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Chapter 69
by
Jerynboe
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Bestgirl survey results
I’m going to give my thoughts, but if anyone has thoughts of their own to share I’d love to hear them. Surveys are great but comments give context, especially on the controversial ones.
Lividia 7+6
Lividia is love, Lividia is life, first consort and queen of the harem. Hail, hail!
Keryn 4
Apparently you guys like the cocky professional spy, and more importantly nobody dislikes her
Tony 2 +1
Tony is got the highest modifier from surveys 2/3 of anyone except The One True Queen. I decided to just toss in this one practical blue collar type dude on a whim and apparently most find him at worst neutral and a few find him quite charming. I’ll take it.
Sara 3
Another that keeps things professional. I don’t think I’ll be changing her too much post capture since you seem to like her as is. She’s nobody’s favorite but I’ll probably be using her as POV for anything I have showcasing the Lions’ operations
Auffrey 3
A third professional. An archetype that seems to leave a basically good impression without being annoying, it would seem. She’s likely to get a bit more screen time in at least the immediate future, as her family is a bit more important than you might expect.
Irma 3
God I hope I can maintain whatever it is about her you like post mindfuck. I’m leaning towards sexy librarian/secretary vibes?
Drusilla 2 +1 -1
Our first dislike! I’m honestly not sure what to say here. I don’t actually know what you like or dislike about her.
Abby 4 -3
By far our most controversial waifu. Is it the TG? Is it overexposure? Did you like Abercrombie as a dude? Did some of you just want Erich to cuck an old man with his zombie wife? I’m actually curious, because more people had an opinion on Abby than anyone else except Lividia.
Mary 2
A nice spoopy ghost who is just a bit disconnected from reality and capable of a good bit more than Lillibeth without possession. A few people like her. No one hates her.
Zelena 2
Getting in almost entirely off of potential, I hope you guys still like her after she gets her own Lividia style mini arc on planet Xoroth. I’ll be drawing on a D&D npc that was popular with my players so hopefully you like her too.
Anetta 2
Poor Anetta, left by the wayside. Apparently you want a bit more of her in the future. Distance makes the heart grow fonder, perhaps.
Eliza 2 -1
Well, worst case scenario I shove her on a Zeppelin for an in-game week and bring her back in a soft reboot.
Darcell 2 -1
Keryn will be the POV for stealth segments is what I’m getting here
Tessa 2 -1 +1
Oooh. Spicy, loved by one person and hated by another. She’s likely to be in bodyguard mode for a lot of the time now.
Prudence 1 -1
Is barely a character at all, included for the sake of completion. I’m slightly concerned that the skin suit got more good vibes than the pilot.
Mezzo 1 -2
Our first net negative. Which is concerning because he’s kinda bound to Erich by eldritch pact, and I don’t actually know what he did to offend you. He’s had like 1-2 scenes where he actively did anything. Actively requesting feedback on this one
Eva 0 -1
Did it annoy you that she just kinda was a side thing that didn’t go anywhere? She’s probably going to be the magic item identification girl unless someone else takes the job, but she’s mostly just there to stand around in Darkshire and occasionally provide a service.
Lillibeth 0 -1
Oof. I like writing for Lillibeth but apparently I’m being too self indulgent or something. Any ideas for how to make her better, or is she going to be shuffled off to the ranch where she exists primarily as a tool for binding?
Yanca 0 -1
That’s fine. She was there to illustrate a point, I understand if it didn’t land. She’s probably not going to be terribly important long term anyway.
Ogre squad 0 -3
I am shocked, SHOCKED, that this group of stupid ugly people didn’t gain universal acclaim in my pornographic isekai fanfiction.
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