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Chapter 78
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FINN 0815
What's next?
A cocky attitude
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Over the past week, I've had trouble accessing CHYOA. I suspect server maintenance, which is okay. So I just kept writing and included a BJ scene. The main focus of this chapter is on Lisa and Rose's feelings and what it means to live in a polyamorous relationship. Let me know if I've succeeded in this first incursion into the mind of a woman in this particular situation. I certainly find it very fascinating and really enjoyed writing about Rose and Lisa together in this context.
I definitely tried to describe the mindset as multifaceted, interesting, loving, and independent as possible. I hope you like it.
Now, please enjoy...
Chapter 77
“Finn, what the fuck! Out! Shit! Get out! Shit!” Lisa is nowhere to be seen, and Rose’s hysterical shrieks are fading into a giddy laugh with each passing second as she pulls one of those plush toys in front of her that I recognize from Tammy’s room. Anyway, she and Rose had underwear with that motif when they slept with me, or so I remember. I don’t understand why Rose is so **** to show me her body, but her hysterical behavior makes me laugh in disbelief.
So this is it? This is the moment?
It couldn’t be more perfect.
“Lisa, stay there! Don’t come out!” Rose makes herself small and crouches on Lisa’s large, soft bed, reaching out her hand imperiously toward me and glancing at the door of the private bathroom.
“What’s wrong?” I hear Lisa’s worried voice.
“Don’t come out! He’s already here!” Then Rose looks at me. "Can't you knock?"
"I... uh..." With my free hand, I scratch the back of my head. Weren't we supposed to have a threesome? Why are they so surprised now? "I brought drinks," I say, completely bewildered as I offer the apple juice like a sacrifice to the gods. And maybe it is. Because when Rose removes the strange pillow from her body and reveals herself to me, a heavenly smile on her lips, it's as if the world around me stops. It's always like this when I see my little sister.

"Do you like me?" she asks, nibbling at her lower lip. She knows exactly what effect her body has on me. Iin that respect, she hasn't changed because of the MCD and me, and her voice betrays it. There's a playfulness in her words that rivals the pink ribbon between her breasts. But I also see the need for recognition and praise in her. Her fresh makeup makes her eyes look deep and clear, and her cheeks are slightly flushed, both from the makeup and the healthy blush on her skin, as she looks at me hopefully.
"You look perfect," I whisper and approach her. Her legs move slightly, twitching a little as she spreads them slightly, then quickly presses them together again. "I can't get enough of you." I stand before her, and she looks up at me from below.
"Me neither," she admits. I lean down to her, touch her neck, and find a spot to press my lips to.
"Uh... guys?" Lisa's urgent voice comes from the bathroom. "Can I come out?" Rose jumps up, almost giving me a headbutt. Before I can even get my bearings, she's behind me, calling for the bathroom.
"Just a few more seconds!" Her movements are a whirlwind of pink, then I feel her angelic hands over my eyes. She doesn't touch me the way I would in her place, strong and confident, but is entirely feminine, delicate and careful. And yet, there is no power in this world that could make me resist her in this moment. "It's not about me," she whispers in my ear. Then she kisses my shoulder. "She really went to a lot of trouble. Let's make this evening unforgettable for her." Beneath her warm, delicate fingers, trembling slightly with excitement, my grin fills the room. "I love you." I want to reply, but Rose is faster. "Okay, honey. Come out."
My blood is pounding in my ears as the scent of Rose fills my nostrils. She's wearing Lisa's perfume, Lisa's clothes, and, like me, she's thinking of Lisa. She's blurring the lines between my e-girlfriend and me, and the thought that everything has just become even more perfect is driving me almost insane. I want to ask myself what I did to deserve this heaven on earth, but the soft voices of two angels draw me back to the here and now. The room is quiet, but not quiet enough, and even though they're trying their best, I understand every word they whisper to each other in hushed love.
"Don't stare at him like that." That's Rose to Lisa, almost dying giggling.
"Sorry." Rose laughs softly.
"I understand. But remember, this is your night." A short pause.
"What should I do? How can I please him best?"
"Oh, for God's sake." Rose can barely contain her loud giggles. "The sofa, dumbass! Wait! Not entirely on it. Yes. Just like that. Stay like that." Then I feel Rose's lips on my skin. She speaks to me like an angel on my shoulder. “Ready to see your angel, big brother?”
I say something that might sound like, “Fuck yeah!” but maybe comes across as, “Oh God, please.” But my words are meaningless as Rose takes her hands away from my eyes.
“Oh my god.” That is pure Finn Lynchwood.

“I wanted to try something more,” Lisa whispers, her trusting eyes directed at me like a beacon in the dark. “But…” Rose steps beside me and puts her arm around me.
“I mean, for today, she should just be Lisa. Right, big bro?” She nudges me in my side. “What do you say?” Lisa looks at me hopefully, waiting for my assessment of whether she looks good enough for me. I would never ask her to change for me. But she does it anyway. Because she wants to. She wants to look good for me.
“Rose said you like the shoes and… well…” She hesitates, wants to say so much, but knows that it’s me who decides. She’s so perfect. “I hope you like me.” I step closer to her and say what’s on my mind.
“You’re so perfect.” Unfiltered. No compliments. A statement. Or maybe not a statement, but more like… “Thank you.” Rose giggles beside me.
“You two are perfect. Perfect for each other.” Then she looks at Lisa. “I told you the shoes would do it.” And then at me. “Big sis knows best.”
“That she does,” I agree, and while Rose has her arm around my waist, I stroke the back of her neck. Purring like a cat, it seems a bit possessive, but that’s who I am, and Rose loves it. With my sister in my grasp, I look at Lisa. Obediently, she’s still kneeling by the sofa, holding onto it, white leather that glows in the light of her pink wall lamp, waiting for me to take charge. “You’re so beautiful, Lisa.”
“Thank you,” she says carefully with a fragile laugh. She’s so beautiful. I lean towards her and stroke her hips while Rose stands close beside me.
“Let me see the other side of you.” She turns to Rose with a question.
“Like... My wild side?” It’s so cute to see how she turns to her big sister for advice on how to please me. Rose giggles, her fingers covering her mouth.
“Your ass, sweetie. He wants to see your ass.” She rolls her eyes, playfully, happily. “Oh, come here…” In a pink swoosh, she flies past me, grabs Lisa by the arms, and gently pulls her to her feet. “On the couch,” she orders with feminine gentleness. Then she steps back, hands on her hips like observing a painting.

“My God,” I whisper again.
“Yup,” Rose agrees, while she examines the merchandise with a critical eye. “I think her ass is her best argument. Lisa is so shy.” Over her shoulder, she looks at us both subtly, waiting for our assessment. But she smiles. She smiles more freely than she did a moment ago. Again, Rose’s elbow meets my side. “She’s warming up tu us.”
“Hot,” Lisa whispers, pulling in her lips. But her manicured fingernails glide seductively over those perfect, soft pillows of ass cheek. Her pink panties look as if they were poured onto her body, a mass of pink wax. But for wax, it’s too delicate, too light, too feminine. She’s perfect. Lisa is perfect.
“Shit, girls,” I moan, putting my fist to my mouth, but say nothing more. I look at Lisa, this perfect woman, while Rose, the perfect woman, does the same.
“You like that?” she asks.
“Fuck yes.”
"Not you, dummy. Lisa. What do you say, little sis? You like being watched by your boyfriend."
No answer is needed.
Lisa Morau. +7 (PS -23)
"Your first viewer," she observes.
Rose Lynchwood. +2 (PS +68)
And gets points for that too. But I don't care. Life is good, and these two girls know exactly what's going to happen today. At least one of them does. But they both trust me, so it's easy to approach Lisa. Rose, knowing that sex is about to happen, moves in front of Lisa, and brother and sister wrap their arms around their little sister. Rose holds Lisa firmly, gently and securely, while I move to her back, reach up, and hold her head. As if in a trance, Lisa twists her neck.
Then we kiss.
Of course, she lets me lead. Our lips touch gently. I move her head in the way that's best for her, position myself so she can reach me, then I kiss her more intensely. Not long before Lisa moans, and as Rose holds her body, Lisa and I are swept away by the passion of love. She moanes softly, wistfully. Her eyes are closed, and she is completely in the moment.
"I want to touch you now," I say, almost in a whisper, but clearly enough for Lisa to understand. "Is that okay with you?" She nodds immediately.
“He means your butt,” Rose explains, and Lisa turns to her. I can only say how proud I am of her and Rose for forging such an intimate bond so quickly.
“Is it happening now?” the little sister asks the older one, the inexperienced girl the experienced one. Rose nods eagerly, full of anticipation.
“If you give him permission, then what we talked about will happen.” And it's not a decision that takes long.
“Please touch me, Finn,” she says lovingly. “Wherever you want. Take what you want.” I hear Rose in her words and give my sister a look that's meant to admonish her, but only encourages her.
“Gladly,” I say with a smile.
And then it begins.
“Oh my fucking God…”
No matter how many asses I’ve touched in my life, and will touch in the future, the moment my fingers land on those perfect, soft cushions where Lisa has sat on her whole life, will be burned into my memory forever. If the room and my girls weren’t so pink, I’d see red. Instead, it’s this pink haze that takes over as my hands land on Lisa’s butt.
“He touches me,” she seems to feel the need to tell Rose. “He touches my bum.”
“I know, sis,” Rose beams. Then she can’t contain herself any longer. “Come here.” Unlike me, she doesn’t ask for permission, but that’s okay. For me, but especially for Lisa. Her kiss is similar to how it is with me. As I explore Lisa's body, something I admit has been burning in the back of my mind for ages, Rose presses her lips to the territory I've already claimed.
And that's true. Lisa is incredibly sweet and tender. She trusts me willingly, and Rose is there to support her. And so, with their help and tacit permission, it's my right to own Lisa. And Rose sees it exactly the same way.
"Touch her tits, bro," Rose whispers, rubbing her nose against her sister-girlfriend's. "Touch her tits so I can feel them."
"You wait for me, huh? You're such a good girl." Rose's head, bright red cheeks, dark eyes, and dilated pupils emerge over Lisa's shoulder.
"Listen, you sick fuck," she snarls with clenched teeth. "I'm your girlfriend and obedient to you in bed and life." I like her attitude. “And I know you’re in charge.” She cringes in a fucking cute way, almost apologetically. “And I really fucking want to be an obedient little sister for my master brother and wait for him to allow me to touch my little sister.” Master brother eh? Nice Rose. Freaking nice. "But I'm so horny for my little sister! I'm dying here. So, please for the fucking love of god." And she smiles. “Can we skip the foreplay already and take care of her?” I fucking love her cocky attitude.
“What do you say, Lisa?” I ask without paying attention to Rose. “You want me to make you feel good?” She nods.
“Yes, please.” And she smiles. My hand pats her backside, feeling her skin and the soft fabric or her panties. Not only Rose burns for my touch. Lisa is so hot and her skin so soft. I dig my fingers under her panties and flip the fabric onto her tingling skin. Then I feel the slight notch of her ass while her panties lie on top of my moving hand.
“Then these have to go.” I grin and can't wait. “Come here,” I order and direct her slim body on her knees at the feet of the couch. “Ass up.” She obeys while Rose comes up next to me. I grab her neck and caress her skin while Lisa looks over her shoulder, eyes damp and face content. She knows what's coming.

“And you, little missy” I gnarl with a warm grin while her eyes fix on me. “Be a good girl and help your sister while I make her feel good.” Rose basically looks giddy like a child on Christmas. And like a child on Christmas, I make her wishes come true. “You can have her as you want” I say. "She trusts you. And besides, sisters should share these precious moments."
"Yes! Thank you bro." Without saying another word, Rose sits down on the sofa next to Lisa, bends down and caresses her sister while my eyes focus on her perfect little ass. “You hear that sis?” Rose asks, while I lower myself to those sweet, bulging pussy lips beneath the pink fabric, "I'm here for you the whole time." And then Rose kisses Lisa as I pull her panties down.
"God, Lisa," Rose moans and while I get lost in the beauty before me, she finds clear words for what we are looking at. "God himself must have formed this fucking badass body of yours. Fucking hell."
Perfection flashes between her soft, warm, smooth thighs as the pink fabric of her panties curls under my fingers. Her panties hug her pussy so tightly, it's magical. Her bottom arches slightly as my gaze slides down between her buttocks, guided by her spine, to the most perfect little pink pussy I have ever seen in my life. Perfectly aligned pussy lips, meathy and slim with soft skin and a healthy blush.
Fucking perfeckt.
“That’s good.” I hear Rose from the other side. “You’re doing fine, Lisa.” She holds the slightly trembling girl in her arms, presses her head to her chest, and strokes her hair while speaking softly to her. "Let him see what you have for him. Nobody else has seen you before. It's all for him and he loves you for what you are." Then she looks at me. “How is she?” she asks with excitement. I ignore her for a moment and bend down to Lisa. Her body stiffens as my hips gently rest on her naked buttocks, her panties around her ankles and my hand glides over her bare flesh.
“She’s perfect,” I say, and I feel Lisa exhale with relief. “I love her. And you will too.” With that, I sit up and reach under Lisa’s light body. She makes a surprised sound but is otherwise silent as I lift her lower body on the sofa, move her on her back and press her legs together. Rose is beside her, and I'm in front of her. The girl nibbles at her fingers and looks at me with a dull, placid look that suits her incredibly cuteness. Her legs are pressed together, and she relaxes as my fingers rest on her knees. Our eyes meet over her fingers as Rose strokes her shoulder.
"I've waited my whole life for this," I say with a warm smile. And Lisa understands when I break eye contact. My fingers press against her knees, gently but firmly. Then I pull her legs apart.
"Holy fuck," I moan softly and hold my breath. Her labia are puffy and closed. She's shaved, something I appreciate, even if it looks a bit clumsy and there are one or two burn marks. Lisa is completely still and feels my gaze between her legs. Slightly spread, I pull them apart a little further.
“I’m so proud of you,” Rose says to Lisa as I spread her legs further and further, opening up my girl for me. “Just let him do it. Everything is as it should be.” She giggles. “Hurry up, bro. I want some too.” Then she kisses Lisa on the cheek.
“Relax, sis,” I murmur, unable to say anything more. "If you knew how perfect she is, you’d take your time too." Then her labia parts just a tiny bit as her legs spread further for me. The angle is already wide, wide enough for my head to…
“Oh… Oh!” Lisa gasps and grabs Rose’s hand as I lower my lips between her legs.
“Take a deep breath,” Rose encourages her sister. “You’re doing right. Let him take you.”
But Lisa can’t speak. Sensitive Vagina I ensures that her body is flooded with pleasurable sensations as I begin gently and slowly. Our first contact is the tip of my tongue just below her clit. She tastes delicious, and even though she's not wet yet, the scent of Lisa and pussy fills my nostrils. She smells slightly different than Rose, but just as intoxicating. I get hooked right away.
"Ooooh! Lisa, arms flaring, grabs Rose tightly while she holds her torso. The tip of my tongue traces her clit, then descends again, and digs into her pussy. I can taste her getting wet by the second and only have to repeat the maneuver twice. Then I stick my tongue out, slide all the way down to her opening, and slide my entire surface deep into her cleft. I draw her wetness upwards and spread it over her clit as my tongue glides over it long and hard. Lisa can only moan and whimper. The most beautiful sound I know, and Rose feels exactly the same.
"Keep going, bro," she urges me on. "Right there. She likes that." With my nose close to her radiating heat, I grin.
"She tastes delicious, sis." I admire her. "Wait till you taste her." Rose giggles.
"Wait till you see her looks. She's in heaven. God, she looks so fucking cute."
"Than... Thank y... you..." Lisa quivers as I prepare her for what's coming. My big dick and her sensitive vagina fit nicely together, and with Rose, I enclose Lisa in a union that will last forever. With my thumbs, I press beside her pussy and part her labia without applying much pressure. Then I lick her clit again, thick and willing under the small hood of skin. Lisa is so easy to lick. Everything is easy to find and looks perfect. The perfect body, filled with the perfect soul. My thumbs move slightly upward as I continue to slowly slide my tongue through her opening. Then I pull back the membrane over her clit, exposing the pink button, and place my lips over it.
"Ah!" It almost sounds painful, but that's the beauty of a love that blossoms from friendship. I know Lisa intimately as I suck on her clitoris and tease it with the tip of my tongue. Gently and carefully, I lick her most sensitive spot, making her body tremble.
It must feel heavenly as I send shockwaves of pleasure through her body—little electric shocks that make her legs and lower abdomen twitch. And soon I have to use my hand to hold her thigh while Rosecan't stand it any longer either and kisses Lisa passionately. She leans over the girl and presses her lips to hers as my e-girlfriend moans into her mouth.
"Tell him how it feels, lil sis," Rose says, Lisa's head in her arms, their eyes locked on each other.
“It feels… ha… ha… good! It… ha feels like… ha… I’m in… ha… heaven…” Rose and I gaze at each other over our lover’s twitching body.
“Nice work,” she praises her sister. “You’re doing good, sis! Get nice and wet for him and it will all be even better soon.”
“She’s so wet, sis,” I say, licking my lips. There’s lust in my gaze, but also admiration. “You wouldn’t believe it. Such a perfect girl.” Rose smirks, knowing she’s finally getting what she wishes for.
“You hear that?” she whispers in Lisa’s ear, her own voice giddy and excited. “I’m so proud of you, sis.” Lisa takes Rose’s hand and tilts her head back to look at her sister. “You’re ready for him.”
“Ah…” Her slender body writhes under my touch. Her legs tremble, her stomach heaves frantically, her cheeks flush, and her lips slightly parted. While I prepare her body for what's about to happen, Rose tends to her mind and soul. She touches Lisa gently, whispers soothing words, encourages her, and is so, so proud of her. "Will it happen?" Lisa finally asks, summoning all her strength. But Rose shakes her head.
"Remember what I told you about our boyfriend?" Lisa is having a hard time concentrating, but Rose helps her along as I withdraw my tongue and simply glide my fingers over her labia.
This touch alone sends sparks of pleasure coursing through her body. The updated sensitive vagina perk works like clockwork. While Rose talks to Lisa, she keeps glancing at me. She, too, senses that I've once again adjusted and transformed her body.
"We obey him?" Rose giggles. Yes. But that's not what I meant. "Look down." Lisa obeys…
And her eyes widen. Beneath my shorts, the monster she doesn't know yet stirs. Large, powerful, stiff, and angry it must seem to her, and even under layers of fabric, Lisa is gripped by fear. She's a good girl and not used to anything like this.
"Relax, sis," Rose helps, gently stroking her hair. "I know this will be overwhelming, but we'll get through this. Look at me." She takes Lisa's face in her hands. "Good girlfriends obey."
"I want to be a good girlfriend," Lisa nods, but can't stop herself from shooting towards me. My hand reaches down, takes hers, and guides it to the fabric between my legs. Lisa gasps as her fingers close around my cock and I gently move her hand up and down. Then Rose comes very close to her face.
"And good girlfriend suck cock." Lisa breathes in… out… in… out.
“I want to suck… cock…” Rose smiles.
“We’ll do this together.” She seems so confident. She must be about to explode like me but we pull ourselves together. But fuck, she must be so horny. But her role as a caring big sister doesn’t help her lose her mind.
And it helps Lisa to have a good friend by her side. While Rose expertly, with practiced movements, tosses her hair back, Lisa, half-naked and shy, kneels nervously before me, glancing up at me while trying to brush her hair behind her ear.

“I don’t know how,” she confesses.
“Don’t worry,” I say, patting her head. Not like a dog, but like the big brother I want to be for her. “Rose will show you.” With that, Rose gets down on the floor next to her. Two incredibly beautiful girls in front of me, all our eyes are drawn down to the curve between my legs.
“Give me your hands,” she orders in that endearing tone that reveals Rose, just like me, will be by Lisa’s side forever. This isn't a quickie. It's the beginning of something really big.
But speaking of something really big…
"Your fingers go here," my sister says, hooking her finger next to Lisa's on my pants. "For a sensual fuck like the one we're about to have, it's good if you take it slow but sexy. No dawdling."
“Okay,” Lisa nods.
“Look at him.” Lisa looks between my legs. “No, you dummy,” Rose giggles. “Look into his eyes.” Lisa does so. “Now tell him how much you like to see his dick.” It takes Lisa a moment to find the words. Meanwhile, I feel twenty fingers on my skin. Four hands exert pressure and pull my pants down slightly.
“I want to see your dick, Finn.” Lisa breathes. “Please.”
“A bit more,” Rose urges. “Ask him nicely, like a good girl.”
“Can I please see your… cock, Finn? Please? I…” she nibbles on her lip. “I want to see it since I knew you.”
“Then pull them down,” I smile and point to my pants. “I've wanted you to see it since the first time I hugged you.” That's how it begins. Rose leads.
"Lower... Lower... Lower... Look close. You'll never forget your first dick..."
And then...
"Oh, my..." Lisa's eyes widen as all eyes turn to my cock. Her lips part, and her face is close to the tip.
"He's happy to see you," Rose says, holding Lisa close. Shoulder to shoulder, the two beauties kneel before me, and while Lisa seems completely enchanted, Rose looks at me. She places a hand on her sister's shoulder, silently asking if she has permission to go further. Things are clear between Rose and me, but Lisa brings a whole new perspective to our relationship.
"I didn't know... All these years and..."
"He's big," Rose smirks gently and kisses Lisa on the cheek. "I know."
"So big. Like..."
"You're probably wondering if it'll fit." Lisa tries to pull away from my cock. It takes her two tries. The first time, her gaze snaps back to my spear. But then she manages it, looks at Rose, and nods.
"And you've already had it inside you? Like... All of it?"
"The best fuck of my life," her sister confesses. "But don't worry. That comes later. First, let's give something back to our boyfriend. He made you feel good, and a good girlfriend gives what she takes." Again, a cute little nod, unsure if she even has the capacity to give that much. "Come here." Rose moves behind Lisa and presses herself against her body, takes her between her legs, and grabs her arms. "Touch him." I briefly close my eyes. I'm a little ashamed of having had sexual thoughts about Lisa before, and I tried to suppress them as best I could. Now Rose is here too, and I can't imagine how it could get any better. "Now. Touch him."
“Oh God…” Lisa and I groan together, and Rose giggles triumphantly as Lisa’s fingertips touch my skin.
“He likes it,” she whispers in her lover’s ear. “Feel him twitching. He likes you touching him.”
“He’s so… hard and… big…”
“Say it to him. Look him in the eyes and…”
“You’re so big, Finn,” Lisa whispers. “So hard and… I love it…”
“It will get better,” Rose teaches proudly. “Come here. Close your hands around him.” It would have been easy before the MCD. Now Lisa’s fingers close around my uber cock, and she needs a little less than both of her hands.
“So hot…” she murmurs as Rose places her hands around her lover’s. Slowly, she begins to masturbate me with Lisa's hands.
“Imagine what it will be like when he’s inside you,” Rose says. "When you're filled by him. It's a heavenly feeling. Like you finally truly belong to someone." Lisa doesn't reply as her fingers, guided by Rose, glide over my cock. "Give me your hand. No. Rub it with your other hand and give it to me only... right... and now..."
"Eeew..." Lisa giggles nervously as Rose spits a big wad into her hand, but Rose just smiles.
"Now you. Spit. Right." She smiles as Lisa also spits into her hand. "Now spread it on his cock. You're about to have it down your throat. With its size, you have to make it wet and slippery." She strokes the back of Lisa's head as the girl spreads the spit on me. "Someday you'll do all this on your own, but until then, I'll stay by your side. That's tight! Good girl!" Rose praises as Lisa takes both hands again and masturbates me. This time a little faster. Not only can I barely stand it anymore, but it seems Rose has taken a liking to the big sis personality she's crafted. "You like that big bro?" she teases as she places her hands on Lisa's breasts. "Watching your two hot sisters stroking your big fat cock? Mmmmmhhhhah…" She moans sluttily as her breasts press against Lisa's back. While one girl masturbates, the other talks. Their pink tops rub against each other, Lisa too devoted to pleasing me, but Rose notices that I've reactivated her breast perk and blows me a kiss.
“Such a cucky attitude,” I say back and take a deep breath. “I think my two lovely sisters work well together.” With Rose’s hand on the back of Lisa’s head, I place mine on her hair. “Such a good sister,” I say to her. “And such a teasing brat.”
“You know me,” Rose shrugs. “I need constant love and discipline to be your obedient little fuckdoll sister.” Lisa turns her head and looks at Rose questioningly.
“Should I…” Then she looks at me. “I can be a fuckdoll too… uh… daddy?” I look at Rose… then we both burst out laughing, making Lisa blush.
“Not bad,” Rose says, snickering and kissing Lisa again. “But you’re better than me, honey. You don’t need discipline.”
“Right. You just need to be yourself,” I say. Lisa smiles and looks back at my cock. Now grown to its glorious size, Lisa has to move her arms to slide down my entire length. "You too," I say to Rose. "You both just have to be the way you want to be." Rose winks at me and then gently presses Lisa's head against my cock.
"And this monster needs more spit, Lisa." It doesn't take long. The situation is hot and steamy, and Lisa bends down, purses her lips, and spreads a thick film of clear spit on my cock. "You see that?" She points at the tip of my cock.
"Is that... sperm?" Lisa asks bewildered. "I always thought..."
"That's precum" Rose teaches with a smile. Than I shiver when her fingers brush under my tip, collecting a big ooze of precum. "Wanna taste it? It means you don't a great job." Lisa nods and opens her mouth. With Rose's Fingersbetween her lips she giggles.
"He twitched" she laughs while Rose licks her fingers too.
"Because he loves your touch" the big sister beams." Keep going and we will show you something even better."
For a few minutes, Rose teaches Lisa about thick stroking. Then it's finally time.
"You want to suck him now?" Rose asks. "Taste his dick for the first time?"
"Yes," Lisa answers immediately and looks up at me. "Finn? Can I suck your cock? Was I good enough to have your cock in my mouth? Please? I want it so bad."
"She's perfeckt," Rose smiles, then pats Lisa on the head. "What do you say, lil sis? Want to suck your first big brother cock?"
I feel so small beneath him. Not just his size. It's everything about him. His experience, his strength, his mind, and the way he sees me. Now and before. So helpless. That's how I always was. I'm at his mercy, and if he wants to do something to me, all I can do is what he tells me and hope I do it right and please him. This is new.
And I love this feeling.
Finn has always been there for me, whether I was crying or happy. He was there, holding me and strengthening me. Sometimes I wondered what he saw in me, even after we both decided not to take things any further. I had no answer. Now I do. Because Finn didn't just take things further. He grabbed me, lifted me up, and carried me on his shoulders as if I belonged to him.
And I do. He owns me. I'm his alone.
With the soft carpet against my bare knees, I crouch at his feet, holding him in my fingers. Big, heavy, and powerful, just like him, I hold his… cock… in my fingers and finally feel like I've arrived. This is where I want to be.
Other girls, girls who are strong, girls like Rose, might have a problem with this. Okay, Rose seems overjoyed to be kneeling beside me, showing me how to give Finn a proper blowjob. But not me. I don't want to know any other place than where he wants me. I'm content to be his new little sister. And I have Rose. My big sister, who shows me everything I need to know.
It's so wonderful. Everything is so perfect. I'm never alone anymore. I have Finn. And I have Rose. I'm so... fucking happy.
I don't care if this seems weak to others. I don't feel that way. I feel strong by crouching at his feet and doing what he tells me. And Rose. I look at her and know I really want to suck my big brother's yummy cuck.
So I nod.
"Can you help me, please?"
And of course, Rose helps me. She positions herself between me and Finn, one hand on the back of my head, the other on his but.
"Open up, sis," she says. "Open up as wide as you can." I obey and open my mouth as wide as if I were about to eat a melon. My tongue sticks out, pink and twitching. I've had so many tastes in my life. And now a new one is about to be added.
Somehow, I suspect this will be my favorite.
"We will be gentle," Finn assures me.
"Nobody is perfect on their first try", Rose adds. Then Finn steps closer.
"I love you, Lisa."
And then he touches me.
I feel him on the tip of my tongue. His penis… His cock slides past the tip of my tongue, heavy and powerful. I tell myself to stay calm and let him do his thing, but I don't need to worry. My tongue instinctively slides under his penis, offering him a perfect path to penetrate deeper inside my body.
“That’s it, sis!” Rose is pleased. “That’s the tip. Now relax. And go… deeper…” She gently holds my head as Finn pushes forward. My eyes widen as more and more of his cock slides into my mouth. I feel him flatten my tongue and squeeze out some saliva at the edges. “That’s right. Don’t worry. Your mouth is making him nice and wet and ready.” Then Finn’s cock hits the back of my throat but he is well lubed and glides trough my open hole like he belongs there. But then I cough and gag, and he immediately pulls back a little. But I don’t want to give up. He’s such a good boyfriend, and I love him so much. I want this. “Wow,” Rose giggles as I put my hands on Finn’s legs. I don’t dare pull him. He’s my boyfriend. He decides. But I want to show him he can go further. “Looks like our little sister wants you to keep going.”
"She looks so sweet the way she's looking at me," Finn breathes and smiles at me. Then he's advancing inside me again. This time I'm a little more careful. I have no idea what I'm doing and just hope my tongue is enough for him. "Oh fucking... god..." He roars as I feel him in my throat. It was the first three inches that scared me. Now I suddenly realize I can't breathe as his cock stretches my throat.
He's so big, huge. He takes everything, widening me, stretching me, conquering me. He's inside me, deeper and deeper. It feels rough and tight, filled up as if I've bitten off more than I can chew. And I have. I hear Rose say something, but it's like a fog. I'm not aware of anything around me except Finn and how he's making me his girl. I don't even feel pride, I don't notice my vision narrowing, and I forget how Rose's supporting hands feel on my back. It's just me in a seemingly endles, beautiful void, only me and his cock digging down my body. And I'm serving him as he guides me toward a point where I can't go any further. A gag but pull him deeper. my hands lay on his back and push and my eyes lose focus, only sensing his face while my vision grows dark. I can see only him, watching me with focus, watching over my while I let go and lose myself in his presence. He is deep in my throat, my body. He owns me, claims me and makes me his while I lose consciousness.
But I'm not afraid. I can't breathe, but I look up at him, my lips quivering around his massive rod in my body. He's the one putting his cock inside me, and I trust him. Nothing will happen to me. And as I finish that thought, he pulls out of me.
In a second, live returns to me. A new, better life. His cock changed me and I'm, for the first time in a long time, can be proud of myself.
Now I have to cough as I feel every inch of him in my throat and on my tongue retread. He pulls out of me, and I fall to the floor. Rose is there immediately, holding me as I cough and gasp for air.
"Oh, holy mother," Rose laughs. "Fucking hell, girl!" I sit up on wobbly arms and feel the carpet against my folded legs again. My vagina is gushing and my legs feel like pudding. I have tears in my eyes, my nose is running a little, and my throat feels like I've been singing too loudly for too long. But Rose is overjoyed. "You're a fucking natural!"
"I'm sorry..." I gasp, only then realizing there's nothing I need to apologize for. Breathing heavily, I look back and forth between my older siblings. Finn smiles proudly, Rose's cheeks are bright red.
"Look at him," she says, pointing towards his penis. Glistening salvia coats almost its entire length. Then I look at Finn. He's breathing heavily too.
"Was I good?"
"Good?" He goes down to me, kneels in front of me, and takes my arms. "You were incredibly, sweetheart. I love you so much." Rose sits beside me, and I become aware of the space around us again. My voice is a little muffled between the two of them, but I don't care. I belong to Finn. I'm his. Forever. And Rose is there too. I have no right to speak. The two of them are leading me. But I do because I trust them and they let me speak.
"Can I try again?"
"Shit, that's hot," I say as I stroke Lisa's head and watch admiringly as the sweet girl impales herself on his cock. "Not a good girl anymore," I grin. "More a nasty slut."
"Come on," Finn grins. "She's more like a cute little oh fuck..." A thick strand of saliva drips heavily onto the floor as Lisa's nose presses against Finn's stomach. On her fucking second try! "God, she's a fucking natural." Together, we watch Lisa slowly pull away from him. He's so big, I can clearly see the bulge in her throat. Then she takes a deep breath and wipes her mouth with her hand.
“Sorry,” she murmurs, looking at the mucus between her fingers. “That’s nasty.” I shake my head and press my cheek against hers.
“Not nasty,” I assure her. “Cute. Such a cute little face."
“It’s really cute, Lisa.” Finn agrees. While we girls kneel on the floor, he stands before us like a giant. “You have such a cute face.”
“And should I tell you why girls have such cute faces?” I ask Lisa.
It's really hard for me. I have no idea how Finn can stand it. His cock is throbbing and twitching, but I understand why he's fighting this. If I were so reserved, he would have grabbed me by the hair long ago, thrown me onto the bed, spread my legs, and fucked me until my brains were running out of my ears.
God, Rose, get a grip. Don't ruin this for them...
But it's really hard. Lisa is so fucking cute, and Finn has made my breasts so fucking sensitive, and his cock is so fucking yummy, and... No. I'm going to be the sister Lisa deserves. So I try to ignore the wild throbbing of my labia and look into Lisa's sweet, deep eyes.
"To get messy for our boyfriend."
With that, I position myself beneath Finn, who looks at me almost gratefully. Ha, I think, as I lower my ass to the floor and pull myself under Finn by his legs. I'm not the only one driven crazy with desire. But Lisa isn't ready yet, and together we'll make sure she has the night of her life.
First, I pull her closer to me, which means to his cock. She takes another deep breath, sticks out her tongue, and stuffs her mouth with Big Brother's dick. A little saliva drips from the twitching tip of her tongue as Finn groans loudly and gently places his hands on her head. With me beneath him, I can see how Lisa struggles to swallow him, but my focus is elsewhere.
Would Lisa be disappointed if I...? No, I decide. Lisa knows how I feel. With that, I lean forward, stick out my tongue as well, and lick Finn's big, powerful balls.
"Holy shit... yes... fucking nice girls... such fucking good girls..."
His voice is rough and steamy, and I can see how tense his legs are. But Lisa is the one who has to fight while I have it easy. Finn tries to control himself, Lisatries to swallow him completely again. I, on the other hand, can lose myself in the taste of his balls.
What's wrong with you, Rose? Are you really so cuck-hungry that you lick his balls like a horny slut? But the question answers itself. Lisa is doing it too. And together, we worship him. God, we worship him like his devoted slaves. Never in my life would I have thought I'd love a boy like this. Cocksucking? Of course. Ball licking? Okay. But with him, it's different.
Together with Lisa, I crouch between his legs, my head thrown back like a she-wolf howling at the moon, my tongue sticking out as if I were dying of thirst, and my hands pressed into the carpet like a good little puppy. So I lick his balls, feel his body heating ob, hear Lisa gag on his dick and hold on to his legs for dear life while I perform like a slut for him.
And I feel so feminine.
He's making me a woman, just like he'll make Lisa a woman. And I'm even the first! Together with my little sister beneath him, one of his mighty balls on my tongue, the other in my little hand, my brother is making me a woman for eternity.
Now I know how Jasmine must feel. I belong to him. To him alone. The things I would do for him, I wouldn't do for anyone else in this world. To him, I'm the good little sister and the filthy whore from the streets.
"Mmmmah..." I purse my lips and suck on his balls like one of those fish Finn once told me about. The ones who attach themselves to bigger fish or something. "I kiss and lick and nuzzle my nose between his legs, worshiping alongside my sister. And together with my sister, I merge into something entirely new, something entirely my own. A unity of two girls he's making into women. Two women who share a common thought.
I love him so much.
The moment the tip of my nose presses against his stomach is a triumph. I can do it again and again. I suck his cock like a pro! Yes! Then I feel his hands on my head as they pull me back so I can breathe. He takes such good care of me.
I love him so much.
I gag again, but the second time it's not quite as bad. This time, though, the heavy, viscous saliva that Finn squeezes from my mouth drips onto Rose's face. As I feel air rushing into my lungs, I feel Rose's hands on the soft, sweaty fabric over my breasts. They move clumsily, and I know she's swimming in the same pink mist as I am. She courches in front of me and together we take care of my boyfriend.
No. Our boyfriend. We both belong to him.
And that makes me happy. I watch Rose, such a strong woman in such a funny position. She is lost in his testicles, slobering on them and gulping down her saliva, then sucking his big balls into her mouth and playing with her tongue. I hope she can show me how to do it. I have so much to learn and Rose has so much to show me. Maybe we can do it together but I'm a little nervous about hurting my boyfriend. So I watch while Rose licks his balls and Finn pats me on my head, couching side by side under our boyfriend while I suckle on his cockhead and taste this lovely pre cum Rose talked about.
Then his glans leaves my mouth and I quickly lean forward, kiss his tip, and then fall back onto the carpet, looking at him for appoval.
"Wow... that was... wow..." He wipes his forehead and looks at me lovingly. "I'm proud of you." Rose, meanwhile, is still sucking on his balls, and a glance at her chest reveals that her nipples are just as erect as mine, coated in a thin layer of saliva. I feel so connected to her in this moment. I used to think, after that one porn I halfheartedly watched, that a blowjob was humiliating and painful. Okay, I did feel some pain, I can admit that. But I feel so warm and enclosed, so safe and secure like never before. Finn is here. He's proud. Rose is here. She's being helpful.
And her face is even more ravaged than mine. Together we look at each other, and I'm the one holding her hands as we size each other up. I hope my makeup isn't too smudged, and I sniff hard so I can breathe through my nose. Rose, meanwhile, licks her lip, smudging her lipstick a little. We are two sisters who bear the mark of submission.
I'm not alone anymore, I know. But there's something else.
Rose? It's like we can understand each other. Like we have a bond without words. Finn strokes my head, but I look at our sister. I'm so horny.
"Finn?" Rose looks up at him. "You've got two horny little girls at your feet, yes?" He nods and rubs his cock with his hand. "Can we, like, fuck now? Pretty please?"
My sister understands me without words. Gratefully, I look at her as Finn reaches out his hand and pulls her to her feet. Then the two of them help me up, and as Rose and I curl up against his sides, half-naked, the taste of his cock in our mouths, I couldn't be happier to lose my maidenhood to this man and this woman.
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I couldn't be happier to lose my maidenhood to this man and this woman.
Yeah, that sums up this chapter, I think. Actually, I just wanted to write a pre-fuck chapter, some blowjob action and ball worship for a dear reader/livesaver of mine. But it turned into more than that. I got a little lost trying to describe what Rose and Lisa feel when they're with Finn. I find it very fascinating to try and not just write from Finn's point of view, and Lisa's and Rose's perspectives, in my opinion, really gave the chapter depth. And, to be honest, I really dig the Idea that Lisa too thinks she's in a relationship with the both of them, even if she loves "just" Finn.
The next chapter will finally include sex, and the fact that all three are deadly horny is my own reminder not to wait too long.
Well, the blackout resulted in a little over 6700 words. Hopefully, that makes the wait a bit more bearable.
Okay. Roadmap and a poll for the next chapters.
I'm working hard to create a big, overarching story for the second act, and I have some great ideas for it.
After the poll, the next focus will be on Bella (with Heather), Sonya, Candice, and Rania (with Lakota and others. Uh, secrets...). The order isn't quite finalized yet, but I'll try to follow the poll results unless the plot dictates the order.
And I have good news for the Lynchwood family fans. After we've properly taken care of the "new" girls, Rose will play a central role in the second act. Similarly, Tammy, Michelle, and Jasmine will experience important events and advance the story. So don't worry that the Lynchwood family will be neglected. In the meantime, I'm diligently writing chapters for my Ko-fi account and will let you know as soon as I publish them there. I just want to have a good number of chapters so I can post regularly. These chapters will initially focus on the Lynchwood women.
For now, if you want, tell me if you like my approach towards Lisa and womanly mindsets. It's okay if we focus more on fucking hot chicks with big dicks. I post once a week and waiting for Lisa's quite moans of pleasure while you fuck this incredible girl is hard, even for me, especially while I talk about feelings and such. ;) But hey, I wanted to give her more time and space to prepare for your uber cock. Let me hear what you think of it.
And let me hear if you want more precise outlines for the plot ideas I have. It's a bit complicated, especially when the plot isn't as hardened as it is when writing the chapter. But I can always give you an outline of what I want to do with the characters next. What do you want? More details for the future so that you can influence the decisions or better be left in the dark so that the light at the end ist just a bit brighter?
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