Author's Thoughts on Where to Take This

First, what this is NOT. This not me abandoning this story, or even this branch, quite the opposite in fact.

When I started this branch from the prompt I wrote, this whole thing was an excuse to write a girls being turned into happy Monstergirls with a heavy public sex/FreeUse focus. I think I managed that fairly well, the free use stuff never quite reached their full potential. But I kept being held back by the characters and background lore that was slowly coming together in my mind.

Therein lies the problem.

This is not a silly FreeUse Monstergirls story. Not only that anyway. It has grown and the more it does the less silly horny stuff I can do.

For example, I had an idea for Sam to be friends with the Cheer team and drag Mason in to the locker room to show him off. Inevitably resulting in a bunch of new Monstergirls eager to fuck anyone who asks cause Mason wouldn't want to keep them all. With the whole lore drop of Asmodeus and the war against the Elohim, I can't do that and have it be canon to the main story! Not without going full grimdark and having a couple Seraphs bathe the whole town in holy fire.

Which is a cool idea, honestly. But not the one I'm writing.

What I'm currently planning to do is to leave this branch as is. Keep it for all the stupid horny stuff my characters can't do without severe consequences. So ,what ifs, bonus scenes, alternative transformations and stuff like that I will put here. Like I have a whole arc I want to write where Hanako and Gemma open a beauty salon and give out free smoothies made with Mason's cum to record the results. That can't happen in a serious plot line without the characters either being idiots or being so impossibly competent it makes the antagonists look like idiots.

That's another thing. Antagonists. Zoey as she currently is is a problem. I didn't have a solution so I just kept her vague and in the background doing sneaky witchy stuff or whatever. Rachel was supposed to be way more important than I ended up making her. She has a silly fight with Annie at the party and then nothing. Gabe is also there. Being Gabe.

I have a plan for the two of them, and for Mason's friend Elizabeth. But that plan contradicts several chapters that I'll need to rework and edit. I don't want to replace the chapters I already have up and I don't want to branch off then remerge the two. Especially as I get deeper into the plot I have now that will become increasingly divorced from the original Sexual Privilege story ideas. It was already pretty different from most and it's only going to get worse.

So, pretty soon I'm going to start my own story of Mason's adventures, probably set to private, post cleaned up and expanded versions of what's here. Then leave this branch open for all the noncanon stuff that won't fit into the new version. Hell, if anyone has their own ideas, I encourage you to start your own subbranch or even tell me your idea and I might write it!

I already have several partially written. The first might be one with Mason and Samantha as Marcie and Samuel instead. See what a genderbent Sam does with the power and a newly awoken succubus. There is a whole drunken party full of horny teenagers right there...

So, that's the plan I'm going with. Thoughts? Concerns? It'll be a week or two before this happens so we have a bit of time to iron out any problems haven't considered.

EDIT: Mason's adventure will continue in The old of Asmodeus!