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Chapter 15 by AltUAuthor AltUAuthor

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Bride of Blackfire

Blackfire lay nude on her bed and smiled as MJ approached her, the control chip she'd been fitted with compelling her to obey. Komand'r smiled widely, captivated by the beauty in front of her. This is how it should be, she thought. Mary Jane should be mine, not my pathetic sister's.

"Mary Jane... my beautiful bride," Komand'r smiled, her passage slick from the sight in front of her. MJ crawled onto the bed and on top of the Tamaranean queen, who took the time to let her hands explore as much of the human redhead's body as she could. "Tell me you love me. That I am your queen."

"I love you, my queen," MJ said, now under Blackfire's control.

"I love you too, my bride," Komand'r smiled before kissing her enthralled new lover. She rolled on top of MJ and sunk down between the redhead's thighs, planting kisses on her clit and her folds. MJ cooed with delight at the sensation -- even under the sway of the Tamaranean control chip, she felt genuine pleasure at Blackfire's touch. However, it all felt so... familiar... but MJ couldn't remember why.

Komand'r began to tease MJ's awaiting bud with her tongue, adding her fingers to the mix as she pushed them past MJ's wet labia. As MJ moaned in pleasure, a wicked smile crossed Komand'r's face -- she would make her new bride come in ways her sister could never imagine.

MJ writhed as she felt the orgasm building within her, her mind lost in a haze. She arched her back and grasped at the sheets underneath her as the Tamaranean queen's skilled tongue danced inside her.

"Yes... Oh, that feels so good... Don't stop... almost there... YES!" MJ squealed as she climaxed. Komand'r grinned widely -- the control chip may have altered her thoughts, but there was no doubt -- that orgasm was as real as they come. She proceeded to pull her fingers out and began licking MJ's wet slit, savoring her thrall's delicious taste before crawling back on top of MJ and kissing her deeply.

"Did you enjoy that, Mary Jane?" Komand'r whispered seductively.

"I did... my queen..." MJ responded.

"Good, I'm glad. I want to make you feel good, my love," Komand'r smiled. "Now, tell me all the ways my sister has never made you come that you've always desired..."


After a night of wild sex, Komand'r lay with the enthralled MJ in her arms. She could not have been more satisfied -- she'd taken the most important thing in the world from her hated sister -- her beloved girlfriend -- and they would soon be married.

"Mary Jane... I have such wonderful plans for us," Komand'r smiled. "We'll be married soon, and I will rule with you at my side... I'll make sure you have everything you've ever wanted. And if my sister tries to interfere, I'll have you deal with her."

A sinister grin crossed Blackfire's face. She was eagerly anticipating her sister's arrival... and her devastating defeat. "I'll have you execute Koriand'r..." she said, her fingers lightly tracing MJ's back.

Koriand'r... the name ran through MJ's mind. Despite the compulsions she felt under Blackfire's control, somehow she still got the feeling she could never, ever hurt Koriand'r... even if it displeased her new queen.

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