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Chapter 79
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FINN 0815
What's next?
Poll for the next chapter. Lisa and how to handle the cum load.
Hey folks. I hope you enjoyed the first half of Lisa's first time. I really wanted to portray it gently, but I have to admit I got a little lost in the world I created. Normally, my rule is to write about sex from Finn's point of view. You're the reader, and you're supposed to experience girls coming through your penis. The reason this story is written in the first person, from "my" point of view, is—and this is no lie—that I want to incorporate my own hobbies, perspectives, and thoughts into the story. Also, I'm terrible with names, and Finn was the first name that came to mind, not even considering my own username. But here in Germany, there are several Finn, all soy-drinking IT losers in Berlin and other major cities, and not one of them is a well-intentioned, blue-collar worker, down on luck, like I always imagine our Finn to be. So, that's why I made the name changeable. :) But I still enjoy writing from "my" perspective. Just wait and see how the date at One World Trade Center goes... I also think that's why it's so easy for me to write this story for you from my point of view. It seems to be my perfect wave, if you can say that.
But with Lisa/Alice Delish, I also realized how tempting it can be to imagine that "I" am the one licking her, and not you. I sincerely hope that this led to an, um, intense experience when you're in my place between Lisa's legs. But I still want to be careful that while I write about the things I'd like to do with Lisa, it's you who's doing them. That's how Finn should act, and that's what Finn 0815 wants too. "My" story from "my" point of view for the readers who are very close to me.
So, what I'm trying to say is that a comment in the last chapter gave me the solution I need to imagine that "I" am the one giving Lisa a climax she'll never forget. What can I say? Alice Delish is in my top 10 all-time favorite girls.
But now you can decide how the next chapter ends.
That is, what happens to the cum Finn gives Lisa.
Here's a poll with some quick ideas I came up with. Of course, I'll add to the list with ideas readers suggest.
That way, you're in control, should I get lost in this lovely creature I created for you again.
Oh, and if you have a preferred sex position, please let me know. I don't know if I can incorporate it with Lisa and Rose, but things can change.
And if this poll is well-received, then I can easily imagine letting the users decide such things as how sex will proceed more often.
Okay. How should Lisa (and Rose) handle Finn's cum?
Clean. Deep in her throat. Swallow by accident. Rose is okay with it. Get's the second load from Finn.
Messy. Deep in her throat. Chokes and spits it in her hands. Embarassed. Rose comes to the rescue, shares with Lisa and laps it from their hands.
Messy. Deep in her throat. Chokes and spits it on the ground. Embarassed. Rose comes to the rescue. Rose shows Lisa how to lap it up like a good girl.
Messy. In her mouth. Under Rose's guidance. Both girls kiss and share the load in a nice and long cum swap. Both swallow.
Clean. Deep in Lisa's pussy. No leaking. Nice and simple like boyfriend and girlfriend.
Clean. In Lisa's pussy. Too much cum. It leaks out. Rose to the rescue and with Finn's approval Rose cleans Lisa up in the shower while swallowing some of the cum.
Messy. In Lisa's pussy. Too much cum. It leaks out. Rose to the rescue and Lisa's first girl-to-mouth orgasm through Rose while she licks her clean.
Messy. In Lisa's pussy. Too much cum. It leaks out. Rose and Lisa become scissor sisters by letting their crotches become messy with his cum.
Okay, those are eight ideas, and I'm sure I'll come up with more myself. What do you think?
Note: Lisa will continue to be treated as shy and loving. If things get messy, Rose will take responsibility, and Lisa will find it hot (either discreetly or openly). Finn will too, of course.
What do you want?
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