Chapters tagged queen

Plate Armor → Black Leather Dress by Ai-R

Chapter 17

I suppose it could use some clarity - and the armor's kind of in the way of that at the moment so... Let's exchange 'Plate Armor' for '**Black Leather Dress**.' The corridor broadens and is lit a rich warm golden hue as candles, lamps, and chandeliers dot themselves all over the...

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Plate Armor → Deerskin Dress by Ai-R

Chapter 15

I think for an Orc she looks a little too... I don't know, classical? So let's replace the 'Plate Armor' with a '_**Deerskin Dress**_' to better reflect the way Orcs are usually depicted. A massive window appears behind Arma and makes it clear we're near the start of a t-interse...

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Add Keyphrase: Big Fangs by Ai-R

Chapter 16

The last changed worked pretty well, but I still think there's room for improvement to fit the theme better. What's something that fits Orcs more? Axes, muscles, and big fangs... I think I'll start with the fangs - That ought to do something about her weirdly neutral face right?...

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Add Keyphrase: Muscle Body by Ai-R

Chapter 16

When I think of an Orc, I typically expect them to be kind of physically imposing and - while Arma is pretty thick as an Orc, she's not quite as toned as I expected. Let's fix that by adding the phrase '_**Muscle Body**_' to the mix. The window opens up into the world outside an...

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Innocent Expression → Fascinated Expression by Ai-R

Chapter 16

Let's try replacing the 'Innocent Expression' with something a little more interesting, but still keep the mood so... I try '_**Fascinated Expression.**_' The angle shifts a bit as Arma rotates in place, her right-- er, left hand falling from her knee out of view as she does. He...

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Kneeling Forward on One Knee → Lying on her Side by Ai-R

Chapter 17

Maybe if I adjust her posture a bit? Let's replace 'Kneeling Forward on One Knee' with 'Lying on her Side' and see what happens... Arma slides forward and above me as she moves from the floor of the corridor - er, the same one as me - up onto the ledge of some kind of window or...

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Pink Hair → Dark-Green Hair by Ai-R

Chapter 18

For lack of ideas, I decide to recolor her hair to be more orc-ish, I guess, and replace 'pink' with '**dark-green**.' Arma's lifted up and away from me to the left as she leans her side into the passage, and my heart drops as I feel myself sink, and the ground below me shift fr...

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Tiara → Jeweled Battle Axe by Ai-R

Chapter 16

Next, the 'tiara' is fitting for a Princess, but this is a Queen, and also an orc... So I replace it with something more fitting for an orc, such as a '_**Jeweled Battle Axe**._' The window shifts to one side and fades into the distance as the corridor warps again. Meanwhile, Ar...

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