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Chapter 151 by Ggnt

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Author's Note

That really is the end this time for my branch. Thanks to everyone who managed to read this far, I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

This is the first thing I've ever written creatively so I definitely made some mistakes, but overall I'm happy with how it turned out. I originally started writing in July when Harem Hotel (and others) got moved from public access. So after I created an account and had to wait 30 days to see the locked content, I decided to just write my own.

At least initially I think my branch had a lot more transformations, especially temporary transformations, since that's always been my favourite part. Unfortunately the beginning was also when I was the least organized. I had a had time keeping track of them all and definitely made some errors. Later, once I wised up, I used a separate spreadsheet to keep track and everything and hopefully it went a little smoother.

There were definitively a few surprises with the audience votes, but the biggest one was the very first round with Beatriz. In the intro I essentially didn't give her any descriptions except jealous and I fully expected to have her run away from the Harem. I was then going to drop Three (who became Trinity) in as a replacement from the very beginning. Without Beatriz to lean on, Marcos was going to become closer to Eric and act like his 2nd in command so to speak. Had to pivot though when the audience overwhelmingly wanted her to stay.

For anyone who commented, I did read them all, even if I didn't always reply. I appreciate the feedback I got from that, and also in the votes. It certainly helped to guide the story.

For anyone wondering, Epilogue 2 does hint at a new story. I've started two separate stories which I hope to post soon. One is a spin off with Vivi and Didi running a magic shop, and the other is completely unrelated to Harem Hotel. I did have ideas for other branches of Harem Hotel, and how I'd avoid some of my mistakes, but if I ever do a second branch it won't be for a while.

Thanks again for reading, Ggnt

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