Branch Update [Break's Over]

[August 15, 2021]

As the new title implies, I'm back to writing! Will upload the next chunk of chapters within this week.

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[August 8, 2021] - Addressing Feedback [Still on Break]

Hey everyone!

Thanks for all your feedback! The elements I asked on were actually very fluid in the storyline and I didn't have a fixed idea what to do with them yet, I just knew I wanted to explore some version of them at some point with particular characters that I may or may not have introduced already. I'm going to take all these comments into consideration for when I start writing, so thanks again for leaving your thoughts in the comments.

Just to address the comments on those specific elements:

As for the cucking of another dude, as MrWhysper pointed out, the humiliation cuck is forbidden (and not really something I'm into either) so I will definitely not do a humiliation cuck. Also, since majority of the feedback is against cucking, I won't use that for a particular character I'm thinking of and maybe switch it to someone else that would only be in the periphery. I say that because I still probably would do a chapter where he cucks another guy (where it's the other guy's actual kink and something that other guy is very much into) or at least Jay has a conversation about cucking, for character reasons.

For the BDSM aspect, similar to the humiliation cuck, hard BDSM is forbidden so I won't go **** with it (although that is something I'm comfortable writing unlike NTR. Go figure.) I'm going to heavily focus on the Bondage and Dom/Sub aspect only, and I'll keep it light (which is within Jay's character, I think). I agree with the majority that he is more fit to be a Dom due to him liking being called 'Daddy', but I'm not totally ruling out a few chapters where he gets to be the sub as I do have an idea for that as well.

As for other kinks, I saw multiple ones for pregnancy risk so I'll definitely consider it. Although, to be honest, I'm just not very familiar with the kink itself. Do the characters need to get pregnant for the kink to work, or is it more focused on the panic they might experience in being accidentally impregnated? If there's another specific aspect about it you'd like to see or you think is essential, please feel free to specify so I can have a clearer idea.

Anyway, that's it for now. Thanks again for all the feedback, and the wonderful words of encouragement!

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[August 1, 2021] - Branch Update [Taking a Mini-Break]

Hey current readers!

I've been writing a chapter everyday for this branch for the past month now and decided to take a break after publishing these last few chapters. Trying to justify **** for a supposedly nice dude tired me out a little, so I'm taking the opportunity to replenish my creative juices while the story has a good stopping point, now that the **** part of the storyline has been somewhat handled and the harem is coming along nicely. I intend my break to be a couple of weeks before I start writing again, so I'll probably publish something again maybe by the third week of August at the earliest.

Also, I wanted to thank everyone who has read this branch so far. Specially those who have given words of encouragement and those who've liked individual chapters. It really means a lot! I wouldn't have been motivated to write everyday if not for that. Almost 2K likes in a month is not something I take lightly. So, I'll definitely keep writing, and hopefully at the same pace, once I'm done with my break. I'll also use my break to plan out situations better, as to avoid writing three big conversations happening back-to-back-to-back.

I also wanted to hear your opinions of possible future elements for the story.

1. First, would you guys be open to having a male cuck be part of the story? To be clear, Jay WILL DEFINITELY NOT be the cuck, but he'll be cucking another guy who's kink is being cucked/watching someone he likes being fucked by Jay (no humiliation intended, unless you guys think that would be essential to the cucking).
2. Second, BDSM-wise, would you rather Jay learn to be a Dom, or make him more of a sub, or maybe even be a switch depending on the partner? Without spoiling anything, this'll affect the personal kink of a character other than Jay.
3. Lastly, what other kinks are you guys hoping to see in the future? If they're already in my plans, great; if not, and enough people suggest something, I'd definitely consider it.

Your opinions and critiques of the story so far are also highly welcome, as it'll help me improve my writing. This is the first thing of this nature I've ever written so I know there's still things to improve.

I hope you guys enjoyed it so far! See you guys after a few weeks!