Mass Effect: Everything's fine

This is the first story that I made almost a few years ago that I update on and off again so any kind of constructive feedback is appreciated. It's an unaware/oblivious kind of hypno story, so for the most part the characters aren't aware that their behavior is strange and that how they look has always been lewd, etc... feel free to write your own stuff if any of you like

No NTR/cuckolding (except if I ok the idea) or scat