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Chapter 8 by TheLeherengin TheLeherengin

Did you know that sharks actually have nurseries?

Dahlia and Alide are Contractually Obligated to Respond

"Is it weird I find Gina's bullying of Lehe kind of hot?" Dahlia asks.

"I'm pretty sure Lehe actually might as well..." Alide answers with a sigh.

"Fucking degenerate," Dahlia teases, "Also about the whole evil Santa thing... Yes, I am in fact evil Santa. That is sort of the intent. In fact lore wise I had to kill the previous Archdemon to get this position and canonically he was even more literally just an evil demon santa... Lehe has been toying around with the idea of writing a bad end chapter in that other story by the same name, where I fail to kill Evil Santa and horrible things happen to me instead," Dahlia explains.

"Yeah, Lehe has been having all sorts of bad end concept ideas ever since Miss-Emmie added a Yulia chapter to that Bad End story, what do you think the odds are she'll ever actually get around to any of them?" Alide asks.

"Zilch..." Dahlia answers.

"Anyway we should probably actually address some criticisms here..." Alide says scrolling a bit through the review.

"Well they're 100% accurate about the character bloat problem. Lehe has been noticeably struggling to give the characters something to do in each post. I don't think Sally has spoken or done anything in a chapter since that bit with the mana infused water, what four five chapters ago? Maple has been mostly just relegated to occasionally saying things just to remind people she exists, Lri as well. Only Cherchiel, Isalia and Goma, and of course Yulia actively have focus on them," Dahlia mentions.

"We should address the nursery thing, btw... The Nursery exists specifically, because there was the possibility of there being way more pregnancies and children involved in this story and as we can imagine children involved in this story would be a problem, so the nursery is a convenient excuse to remove children from the... Inappropriate aspects of the story. As for why Goma got pregnant at all if her child and her pregnancy barely mattered... Two reasons. One, that's just kind of a built in aspect of the Boar Mask... Sower's point was to create progeny and turn women into nice, obedient Breeding Sows... So it made sense for the Boar Mask to retain the desire to procreate and given the dream aspect of the story at the time Goma and Boarchiel had sex, it made sense for it to be able to fulfill this desire... Now notably this should have had an effect, but it didn't mostly because Lehe forgot and didn't want to to fix it retroactively and Goma later getting Atrophy rendered it kind of pointless anyway. The second reason is... There is intended to be a sequel of sorts. Tower of Voices will find a new chosen and start again, but the effects of Yulia's run will not be gone. Lehe already has plans for the now grown up Izzy to have a part in the next Chosen's adventure. Lehe is really thinking forward in regards to some of these events, which will be really sad if it ends up not happening, but guess we'll see," Alide explains.

"God that was a long winded explanation..." Dahlia chastises her.

"It was detailed..." Alide defends herself.

"Let me sum it up for you... Lehe has a pregnancy fetish and wants to do a fucking Boruto style thing in the future," Dahlia summarizes.

"Ugh... What else is there to address?" Alide asks scrolling through the review.

"Well I can say I would love to pin Gina down and fuck her until she couldn't walk," Dahlia says licking her lips.

"As Lehe already admitted, not including a single shark in Calumia was definitely an oversight. I mean Siren's are supposed to be somewhat shark like in some ways, but it was never really established... In case anyone wasn't aware of the obvious, the Sirens and especially the Siren queen were entirely based on the character of Undyne from Undertale, because Lehe is a massive nerd," Alide explains.

"The Sahuagin King however was not intentionally based on the Sea King from One Punch Man, but as soon as Gambio made the comparison it stuck," Dahlia adds.

"Despite the focus on Levateinn's feet while she was tormenting Cherchiel, Lehe does want it mentioned she does not have a foot fetish, she did however write those scenes intending to appease those who do have one," Alide clarifies on Lehe's behalf.

"Honestly... They were correct before and they're correct now, Yulia becoming an Archdemon, shouldn't have been treated as a bad end, it should have been treated more like Lemiel's later deal where it just changes how Yulia's ending at the top of the tower would go," Dahlia says.

"Following the adventures of Archdemon of Lust Yulia as she continued up the tower with her now enslaved allies would have been really fun," Alide agrees.

"do you hear something?" Dahlia suddenly asks.

"What do you mean?" Alide asks and then hesitates, "Wait that... Squelching noise... I know that noise... I hear that quite often from you... That is the sound of a woman masturbating could it be..." Alide starts.

Dahlia giggles and stands running after the sound and then a bit later calls out, "It is! Lehe is actually touching herself to Gina's criticisms! What a good little slut doing as her mistress orders!"

"Ah no that's not-! GET BACK TO THE REVIEW!"

"I can't believe we were **** to segue into that so Lehe could indulge her submissive fetishes to Gina of all people..." Alide mutters.

"I feel dirty and I'm me..." Dahlia agrees.

"I don't think there's anything else to say and I want to go take a shower," Alide states.

"I hope you are equally ashamed of yourself Lehe, bye!" Dahlia says waving to the readers.

Lehe is currently adding Sand Sharks to the Desert Floor as per Gina's orders.

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