The System

*Warnings: amateur writer, watched Star Wars movies like one time each, will be a lot of changes and edits if people point anything out.

*Writers message- So I’m the one who created this story but I made it hoping others would also add to it. This is my first story and any thing else I’ve written were only assignments from school so I apologize for grammar and pissing you off. This is pretty much all I had to say so I hope this isn’t to bad( for all of us.)

Planet Wolgan- Home of the Lost

I open my eyes and see a woman with skin that is a light shade of red, black hair, and red eyes. Next to her is a man that has tanned skin, white hair and red eyes. They both look young and attractive.

“Hi baby” The woman exclaims in a high pitched voice.

“ Hey little buddy we’re your parents” the man says

They both sound and feel calming I’ve heard their voices for months but was never able to see them well. They look at me with loving eyes and I can’t help but feel happy. The woman calls herself Jina and the man Dal. I don’t pay much attention to anything else and do what I’d done for the last two months to let them know I’m hungry. I let out a small cry to ask for food and mother takes me to the seat we have outside for when I eat. I listen to all of the different sounds and words that the passing people say while I eat they are talking about a female Jedi called Alema. The people talking about it walk into an alley and seem panicked. A woman with tails on her head walks in front of the alley and then looks back. I take a look at her face and she is looking at me. she smiles and turns back into the alley. I continue to look at her wondering what that was about. Just as the woman leaves my sight mother takes me back into the house. We stay in the living room to play for the rest of the day and go to sleep.

Two months later

Two months later and Everything’s been the same wake up eat play listen to people in the street. My parents look tired so I try to be a good boy but I’m really starting to get annoyed four months and the most fun I’ve had is eating and listening to people. I’ve learned that the place where I live is Called Wolgon a place where all the people lost around our solar system, for some unknown reason, end up on and it’s know to be a planet that is beautiful but dangerous. There are many big city’s on this planet but next to every city there is some sort of danger like our city sago is built next to a Forrest where many bad people and creatures live. I luckily live towards the center of the city where there is nothing but bars and buildings. Sago is known for being the Home of the lost because all the lost decided to settle here for the opportunity’s like the crystal mining and price less pelts from the dangerous creatures. The

Father is a hunter who settled here after meeting mom who settled here after her ship was attacked by pirates. Mom is the owner of one of the most famous bars in the city as well as a daughter of one of the most rich men in the city. The City is made up of many different races the most common are Human, Twi Lek, and some Togruta here and there my family and I are flamnir. Our race comes from far far away and are not common we have red eyes and the rest of us are varied we can be almost any color including our hair. We have two small horns and our eyes glow but other than that we look like the humans.

*End of chapter message- So that was my first chapter ever written I thought it was ok but it’s still kind of a draft so if any one reads this feel free to comment about anything you don’t like or something I can fix including names( I have a terrible naming sense so please help. Next chapter I’ll write about the Main character and continue with the story part instead of just spitting info.