Sue Storm - Concubine of the Night
Susan Storm falls for the dark romance of Count Dracula
Chapter 1
by
PirateStaRR55
The night sky was as dark red as an old bruise and was constantly punctuated by silent, snow-white lightning. A powerful storm of wind blew through the streets of New York.
With a worried expression, Susan "Sue" Storm Richards, the Invisible One of the Fantastic Four, looked first out the window, then at Reed's computer screen.
For several days, numerous people had been disappearing in the city, and the media was reporting on strange creatures attacking people at night. However, the origin of these beings was neither mutations nor extraterrestrial, otherwise Reed's security nets would have sounded the alarm.
That left only magic, and Sue had no knowledge of that at all. She would have liked to ask her husband for advice, but the team was currently in the Negative Zone investigating anomalies. Scarlett Witch of the Avengers hadn't been able to contact Sue yet either, as the world's heroes were mediating a conflict between the Kree and the Skrulls.
However, it wasn't just people without superpowers who were affected; superheroes like Luke Cage and Daredevil were also among the missing.
Then Sue finally thought of someone who could help her. Doctor Stephen Strange, the master of magic. His sanctum sanctorum at 177a Bleecker Street was not far from Central Park.
Sue activated the Baxter Building's defenses to ensure her children, Franklin and Valeria, were safe and took her Fantastic Car to the park. The Invisible Woman whizzed through the red, stormy night in her flying vehicle. The streets below her weren't empty, but there were far fewer people and cars on the road than usual in the metropolis. Sue constantly checked the vehicle's displays. The device constantly emitted contradictory signals and data. According to the scan, New York was full of unknown, powerful ideas, yet nothing specific could be determined. Just a few more minutes of flight and she would have reached the Doctor...
"Oh no," was all she could say as Sue saw the large, dark cloud of smoke in the distance.
She landed the FantasticCar in front of the burning ruins of what had once been the Sanctum Sanctorum. All the books and magical artifacts were lost in the flames. A scream tore Sue from her horrified thoughts, and she saw a young woman being dragged into Central Park by something. Whatever had happened here could wait, and Doctor Strange could take care of himself.
Sue hurried into the park. She didn't run, though; instead, she had created an invisible board beneath her feet, sending her hurtling through the air, but she had already lost sight of this naked creature and the woman. Sue continued flying, and suddenly the board shattered beneath her like glass.
She crashed to the ground and rolled across the grass. When she finally caught herself and tried to stand up, Sue saw that she was surrounded by monsters, but they weren't indescribable, ugly creatures, but people. Or they had once been people, because their faces were grotesque, with glowing red eyes and fangs. They were all almost naked and wandered around in rags and tatters. They crouched a long way from the invisible woman, snarling and hissing.
The creatures didn't approach Sue because they didn't want to attack, but because they weren't allowed to. Something was holding them back. Or someone. Then Sue saw them. The creatures made way for him without comment, and the tall man entered the circle. He was handsome, Sue had to admit, with long, straight black hair, a well-toned body, and just as naked as the others.
Oh, lala, Sue thought, looking at his large, magnificent manhood, but her eyes narrowed when she saw his only piece of clothing. A red cloak. Doctor Stephen Strange's cloak. His loyal friend and companion.
"I don't know who or what you are, but the cloak belongs to a friend, and if you've done anything to him, you'll pay for it,"
Sue said resolutely, standing up from the ground. The man said nothing.
"One of the silent ones, eh?"
Still no answer or reaction from the sinister man. Sue was a little worried, because if this man had defeated Doctor Strange, he was very powerful and dangerous. One of the creatures wanted to rush forward and attack Sue, but the man just gently raised his hand, and it stopped immediately.
"Their leader?" Sue asked.
Again, no answer.
"Their king?" she chuckled uncertainly, for the woman had experience with handsome kings.
The man looked Sue over, and it was obvious that he liked what he saw. He actually let himself be carried away by a slight, devilish grin, and Sue rolled her eyes. The tall man raised his hand with long nails and slashed at the skin on his chest. Dark red lines of blood oozed from the wound.
"Okay..." Sue said, forming an invisible shield around herself.
She didn't know who this man was or what he could do, but she'd defeated much bigger opponents before, and...
Her shield shattered, like her board before, as if by magic, and Sue was too surprised and shocked to comprehend what had just happened when the man rushed toward her with the speed of a blink of an eye and sank his fangs into her neck.
He bit the woman's neck, and she felt him lick up the blood with his tongue and drink it. Sue gagged at the sounds and the feel of his lips on her skin, but her ordeal wasn't over yet. He tore himself away from her burning neck and pressed her mouth against his wound, forcing Susan to drink his blood. It was disgusting, tasted cold and dead, and he actually let out a little moan as she drank.
The blood burned and tingled in her throat, and even as she swallowed, Sue felt the change in her body. Every vein turned into a boiling conduit, her heart beat slower and slower, and at the same time, she felt a tingling between her legs.
The Night's King released Sue from the involuntary bloody kiss, took a step back, and watched with satisfaction as the woman writhed on the floor, ****. In doing so, she ripped her blue Fantastic Four uniform and exposed almost her entire body.
"W... What do you have with me..." Sue couldn't describe what was changing, but all her thoughts, her very self, were pushed behind a dark veil, and it was as if she was no longer master of her body and was observing everything through a black fog.
Added to that was this terrible, indescribable thirst.
The thirst for human blood...
God, Sue could no longer think clearly and was controlled by this dark power.
She wanted to escape, but she couldn't move.
She wanted to close her eyes, but the sound wouldn't sink.
She wanted to scream, but her mouth wouldn't open.
Only when this unknown man ripped open his penis with his claws, blood gushing out, and summoned her to him with a dismissive gesture did Sue hiss and open her mouth and crawl toward him on all fours. Her red eyes were focused only on his bleeding, magnificent cock, which she then sucked so greedily and lustfully, as if her life depended on it.
In her mind, Sue screamed, but her mouth and body craved his blood and his body. Powerfully and roughly, he ran his fingers through her hair, then grabbed her and roughly pulled the woman up.
He **** Sue to look into his pupil-less, red eyes.
The man didn't say a single word the entire time, and he didn't need to. Every tiny movement, every slightest nuance in his face, his entire demeanor left no doubt that he was now Susan Storm's master, and there was nothing she could do about it. Sue's body vibrated with excitement and desire. Especially when he gently but firmly ran his fingers up her body from her belly button, circling her hard nipples and gently stroking her neck where he had bitten her. Sue shuddered excitedly at his touch and even smiled.
She knew what was about to happen and could hardly wait...
In his hiding place, a magnificent crypt in a cemetery, Susan Storm surrendered to her new master...
...behind the dark veil, Sue could do nothing but enjoy. This sensation shocked the woman, but everything was dominated by his relentless, dominant thrusts. Just as his blood had burned in her veins before, his cock felt just as pleasurable and fantastic in her body.
He was not a tender lover. He wasn't a lover in the true sense of the word. Nothing romantic or affectionate. He only cared about his own pleasure, and Sue wanted to serve him. He knew Susan Storm because he could read her mind, as if it were his own and he didn't care that she was a married superhero and mother.
He wanted to possess the woman because he liked her.
He wanted to possess the woman because he could.
He wanted to make the woman his equal, to be her master. Forever.
And Susan Sue Storm became Dracula's bride.
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Updated on Aug 10, 2025
Created on Aug 10, 2025
by PirateStaRR55
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