Feedback Request

Hi!

This is the first story I've written in years. I hope to push updates regularly but can't promise anything.

I just wanted to ask, based on what is out so far. What are people's thoughts?

I'll admit I'm not so sure about the pacing so far but I didn't want to spend too long dicking around not getting anywhere.

I'm open to constructive critisism, spelling corrections, suggestions, etc.

I'll likely add images of characters and in sex scenes eventually, likely using ai just because it can make more specific images for the scene but if anyone has art suggestions for characters, I'm open to dms.

Thanks,

IM