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Chapter 58 by ten-tackle

Does the plan work?

Eventually Notes

Overview of completely normal stuff:

Buggy does a backflip, whenever someone says “crackerjack”

Mohji and Cabaji move in slo-mo when fighting Tsuki+ will never disappoint Tsuki

Tsuki inspects Tashigi

Tashigi uses grool as sword polish

Nobody thinks of stealing from Tsuki

Nami enjoys showing off

Nami gets embarrassed and turned on, when seen exposed

People with nipple piercings love showing them of

that when a woman has multiple orgasms during a sexual encounter with me... each subsequent orgasm I give them will be twice as powerful and twice as long as the one before it

Clothes stay in order

Birth-control pills last a year + STD

Tsuki writes superfast+ never runs out of pages

Annaisha can apply her theoretical knowledge to command a ship with three men

Buggy leaves an ear in the captains quarters + can wiggle them

Tsuki can escape all forms of restraint

Tsuki updates normal book

Ring-pirates are perceived as just a circus

Tsuki is only verbally stopped at guarded doors

Tsuki is allowed in any building he got into

Sex is ignored in dialogue

Tsuki has mind-control cum Stronger with people who don't know her

Everything done on Tsuki's behalf is attributed to Tsuki

Tsuki has healing cum

Ring-pirates have full shows

If Tsuki had better, she doesn't have to pay for food

Nice people, who give Tsuki & co. something for free get rich

When Tsuki tells the truth, she is believed

Harem members: Alvida, Nami, Desire, Tashigi, Annaisha

Harem rules: Grow larger breasts, when hit with book 24 hr after sex

Harem girls have perfect clothes

No downsides to sex, no passing out

Harem for life, no downsides, contagious

Harem girls not attractive to men, who couldn't bear turning female

Immune to harm during sex

Harem girls are offered to join in, when walking in on women

Male candidates are not expected to be monogamous

People in Peggy's situation can change their name

Harem Girls find what they're looking for

Notes about the current chapter:

The song is Lucianos Restaurant bei Reinhard Mey https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-58T_aEMB_w

The price is assuming, that 10 Bery is about 1 Yen. This is based mostly on the price of the newspaper, which irl would be about 10 Yen. I couldn't find a conclusive value of the Bery and the pricing appears to be wildly inconsistent. While thinks like snacks at the Davy Back Fight for 500 Bery could be both overpriced or cheap it falls apart as soon as you compare any mention of money being paid with bounties.

If someone can offer a good exchange rate for € or $ to Bery please comment (optimally with solid reasoning). Mine is mostly guessing

The meal is roughly 7$ per person and explicitly meant to be really large portions.

Peggy is an anarchist with a **** problem. To understand, what she believes, here's an oversimplified explanation of anarchism:

Anarchism means roughly “no rulers”. Anarchists reject hierarchies. Hierarchies are commonly conflated with authorities. An authority is any person or institution, which has the right to give orders.

A hierarchy (literally “holy order”) is specifically an authority, that is not justified through qualification but by social constructs.

Simple example: Foreman: Authority. Not hierarchy. The other workers listen to them, because in theory they know better than the average worker how to organize their work.

Company owner: Authority and hierarchy. The workers listen to them, because they own the workplace. Both ownership (as opposed to possession) as well as the workplace (outside of the physical place where work takes place, though the owner of the company usually owns that, too) are social constructs. If tomorrow half the world decided, that money was no longer a thing, the authority of the owner would disappear.

Anarchists want to create/ live in a society, where there are no hierarchies. They are different from for example a communist society lead by a workers council, is that elections too are a social construct and therefor the workers council does not base their authority in qualifications, but in a social construct → a hierarchy (actually there are arguments within anarchist schools, whether election can be considered a qualification, though generally anarchists reject representation through others and prefer direct democracy).

There are obvious overlaps between communism and anarchism the main distinction being the approach: Communists come from the practical humanist angle (if society is structured around capital and capital can be privately owned and passed around, it will obviously lead to the concentration of capital and therefor wealth, which makes the ownership of capital more important than all other human qualities and behaviors to determine their success).

Anarchist come from a more theoretical sociological angle (when humans are equal, than there authority has to be justified).

Especially the entry into anarchism should probably be longer, but I've already taken longer for this chapter than I wanted to and it's getting late so -\_/-

Edit and Addendum:

Firstly I'd like to see, that I'm positively surprised, that these note-chapters actually seem to be appreciated. I thought, I'd end up writing them just for myself.

Secondly: So obviously, that I can't possibly consider it a spoiler, the next chapter will contain a concert. I'm once again asking for your support.

This time the call is much broader: Anything that is fun. Examples of what I'm already planning to use are Big Balls by AC/DC, Love U More by DJ Paul Elstak and any polka I can translate into English.

What's next?

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