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Chapter 13 by wiiking5

What's Next?

Authors Note

Hello dear readers

As I work on the next installation of the story I am hitting a fork in the road. So far the story has been pretty linear besides what exactly our hero would find in the box and all that, but I have now reached a spot where the decision will have another drastic outcome on how the story evolves further and will shape what plans I make for the story. That is why I invite you, yes you dear readers, to give me some input on this topic.

So far the story has been more focused on those around the main character and been pretty tight within that circle. At the point the story is about the machine sitting in the back shed, and I don't feel it rather comfortable to keep it there, but that entails two routes happening, the MC either moves the machine into the house or he moves it to the repair shop. This choice then has consequences on where the story goes. I predict that if he keeps it in the house the machine will only be used for personal use in personal relationships, whereas if he moves the machine into the shop then a whole world of things can happen. I also don't know where we will be left when summer ends and the MC has to make the decision to go to college or not and what that means for the machine.

All in all, would you rather see the machine moved into the house, used very sparingly. Or the machine is moved into the shop where it will get used more liberally and freely.

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