Chapter 57
by Ggnt
What's next?
Break 9 Ends
Nat sat on the edge of his bed staring at his drivers license. Nat Carter. Born July 17th, 2001. Female. A smiling photo of a woman wearing heavy makeup.
The game had changed everything. As far as the world knew Nat Carter had always been a woman born in the early 2000s. The man who had been Nathan Carter never existed. His parents were still his parents, only they'd waited 10 years longer to have him. As far as he could tell his life had been pretty similar, but there were still lots of changes. His younger siblings were now older siblings. His birthplace was different, as were the elementary school he'd gone too. His highschool friends would have no idea who he was, while a bunch of strangers were in photos with him on his social media. It was so strange, and it cemented how he would never be able to go back. This was his life now. No matter how much he wanted it to change, the entire world would always see his as a woman.
There was a knock at his door, "Come in." He called. It opened and Lakshmi came in .
"Um, hi!" She said nervously, "It was Nat...right?"
Nat nodded, "Yes...how can I help you?"
Lakshmi stepped inside and closed the door behind her, "I just...I need to think...but I don't want to be alone. Would you come for a walk with me?"
Nat raised an eyebrow, "Umm, okay… but why me? I mean, you don’t even know me, like, at all."
"True...but I need space from Oliver and his...um...girls...and that demon girl really freaks me out...and the angel is like...attached at her hip so..."
"Right...process of elimination..."
"No, I mean, you seem really cool too!" Lakshmi said quickly, "Like...I think we could be friends!" She smiled at him.
Nat sighed, "Fine. Let's go." Nat's appraising eyes suggested that Lakshmi also wanted to make sure he wasn't a rival for Oliver's attention, but at least she did seem to genuinely befriend him if that wasn't the case.
Nat put on some heels, he still couldn't believe he had to wear these, and got up to go with Lakshmi.
They walked awkwardly at first. After all they were strangers, strangers with an extremely odd magically connection. Eventually though they managed to break the ice and start talking.
"Sooo... Oliver," Nat said, drawing it out gently, "Was he really your worst enemy? I mean… he just doesn’t seem like the type, you know? Like, what did he even do to you?"
Lakshmi blushed, "It's...it's really weird to think of. Knowing that magic has changed the way I feel about him doesn't mean I don't have those feelings...do you know what I mean? I don't think Oliver is an offensive person either. It's just...well...maybe you don't understand...yet...but being a woman...especially a woman of colour, it just...people treat you a certain way..."
Nat nodded, "Yeah… I’m starting to get it now. I can feel the eyes on us, even right this second. Ever since I changed, I don’t think a single guy has actually looked me in the eyes. And even other women…"
Lakshmi nodded, "Yeah well you're gorgeous...sorry...you probably don't want to be do you? Anyway, Oliver. I think my problem with him had less to do with who he is, and more to do with how other people treated him. We started at the same time, and I think we're about equal in skill, but I have to do so much more to get the same recognition. I have to fight for my ideas to be recognized, but Oliver would just throw things out without much thought and the boss would jump all over it.
"...also if I think about the wording of the question it's not that Oliver was MY worst enemy. It's just the Oliver himself was a pretty decent guy and didn't have any worse enemies to affect. I'm here because I resented him a little and let him know. It's hard to keep it straight exactly how I felt about it yesterday but I don't think I'm lying when I say I always found him attractive. I just would never have dated someone who I worked with. Too messy."
Nat nodded, "Right… that does make sense. So, I’m guessing if you came all this way, the magic must be way too strong to just walk away from now. You’re one of us, aren’t you? Whether you like it or not."
"Yeah...I think so. I've never felt this way about anyone. If he rejected me...I don't know what I'd do. I didn't expect to find him with two other women, well 5 others really, but I just can't give up on him. Even if I have to share, well, I'll share."
"Two others," Nat said gently, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear. "Eliza, Rachel, and I… well, Eliza and I—we're both gay. So, you really don’t have to worry about us, sweetheart."
"And Rachel?"
"Rachel’s just… under the game’s spell," Nat sighed, voice a little wistful. "It’s not that she wants Oliver, not really. She just… needs a man now and then. Any man. But only for a little while." Nat shivered. It had been too long since he'd touched someone, "Um...I’m so sorry, but… would it be okay if we held hands? I just—get a little cold without someone close. Magic you see."
Lakshmi shrugged and grabbed his hand, "Better?" He nodded, "Ok, great. Wow, this game is really fucked up. Forcing you to be intimate with others. Changing how you feel about other people. Changing your gender. What else can it do?"
As if to prove there was far more in store Nat suddenly felt a compulsion, "Oh no. No no..." He couldn't stop it. His hand tried to get through by his skirt was too tight. He was **** to pull it down, right there in the middle of the street.
"What are you doing?" Lakshmi cried.
"Help...hide..." Nat managed to say as he pushed his fingers into his panties and found his slit. Lakshmi shoved him into an alley, slightly out of sight, as he started to masturbate.
"Holy crap!"
"P-please...permission...to cum..." Nat begged as he furiously played with himself.
Lakshmi stared at him, "So...you'll just...do that forever...until you get permission..."
Nat nodded, "Y-yes....oh God..."
"W-wow..." Lakshmi said, without adding any kind of permission, "It really must be magic..."
"Please!" Nat begged.
"Oh right. Um. Cum? Permission granted?"
Nat went right over the edge, grabbing Lakshmi's hand for support as his knees gave out under the pressure of the orgasm. Finally he was able to recover enough to fix his skirt and stand up straight. "I'm so sorry, really it wasn't my fault."
Lakshmi nodded, "It's cool. I think I'm signing up for a lot worse than that with the two bimbos tied to Oliver."
Nat frowned, "They’re not bimbos, okay? Lina used to be a scientist. A real one. The game messed with her—like, really messed with her. It made her super dominant and kind of... a total misogynist, but she’s still incredibly smart underneath all that. And that other girl? She was a journalist before the game took that away from her. She can’t do it anymore, but don’t underestimate her. She’s honestly so sweet—she just... literally can’t talk to other women right now."
Lakshmi shrugged, "That's fine. I don't need to talk to those girls. Oliver's the only one I'm interested in."
Nat sighed, "Well...good luck. Um...can we go? I don't want to stick around in case anyone saw me."
"Right, let's go."
"E-Li-Za!" Rachel moaned, "How much longer? I want to do something fuuuun!"
"Five min. No. Ten. Busy." Eliza replied, not taking her eyes off her phone.
"Geez, who knew you were so into homemade porn." Rachel teased.
"Poor job," Eliza said, "Need best stuff. Hire film guy? No. Film girl..." She wasn't really reply to Rachel at all, she was mostly talking to herself. She'd spent all morning reviewing the video Rachel had taken the night before. Taking notes. Writing out her business plan. It wasn't that the video wasn't hot. Lots of people would love to see two girls having sex, especially ones as hot as Eliza and Nat, but it looked and felt amateurish. They might want to see it, but would they really pay for it? Eliza wasn't just trying to get a few views on reddit, she wanted a porn empire, starting with Nat and expanding from there.
"Ok but it doesn't have to be now. I want to go shopping!"
Eliza put down the phone immediately, "Shop? Yes. We can go."
"Ah, I said the magic word. Ok, let's go."
Rachel opened the bedroom door and stepped into the living room. She immediately spotted Lina and her wife, both of them were busy cleaning. "What's going on here?" Rachel was a little surprised to see them working so hard.
"Like, we're leaving tomorrow!" Lina said, "Reckon we get started on cleaning now. Don't want cleaning fee charged!"
Rachel nodded. Right, they really were supposed to leave here tomorrow. It had been such a crazy time she'd forgotten all about it. "Oh well, you two have fun!" She turned to leave but Lina stormed over and stopped in front of her.
"No! Do you want to help?!"
Rachel laughed, "Yes!" She said automatically, but there was no compulsion behind her answer, "Haha, no way."
"Master!" Lina cried.
Oliver came out of his bedroom, "Huh? What's going on?"
"Order her to help us." Lina said.
"Well I..." Oliver gulped, Rachel was staring daggers at him, as if daring him to do it. She'd been compelled to give him a blowjob this morning and so was bound to obey him. He steeled himself, "Rachel help Lina clean the cottage."
"Oh I'm going to-" Rachel started to say.
"And don't speak! Not until you're done." Oliver said quickly, "Follow all her cleaning related commands until this place is spotless!"
Rachel took a step towards him. She couldn't speak, but she could still clobber him.
"Go clean the bathroom," Lina ordered, "Like, now!"
Rachel's body obeyed, and she found herself **** to go towards the bathroom instead of Oliver.
"Wow," Eliza said, "Did not think you had the balls for that."
Oliver blushed, "Ya...well...um...I should probably take it back. That's really abusing my power...isn't it?"
If he expected Eliza to chastise him he was sorely mistaken, she shrugged, "Nah. It is hot. Make Rach do it nude. But now you need to come shop with El."
"Well..."
"Thou must taketh up thy burden. Either grant Rachel her freedom, or bear her chains as thine own. For lo, Elizariel, Angel of Radiant Flame, doth require a sworn guardian to shield her sacred form. Choose now, or face divine reckoning."
Oliver sighed, "Fine. Let me grab some clothes."
Lina stood at the threshold of the cottage. Fuck, she thought to herself. She'd been too shortsighted. She needed permission to go outside and she was alone with two silent bimbos. She closed the door and turned around. What to do...Rachel only had to obey her if it was a cleaning task and her wife...well she wasn't likely to obey. Or would she?
"Wife, come!" Lina called. The girl stopped what she was doing and hurried over. "Good girl, sit!" Lina smiled as she obeyed. "Now then I need you fetch something, well, someone for me. I need-" She stopped speaking. Not because she wanted to, but because she couldn't keep going. Damn it! She'd run out of words!
Lina huffed and looked around for something to write with. Eventually she found her phone and typed it out and showed it to her wife. The blonde bimbo looked at the note and laughed. She seemed to consider it, then finally nodded. Lina breathed out a sigh of relief. Of course her wife would be reliable like that. She might be a woman, but she was one of Oliver's women and that made her better than the others. Lina's wife had been working nude, not wanting to risk the thong triggering her punishment, but now she threw on a thong and a barely there minidress and hurried out to find her target. Lina couldn't do anything but wait, and supervise Rachel's cleaning of course.
"Wow Eliza...don't you have enough?" Oliver asked.
"No." Eliza said immediately, "Never."
Oliver sighed, "I guess with the three of you you'll be able to afford it all. Eventually at least. As for me...wow, I'm going to have to support 3 women now..."
"Lak work too," Eliza pointed out, "Will be fine. Hand El that." She said, pointing at a hat on the top shelf.
Oliver reached for it and handed it to her, "Yeah. Lakshmi...really didn't think she'd get roped into this. What am I supposed to do?"
"Fuck her." Eliza said bluntly.
"Wow..." Oliver blinked, "Did not expect that from you. Yeah...I don't know that I have much choice. If I reject her she'll become some kind of psycho stalker won't she?" He groaned, "This is my fault isn't it? I picked that option and so it's my fault she's in this. I should...I don't know...get her a gift or something..."
Eliza raised an eyebrow, "Sorry you **** now, here gift?"
Oliver sighed, it sounded pretty hollow like that. "No...I mean...she's not like Lina or the other one...she's still herself. She's just...obsessed wiht me...fuck," He picked up a purse, "Does this purse say sorry I fucked up your life? Or is that more a hat kind of fuck up?"
Eliza shook her head and pointed to the counter, "Ring. Gold. Gem. Cost lot."
"Yeah...I thought you'd say that. Well I can't buy anything with Nat's permission...and he's with her right now. Can you buy it?"
Eliza raised an eyebrow, "No."
"Excuse me," A man walked up to them, "Can I have your panties?" Eliza sighed, but reached under her skirt and started pulling them down. She handed them to him and then cringed as he sniffed them, "Thanks."
Once he was gone Eliza sighed, "That is..."
"Annoying?" Oliver tried to finish for her.
She shrugged, "Sure. Now..." She turned and bumped a display, knocking over a bunch of bags. Without thinking she bent over to pick them up, hinging at the waist causing her skirt to ride up and giving Oliver a perfect view of her bare pussy. She blushed but she wasn't able to stop herself or adjust her position until she'd finished picking them all up. "Great. Just great."
"Excuse me..." Another voice said.
"What now?" Eliza wondered as she turned to the newcomer.
"Dear Angel...I...well...you see..." The man looked flustered, "Well I have..." He lowered his voice and whispered, "...Erectile disfunction...Um, and I wondered if I could get your blessing. I hoped that the blessing of an angel might help cure my problem."
Eliza tapped her fingers together as she thought. She nodded, "Verily, Elizariel doth believe thy ailment may yet be healed—but lo, such miracles demand tribute. Bring forth unto her a ring of diamond, gleaming and pure, and thy affliction shall be cast out with heavenly grace."
The man's eyes went wide, and then he nodded. "Yes...yes of course. Uh..." He looked over at the display case. This store wasn't a high end jeweler, but it did sell a few pieces. He pointed, "Would that do?"
Eliza looked at Oliver and raised an eyebrow, he nodded, "Uh yes..."
The man quickly bought it and handed it to her, "Here you go Goddess..."
Eliza handed the ring to Oliver, "For Lak. You owe El," Then she looked at the man, "Come." Then she walked out of the store. Oliver and the man followed her to an alley. When they were alone she suddenly pulled out her breast, "Suck." She ordered.
The man didn't hesitate. He latched on and started drinking her ambrosia. After a minute she stopped him.
The man looked at her in shock, "It...it worked! My cock is rock hard!" Oliver and Eliza both cringed, "I'm going to go find a hooker! Thank you!" Then he ran off.
Eliza sighed, "You owe El lot."
Lakshmi sat opposite the little maid girl, twiddling her thumbs, "So this is some sort of...interview?"
The woman remained silent and tapped the phone again.
Lakshmi sighed, "Ok. Fine. If that's what it takes. I'm not giving up on Oliver so I'll do whatever it takes...what are my intentions? Seriously? Are you a sitcom dad or something? I love him. I'm going to be his wife, whoa, don't hit me! Ok. His mistress? Uh, I wouldn't say I'm great a cleaning...but I can learn! Actually I currently hire a maid but if Oliver asked me to clean...fine I mean if you did! Wow, for a mute girl you are pretty harsh..."
Lakshmi kept going through the list of questions until she made it to the end, "Wait...this is a joke right?"
Lina shook her head.
"You won't accept me if I don't...no. I'm not gay. The other girl doesn't do that...does she?"
Lina nodded.
Lakshmi looked over at the nude girl curled up in a ball on the couch. The girl lazily opened an eye and nodded. Lakshmi gulped. "F-fine. If that's what it takes...I'll do that too!"
Lina smiled and waved her hands towards Lakshmi's legs. Lakshmi sighed, "Right here...but..."
Lina crawled forward and reached Lakshmi. She started undoing the buttons on her shorts. Lakshmi wasn't sure why but she found herself lifting her hips to help so Lina could slide them all the way down, her panties too. Then Lina spread her legs, Lakshmi looked away. It was so weird, being bottomless in the living room like this. While another woman was about to...
"What are you doing?" Nat suddenly said, entering the room, "Lina, is this some kind of trick?"
Lakshmi quickled covered her crotch with her hands as Lina flipped her middle finger at Nat.
Nat shook his head, "Lakshmi you don't have to do this."
"But...she said the other girl lets her, and Oliver won't accept me if I..."
"Oliver doesn't care about that. Lina is just trying to satisfy her own transformations. All you have to do to get Lina to accept you is just sleep with Oliver. Although that will only increase how much she wants to eat you out. You're kinda stuck there."
Lina sat back on her heels and sighed. She grabbed her phone and wrote out a message and passed it to Lakshmi.
Lakshmi read it and nodded, "O-okay...Lina I still want to get along with you. Let's go to the bedroom though...this is just too public."
"You really don't-" Nat started but Lakshmi stopped him.
"If I'm going to be part of this throuple...no...um...quad...wow...anyway I want to get along with Lina and if that means letting her lick my...my...you know...well...we're going to be Sister Wives right? And uh...can you go away first? I know you're a woman or...not...but...I don't really want to show my goods to you..."
Nat blushed, "Right sorry...I was just...nevermind...I'll go to my room." Nat turned and left. Lakshmi and Lina got up and went to Lina's room to continue.
Rachel finally stopped cleaning. The cottage was truly spotless now, and she was freed from Oliver's command. Free to execute her ****. She'd spent the whole time plotting and knew exactly how to get on his nerves. First, collect her army.
That turned out to be very easy. She just had to walk around and see people's reaction. Some seemed terrified of her but many looked at her with awe. All she had to do is approach the second group and tell them to follow her. Only the girls of course, she didn't have any need for the men at this point.
Once she had a good sized group she brought them back to the cottage and explained to them what she wanted. Then they just had to wait, but thankfully not too long. Oliver and Eliza came into the living room and Rachel giggled and ran over to kiss Eliza, "Did you have fun?" She asked.
Eliza nodded, "Yes. We did."
"Good," Rachel looked at Oliver, "Oliver...no hard feelings. Lina did need help after all. In fact I left a present for you in your room."
"Really? Ok. Thanks." Oliver said, turning towards his room. Rachel grinned in anticipation.
Oliver opened his door and stepped inside...to see a dozen nude women waiting for him. "Huh?"
All dozen women swarmed him. The first one successfully pressed a bill into his hands, "Eat me out!" She ordered.
Of course Oliver couldn't refuse. Once payment was provided he HAD to deliver the service. He knelt down and got to work between her legs.
Rachel giggled, "He is going to be VERY busy today. Good work girls!" She called to her army, "Don't let him rest! Put his tongue to work!" Then Rachel turned to Eliza, "As for your tongue..." She kissed her, pushing her own tongue into Eliza's mouth. She broke it off, "Let's go." She grabbed Eliza's hand and pulled her, not to their own room, but to Nat's. She pushed the door open, "Hello girlfriend! Let's fuck!"
What's next?
Celestial Delights
Unleashing chaos one customer at a time
Vivi and Didi were kicked off Harem Hotel for going too far but someone has decided they have potential. They've been given their own magic shop with one goal, mess with their human customers. This is an anthology of short stories involving people acquiring powerful magical items and suffering the consequences.
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Updated on Jun 17, 2025
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Created on Feb 24, 2024
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