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Chapter 23
by MIkeLarryGARY
Who does Mark see?
Chronos
"Who are you!? And where is Katie?"
“My name is Chronos, the primordial god of time."
“The father of the Greek gods?”
“Close, his uncle. Although people have merged us.” He then waved a Smokey hand and the time-stopped figures of Katie, Nadia, and Ashley showed up standing at attention before the ethereal creature, who seemed to solidify into a Greek looking man. Ashley was stark naked and looked more so between the dressed forms the two sisters.
Mark trembled before this clearly powerful being. He looked to Katie for support, but she was frozen and simply staring ahead, unaware of where she was.
“Why…why have you summoned me here?”
Chronos did not answer, and simply approached the frozen Katie, grabbing her chin in his hand, turning her head side-to-side. “This one here is a fine specimen”, he then pried open Katie’s mouth so as to inspect her teeth. “I wish you had listened to me about freezing her.”
“You…you’re…you’re the voice in my head?”
“Oh yes, I am actually the source of your new powers.” At this point Chronos removed Katie's trousers and was now feeling up Katie’s bum, which caused her body to wobble in place. “Certainly I wouldn’t be affected by them.”
“Why would you tell me to freeze my best friend?”, Mark yelled outraged. He had been growing angrier by the minute as Chronos poked and prodded Katie, she was to be his dam-it.
“If I recall, you permanently froze your big sister here. She's family, more than a best friend.” Chronos then began to inspect Ashley, doing the Same to her as he had done with Katie.
“I..I..uhmmm.”
Chronos raised a hand. “I do not judge, but that does bring me as to why I chose you.”
“It does?”
“Yes, it does.” The eldritch being then begins to grope Ashley, weighing her breasts in his hands. “You see, I am the last of my kind, and in order to survive, I must feed off of human potential. And you see, you are center too many with loads of potential.
“I am?”
“You are. Ashley here, she had some”, he let go of his older sister’s breasts and pointed to Katie. “Your friend Katie, she would have had a lot. She is going to win gold at the Olympics." He began to poke and prod at Nadia’s frozen form, “this one however, has little to none and is not at all what I want. Not nutritious at all!” Nadia did not react to the insult, simply staring forward with a blank look on her face.
“That is why you gave me time powers? To feed off of my friends and family?”
“I believe you froze Ashley on your own precognitive. But we must get down to brass tacks here."
"Okay, can you explain what you mean?"
"I will grant this one time of refusal but when I ask you to freeze someone, you will freeze them." Chronos said with a stern face.
"So you want me to freeze the 'nutritious variety' of women. Will you be able to tell me? And where would I store them?"
"Yes, but I will not be telling you, unless it's a very rare case, in order to make it fun. You will have to take guesses. for everyone has potential. You will just have to make your best guess. Perhaps freeze yours schools entire cheerleading squad or the swim team, or even a celebrity or two if you see one, that’s almost guaranteed to get potential. Thirdly, you now have a storage unit all paid for, all taxes included so the IRS won’t be after us. Any other questions?”
Mark found it odd that a powerful being like this seemed scared of the IRS. “So I don’t have a choice?”, Mark said dejected.
“Nope!” Chronos said, almost chipper. “Think of it this way, you get an entire collection of women you can use any way you wish, I am am sustained for several more years. You even get to keep them, after I leave you, which will happen eventually.”
An entire collection of frozen women that he owned did sound nice, but something still bothered him. “But how will I ever get away it? It was hard enough with Ashley and I got lucky with Katie." Even though Mark never froze her.
“Oh I will help sure anyone you freeze, that their disappearances are explained. I have already demonstrated this with Katie here with the car crash.”
“That was you?”
A deep laugh emanated from Chronos, "I'm the primordial god of time, remember?"
“Will I meet you again?”
“Perhaps, at least when I do leave you. It is now time for you to return, Ashley will last me until Christmas, that holiday of yours. Then it is time to freeze again, you must get the highest potential, this can include men if you so desire but I assume you wouldn't like to have men for your... sessions.”
Chronos then waved his hand, and Mark found himself back in his room, with time flowing. Ashley stood naked against the wall as Nadia and Katie woke up without Mark even unfreezing time. His punishment he guesses.
How do they react to Ashley?
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Time Freeze
A boy discovers the ability to stop time
Average high school boy finds out he has the ability to stop time and uses it to his advantage.
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