Author's Notes

Hello everyone! Nosmel here, breaking the narrative for a second and speaking out of character. In an effort to encourage participation and explain some of the more odd details, I thought I'd add a section here for some additional universe explanation, without bogging the story down with exposition in random chapters.

First of all, I've added plenty of breaks for people to take over direction of either Ben or Sarah to move the story in a different direction than what I've written so far. Some of the breaks I have no real intention of continuing, for instance: Sarah's dad won't be taking her to breakfast for my writing, but I'd love to see people's takes on it, so if you have a great idea for a freeuse gangbang in a waffle house, don't be afraid to write it! Not to mention if you want to write your own take from the perspective of a feeder or donation girl or something entirely different as a new main character for your own arcs, go for it. Don't be afraid to get in my way, I'm mostly making this up as I go along, though I have some plans. This wasn't meant to be entirely solo, though I suppose I don't mind and I'll work toward satisfying conclusions if I can.

Next, I don't mean for the story to end up so piss heavy. The main purpose of the piss rule was to explain the brutality of the men, as the piss drunk women frequently beg for it. This shifted the overton window of sexual **** WAAAAY over, even for regular girls, which is why everyone is so damn mean and anal obsessed but they accept it since it happens all the time. However, it is part of my fetish wheelhouse and I suppose that comes out quite frequently, though I try to leave open options to avoid it. More or less. That being said, other than you can't get high on your own supply, I'm still up in the air on the rules for men and other women drinking the women's piss. I have no problems with it being a thing, and giving women the power to give a bit of high as well. I was considering it making it about as effective as the amount of doses they've had recently. Still, I haven't decided yet (might take this part out if it comes up) and it's not super part of my fetishes so feel free to write something to that effect if I continue to avoid it.

Let's see... the official source of the **** that feeders take to get giant balls and increase production, Zanalfil (spoiler alert for shit I haven't written, but might never actually do) is from a pregnant piss whore's breast milk. I don't have a pregnancy fetish, so I don't really care to write it. BUT there's plenty of room for someone so inclined to write about a Zanalfil production facility (Optional father workplace?) and I'll likely weave that as the source into the story. The side effects for the Zanalfil are up in the air, however. The lowering testosterone is pretty well set in my mind as an over time effect from taking it frequently, but the immediate side effects from using it I'm still thinking about. I'm considering (spoiler) incontinence and probably some other things, but I'd love to hear some ideas. That goes for anything I'm doing! Don't be afraid to comment or message me directly!

Which brings me to my final point, your likes fuel my drive! I've only been writing a short time, but made a lot of progress and I've received plenty of interest, so I'm not complaining. However, I want to start focusing on chapters and arcs people really like as this thing branches further and further into crazy areas, so if there's a part you especially enjoy, be sure to hit that button for me! Seeing the new notifications and higher numbers every time I sit down to write a chapter is what spurs me and likely all authors here to continue! Spread the love!

Anyway, thank you for your interest and time! I hope you enjoy the world of H1W1!