Abbie and Dave read Marcie and Gina Read CHYOA

“Hey, Stretch, Wake up. I gotta ask you something.”

“Ohhh… Just five minutes more. Fuck, my head hurts.”

“So, ass-fucking three girls in a row, then casting all those spells took a lot out of you?”

"Wasn’t that. A spell went wrong. It was supposed to show the past, but it’s showing alternate timelines instead. Do you hear that ringing?”

“When did you cast a spell to look into the past?”

“I didn’t. I did it in another timeline. Or the future. Or both. It’s confusing. I have memories of things that didn’t happen, but they did to other Daves.”

“I just wanted to ask you if I was cooler before you mind-fucked me. Do you think I’m boring now? I don’t ever want to bore you,”

“Why would you even ask that?”

“That website had a link to a strange post of a couple of girls critiquing us.”

“Wait, someone is critiquing our lives? Like they can see what we’re doing? That’s kinda creepy.”

“You’re the one using what they call quote, 'a **** spell,' unquote. So I don’t know if you're the one to call anything creepy. Anyway, it’s more like they’re reading about us. They said I was cooler before I was your sex ****. Now that I’m all about pleasing you, am I one-dimensional?”

“Abs, you’re always a great sister, whether you’re magically enchanted to please me or not. I mean, I still think you’re plenty cool when you’re obsessed with my cock. Of course, that might not appeal as much to a wider audience.”

“One of them seemed upset at how wide an audience it did appeal to. Man, she really didn’t appreciate the ****, or other readers’ comments encouraging it. She didn’t care for you twisting the minds of a pair of lesbians to make them into happy, willing fucktoys who love your cock, either. I think it might be a played-out trope or something. Or maybe she just wanted more lesbian action and less P in V in her porn?”

“I didn’t enchant you on purpose, um, in this timeline anyway. But **** certainly does seem to show up in most of the timelines. Most of the time, it’s because of an accident, screw-up, or panic on my part. Almost like it’s kind of a theme, or the whole gag our story is based on or something. Maybe they missed that?”

“One of them said our story was ‘in the mind control category’, so maybe they just didn’t know going in.”

“Yeah, I suppose someone could miss that in the timelines where I enchant Tracey or Ms. Fellows first. I could try not to fuck you or Mom in at least one timeline, just to be nice to people with delicate sensibilities about things like that. I think there’s still a possibility to avoid it in one or two of them.”

“And not make Tracey fuck her mom either?”

“Oh yeah, that. … Well, I’ll see what I can do.”

“You’re an **** freak, Beanpole.”

“Hard to argue against that, after what I just did with you, Abs.”

“Apparently, they think we’re also too obvious about lampshading how problematic our behavior is. Like, we shouldn’t acknowledge openly that what we’re doing as a result of powerful magical influence is intensely fucked up, even when we know full well it is. No, it must be a hypothetical author having his cake and eating it too — getting to write about fucked up stuff, but self-indulgently using us mind-controlled girls as mouthpieces to point it out that it is, to wink at the audience and get off the hook somehow.”

“Yeaaaah… from what I’ve seen, that’s kind of fair, especially in the timelines where I let my slaves in on the magic. But, if you’ve got mind-controlled girls, what are you supposed to do? Not use their mouths self-indulgently?”

“They said using them as mouthpieces self-indulgently, not using their mouths.”

“Technicality.”

"Plus, you 'well actually' your unspoken internal jokes to yourself in your head, which is really weird when you think about it, and also completely in character for you, fuckin' nerd."

"Dammit, that's more embarrassing than the ****."

“In the end, despite their squicks, it looks like they think we’re uninspired but competently executed wank-fodder, Beanpole.”

“I can live with that. Now let me get some more sleep.”