say, I agree with Nick on this one,” Carly said. “Sex is all about having a good time! There’s no need to compete about who did it better! You think Marley wants to constantly be comparing herself to me every time she does anything with Nick? Of course not! Come on, think about each other’s feelings a little bit!”
Marley slowly turned her head towards her sister, giving Carly the stink eye.
“…And what’s that supposed to mean?”
Carly shrugged. “What? I’m just saying that if you and I had a sex competition, I would win.”
“Yeah, maybe in terms of raw numbers, but that doesn’t mean you’re better than me at it!” Marley protested, her cheeks turning red. She couldn’t believe she was arguing about this, in front of Nick, no less! The last thing she wanted was for Nick to think she cared this much about… who could have sex better!
…But she did. As embarrassing as it was to admit, a part of her really did care. Her cheeks burned with shame and she looked down. But before her sister could take that as a sign of surrender her head shot back up again, and she looked fiercely into Carly’s eyes.
“There’s no telling which one of us would be better,” Marley declared. “That would be up to Nick to decide!”
Carly smirked, amused. She didn’t really care one way or another which of them was “better” at sex, but the fact that her sister was so invested in it was just adorable! “Okay sis, I see what you’re saying,” she cooed, batting her eyelashes. “And sure, you’re right, maybe we can’t say for sure who’s better. But my point is that it doesn’t matter! It’s all about having fun, right?”
She looked at the others for support.
“I, uh… ahum, uwaaehh… mumum…” Morgana’s brain was overheating from stimulus, given the subject matter.
“Don’t look at me,” Vivian said, scratching her head awkwardly. “I’m the last person you should be asking about this sort of stuff.”
“I think that the only way to prove it’s not a competition is to compete!” Sylvia said. “And that way you’ll both see that there’s no need to compete!”
Her ulterior motives were scribbled all over her face; she didn’t even try to hide the excitement in her eyes.
“Okay, I think we all just need to stop right here,” Nick said, stepping forward and holding up his hands. “Carly, you’re right, it’s not a competition.” He turned to Rose and Dawn. “Okay? I’m not going to say who I liked kissing better, because you were both amazing.”
Both girls were pleased to hear that, even if they were a little disappointed that no one was named the winner.
Sylvia was more disappointed, though.
“But we’re still competing tonight, right?” Dawn asked sharply. “Because my transformation disagrees, it definitely thinks sex is a competition.”
Vivian laughed. “Well… with that in mind, we should probably excuse ourselves,” she said, looking at the others. “We’ve gotten in your way enough on this date, we’ll let you get back to your little snogfest, sound like a plan ladies?”
Her singsong voice was laced with innuendo, and she wasn’t subtle about the wink she aimed Nick’s way, either. Tipping her hat, she turned back towards the others.
But then she stopped.
“Oh, one more thing,” she said, turning back to Rose and Dawn. She was looking at Dawn in particular. “Dawn, can I ask you something?”
Dawn frowned. She shifted her weight uneasily on her high heels. “What?” She asked suspiciously, leering at Vivian.
The heiress smiled a pleasant smile.
“You haven’t gotten a transformation upgraded by Sylvia’s Sneak Peek transformation, have you?” She asked.
Dawn bristled, and her tail stood up straight behind her. Sylvia’s eyes widened.
“Oh hey, yeah! No, she hasn’t!” Sylvia said, shaking her head. She bounced forward and grabbed Dawn’s hands in hers. “What do you think? We talked about it a little bit before, but never settled on anything conclusive! So do you want to test it out? Any transformation you want!”
Dawn was a little taken aback by the sudden declaration from the other girl. Her eyes shot over to Nick out of reflex before turning back to Sylvia, and she swallowed.
“Um, look, Sylvia…”
“I think you should go for it, Dawn,” Rose taunted the cat girl with an amused smirk. “Don’t you want to have a chance when we compete tonight?”
Dawn looked at her. “Excuse me?” She asked sharply.
Rose shrugged. “I mean, it couldn’t hurt, right? If we really are going to compete with each other, then logically you’d want to give yourself every advantage you could, right?”
She took off her hat and fanned herself with it. “Of course, if you’d like an excuse for why you lose, you can decline… personally though, I know I’m going to win upgrade or not.”
“Come on, Rose, lay off her,” Nick urged her. He wanted to say again that it wasn’t a competition, but in this case it kind of was. And Rose was being her snooty self, as usual. But he had a feeling that her arrogance could backfire. Badly.
He really hoped that Dawn wouldn’t take things too far, though. For all of their sakes.
Dawn squinted at Rose and pinched her lips together in a frown. Nick recognized that look from her. She was thinking hard about something, crunching the numbers, and trying to figure out if she should make a certain decision or not.
Then her expression slackened and she turned to Sylvia with determination in her eyes. “Fine then,” she said, her gaze burning with the intensity of competition. “If that’s the way you want to play it, Rose, we can play it that way. Bring it on, Sylvia! If she wants me to upgrade my transformation, then I’ll upgrade it. But let’s up the stakes, shall we?”
Sylvia perked up when she heard that. “Up the stakes? How?”
“Well, I have a lot of transformations to pick from, right?” Dawn pointed out. “And you can only upgrade one of them, after all.”
“That’s a good point,” Carly noted. “You don’t want to make a wrong choice and end up upgrading a transformation you don’t want.”
Dawn nodded. “Exactly. Hence why I think Nick should pick which transformation I get upgraded. It’s all about making him feel best, right?” She pointed out, looking directly at Rose as she said that.
Rose frowned. She narrowed her eyes at the other girl, knowing that the gauntlet had been thrown. She’d previously arranged for something similar with her Method Acting transformation to appeal to Nick, but now Dawn was stepping on her toes! And doing it first, no less!
And it wasn’t like she could say anything when this had been her idea in the first place, goading Dawn like that. So she could only watch on sourly as Dawn rubbed her nose in it.
“Well, Nick?” Dawn looked at him. “Let me refresh your memory about my transformations, so you can pick which one you’d like Sylvia to upgrade.”
She winked at him as she pulled up the list of her transformations on her screen. “Don’t worry about going easy on me. Right now, it’s all about what pleases you the most, right?” She chirped, batting her eyelashes.
- Yes, It’s THAT Anime You’re Thinking Of, Don’t Ask: Dawn has always been a fan of animals, and cats are her absolute favorite! But now she’ll get the chance to be much closer to cats than she ever thought she could be- because she’ll grow cute little cat ears, and an eager little tail to match! Make sure to give her lots of petting. (Animal Lover)
- Catch a Tiger by the Tail: Dawn’s tail and ears function just like a cat’s do normally. But now, their sensitivity has been heightened, to the point of becoming an erogenous zone. Contact with either her ears or tail will sexually arouse her, and the more prolonged that contact is, the more intense the arousal spike will be for her. This effect will be more pleasurable depending on the type of fondling. (Punishment)
- Sexterity: Dawn spent a lot of time in her youth practicing gymnastics. But she’ll find that now, nothing is more flexible than the parts of her body designed for getting men off. Dawn can give the perfect handjob. The perfect blowjob. Even the perfect footjob. Even a tailjob with some practice. Her tongue can extend now as well, perfect for coiling around a hard shaft. (Gymnast)
- Like Catnip: In the wild, animals are drawn to one another through pheromones, and now Dawn will be as well. She’ll develop an attraction to the musk of her master, as well as the sexual aroma of the other contestants. While these feelings are manageable at first, it will slowly grow the longer she’s in proximity with the scent. (Animal Lover)
- Poser: Dawn will find herself aroused at the thought of being Nick’s poseable little sex doll. Her size and flexibility means that he can use her in ways that he can’t with the other girls, and the possibilities that entails can’t help but turn her on. She’ll find herself drawn towards being sexually submissive in bed, finding the idea of Nick using her in whatever position he wants while she’s little more than a toy for his pleasure to be incredibly hot. (Gymnast)
- Self-Grooming: Cats don’t tend to prefer baths. While thankfully Dawn won’t be given an aversion to taking showers when necessary, her primary method of encouraging cleanliness will be to lick herself clean. And just like a cat, this will extend to the people around her, as well. She’ll see nothing wrong with licking the people she’s closest to, and her tongue will change to be rougher, like a cat’s, while also bringing significant pleasure to the people she licks. (Animal Lover)
- The New Thing All the Kids Are Into: At the beginning of each round, Dawn will have a vision of a specific sexual act. (Blowjob, handjob, etc.) She will feel more strongly compelled to do that act than any other form of sex, and urge other girls to do the same, aspiring to show that she can do it better than they can. Each time Dawn “wins” against another girl in this competition, as determined honestly by Nick, she will receive a small sum of VP as a prize. (Competitive)
“Wow,” Vivian said with a whistle. “Dawn’s really giving this her all, huh?”
“That’s pretty bold of her, gotta say,” Carly laughed. “I’m not sure I’d be able to make a move like that one!”
“You probably could,” Marley replied. She knew how bold her sister could be, and how seldom she thought of the consequences of her actions when it meant good sex.
“W-well, I definitely couldn’t,” Morgana mumbled, looking down.
As for Nick, he found himself spoiled for choice. And absolutely petrified as he looked over a list of Dawn’s transformations to figure out which one he should have upgraded.
And Sylvia was no help either. She looked positively giddy at this turn of events! When she’d gotten this transformation, she never would have imagined any of the girls using it in this way! But it was oh so perfect! She couldn’t wait to see what Nick ended up choosing.
Dawn stood still as a statue, still not having fully processed the ramifications of her decision. But it was too late to go back now. She’d made a choice, and she would have to see it through. Even if it completely bit her in the ass.
She just had to hope Nick wouldn’t make a bad choice himself.
But it's Nick, so...
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