Authors note

Hello

This is my first time ever posting a story but its not the first one I have ever generated. This particular piece is the first episode of a trilogy I started writing/thinking about 10 years ago. My hope is that I can get some feedback from this so that I can improve my writing so that one day I will have enough motivation to write the whole thing out! But until then I do hope that I can at least finish this. I already know how it ends, obviously, but I can vary the time it takes to get there.

So far there isnt a lot of porn in there YET, the trilogy itself is sci-fi/fantasy so the original outline for this story involved zero sex. But I think I did a good job of intertwining the sex with the narrative in this iteration. I dont use social media, outside of reading cosmology threads, so it would be super nice to get some of that dopamine hits that people get whenever they see their reposted meme get commented on X times. To that end if anyone reads this let me know what you think, what you want more and/or less of. I try to add it if it keeps ya reading.

I think of myself as a snobby artist so I am not going to add stuff if I think the suggestions bring down my WORK OF ART

I think of myself as an adaptable artist so I feel like I can find a way to make a wide variety of characters/story beats mesh with my overall goal/theme

I think that maybe I shouldnt think of myself as an artist at all.

P.S. I did do a grammar check but I am almost 100% sure I missed stuff. Honestly what is the point on being a grammer nazi when I am the only person who will read this story. Speaking of which, why the fuck am I writing this? Damn hope, gets me every time. Anyway if this does get a following I will be more diligent about grammar checks in the future. Unless its some fellow degenerates who care more about content being posted fast than there being no errors...whats that, no one else feels that way... cuz how the fuck can one enjoy a written story when the written words dont sense make? Valid point.

Well thanks for reading people!

Say what? Only I read it, well jokes on you cuz I still could as people, ha!