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Chapter 3
by CaptainAngel77
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Cora and Cerebia's response
"Why are doing this, Cora?"
"Because Captain Angel told us to?"
"What kind of stupid name is CaptainAngel77, anyway?"
READING IN PROGRESS
The funny thing is that I have a cat girl in Dark Lord also named Cora.
“At this point she gotta be just trolling right?”
"Yeah, our author actually considered changing my name when she found out it was taken. Having read Dark Lord, I don't think the two characters are that similar."
“In this world, monstergirls are prosecuted. So we join our protagonist, a catgirl named Cora who seeks shelter at this academy where monstergirls can life in peace.”
"Life in peace?"
"Not even a five year old is that bad at fucking spelling?"
"Yeah, and if Gambio really was, she'd be making all kinds of other typos, not just "dead" and "live". She has to be doing this on purpose."
“Doggirls are kinda cute, but they have nothing on Sharkgirls!”
"FUCK YOU, GINA!!! I AM WAY CUTER THAN SAMBITA!"
“At any rate this is not reflective of how cats and dogs interact with each other. Dogs are, for the most part, very friendly to Cats.”
"Sharks don't walk on land and lions are not fucking purple either, you fucking whore!"
"I am going to **** the shit out of you." said Cerebia.
“You know with this author this phrase could be literal.”
"Err... what?"
"Yeah, I don't get it either. Is Marcie trying to imply I eat my own shit because I'm a dog? RACIST BITCH!!!"
"Yeah, our author has never written any such story so I don't really get what she's talking about? They might have a point about the Cs."
“It displeases me greatly that this ignorance still persists. Frankenstein was the doctor, not the monster. I also have to point out that using both Frankenstein and the mummy is quite redundant given that both are reanimated corpses.”
"Marcie is not very familiar with classic monsters. She probably thinks vampires and zombies are the same thing."
"That girl is obviously a fucking poser. I bet her glasses are just for show and she doesn't actually need them. Probably listens to classical music because she thinks it makes her look smart rather than because of her musical tastes. She reminds me of Athena."
"In any case, Cerebia, the founders of the four houses are not really important to the overall plot. Gina does have a point about the Harry Potter influences."
"Yeah well, J.K. Rowling ripped off Lord of the Rings when she created those Dementors. They look almost exactly like fucking Nazgul."
“Oh yes, we didn't mention it, but as expected Angel loves introducing a fuckton of character at once. I don't even remember which one of these is the sharkgirl!”
"They do realise, its a school, right? There's gonna be a shit ton of lot of fucking characters there."
"The sharkgirl is Sambita. According to Alicia's notes, she's named after the Japanese mythological creatures called Samebito. They serve a sea dragon god called Ryuujin."
"I think Marcie and Gina might have forgotten the earlier scenes some of those characters were in. And what the fuck do they mean by this username?"
"It is a bit hypocritical for Marcie to imply such a thing given how obvious her own author has been about it."
"She's obviously going for the accuse others of what she's done thing. Did she really think misspelling a few simple words was gonna fool us? And is Gina some kinda fucking snowflake? I'm assuming she thinks Captain Stupid Name based Rina on her because their names sound similar."
"I guess the two are not familiar with Persona 5. Rina was based on Kamoshida. Her name was going to be Rhina but auto-correct changed it to Rina and Captain Angel did not wanna go through the frustration of constantly correcting it when Rina works well enough."
"I guess we should avoid using names like Dina, Hina, Mina, Nina or Tina for the future antagonists otherwise Gina's fucking head might explode."
“When the fuck was it ever established that Cora and Cerebia had the hots for each other? Cerebia was just starting to be slightly less cold to Cora and then they go from “I guess you are not that bad” to “lets screw each other” in the blink of an eye? What the fuck?”
"Sorry, that was our bad. Captain Angel was trying to fix the lack of sex problem in Anime Club Harem. Its something of a balancing act."
"Is this fucking thing over?"
"Yes, our response is over but Captain Angel still wants us to do Lois Lane's Night Out as an experiment that might led to us getting in on the action in future reviews."
"FUCK FUCKING FUCK!"
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