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Chapter 5
by Unknown7
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Fred, Farsel, Mordred and Marcus read the 23rd Tenkaichi Budoukai Arc
Fred, Farsel, Mordred, Marcus and Jormund's corpse appeared.
"Okay, Unknown7, you do realise that Jormund can't respond due to being dead, right?"
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"Okay, they do have a point about not overstaying the welcome" said Fred, "even Unknown7 wants to end it at the Demon Lord arc, though that will apparently be about another 70 chapters for them to enjoy or be tortured by. The iconic thing is that Unknown7 has no knowledge of Fire emblem outside of Super Smash Bros"
"This is the inverse of the 'Captive Prince' moment" said Marcus, "this might have been the one time you should have given her benefit of the doubt. What is Fire Emblem anyway? Does it involve a guy being turned into a girl and using the resulting loophole to wield a magic sword that should only be used by virgins to slay a dragon?"
"I see Marcie has also misspelt 'dead' and I know it was Marcie because Gina would have no idea what a Tenkaichi Budoukai even is. And they seem to think I've already conquered the world, a single continent is not the world. Honestly, Americans think nothing exists outside their own country"
"To be fair, Unknown7 didn't even think of a name for the continent until nearly 100 chapters in"
"It was a lot of prize money" said Farsel, "I wouldn't expect Earth females to understand how Arizelle economics work"
"Also, Alice would kill me if I used slaves to repair the kingdom" said Fred, "she still doesn't approve of my use of sex slaves even if I treat them better than most people would. I like how they think we're 'heroes' when I'm literally a dark lord. Marcie probably thinks Sauron, Darth Vader (the original, not the name I used) and Lord Voldemort are the good guys"
"Whats North Korea?" asked Marcus.
"I'm still not over the chastity cage" said Farsel.
"I didn't think of the pooping" said Fred, "iconically Unknown7 was going for surprising realistic outcome on that so its pretty embarrassing that she failed to be realistic on that"
"I'm for one am glad it wasn't realistic"
"I'm surprised they made such a big deal out of it, its no grosser than nose picking"
"Turns out Unknown7 also misspelt feces" said Marcus.
"That was probably autocorrect. It actually happened as I was writing this. Marcus nearly said 'faces' until I corrected. In fact the correct spelling has a red line underneath. I have no idea what Unknown7 meant by 'started on her head' though the image is pretty funny. Honestly, Marcie should just accept her poop fetish, already"
"Well, Unknown7's-" began Farsel.
"No, I mean Marcie's poop fetish" said Fred, "I get she's embarrassed about it but with all the other weird stuff on here... Anyway, I'm surprised they'd waited until now to complain about ripping off Dragon Ball"
"To be fair, Unknown7 was more subtle about it before" said Mordred, "it would have been better if I won"
"The thing is that an tournament will be a ripoff of Dragon Ball by definition" said Fred, "there's no way round that"
"Iconically, I was originally planned to be male" said Mordred, "but then someone in the comments suggesting my father get turned into a female. Unknown7 couldn't find a way to make that work so she decided Jormund should have a daughter instead of a son. Unknown7 didn't even give me a name until chapter 100"
"Whats wrong with Predigger?" asked Fred, "don't tell me we pulled a Marel and used a racial slur. Actually, I wouldn't take that too seriously. Marcie did previously complain about imagined 'misogyny' in Lindsey Shepard: The Path To Justice"
"Honestly, I don't understand Earth satire" said Farsel.
“Sigh...we have to talk about that, do we?”
"Its, we have to talk about, DON'T we?" said Marcus, "learn grammar. God, these Earth people are gonna be the **** of me"
"Honestly, I feel more insulted about them calling Dragon Ball third rate" said Fred, "or implying that Kratos is lame. Also, what kind of loser likes the tournament in the Buu saga?"
"Apparently, they decided to end it here" said Mordred, "I think Marcie might have rage quitted. Pissing off Unknown7' is just a pretext so she can avoid the fact that she legitimately can't spell 'unknown' or 'dead'"
"Well, it might take more than three months" said Fred, "I mean Unknown7 now intends to finish it at the Demon Lord arc which she plans to make 70 chapters long"
"Jesus Christ" said Mordred, "thats longer than mine and Marcia's arc combined. Well, at least Marcie and Gina get a nice break. Its not like Unknown7 will-"
Mordred reads from some papers.
"Oh still, she's planning another Isekai story. Apparently she finds the premise quiet... limiting"
"What?"
"Its from a completely different Isekai story, one not shackled by the quest to become a 'Dark Lord'"
Fred looked in utter shock.
"Please, Unknown7, I thought we had something special"
"I'm sorry, Fred" said Unknown7, "but Marcie and Gina are actually right about how we need to end it at the suitable place. But a tournament is certainly not the best place to end things"
Fred was distraught.
"Look, the Demon Lord arc is gonna be about 70 chapters and I might go through other paths after a hiatus"
"Can we get a path where I'm the main character?" asked Farsel.
"Me too" said Mordred.
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