Gwen Fights Surprising Strong Thugs V2

NOTE: ALL CHARACTERS IN THIS STORY ARE ABOVE THE AGE OF 18

One of my first stories on here was "Gwen Fights Surprising Strong Thugs" (https://chyoa.com/story/Gwen-Fights-Surprising-Strong-Thugs.50191) and the writing in that story wasn't the best and it wasn't structured the best but i feel like the idea for the story is good and sense i have improved sense then im doing i guess you could call it a "Remastered" version of the story that will be structured and written better and will be longer then the original version of the story.

Gwen Stacy is web swinging home in her Spider-Woman suit after a long day. Right when she was almost home she hears screaming coming from the ground. Looking down at the floor Gwen notices a group of Thugs. "Cant i just go one day without crime taking place?" Gwen thinks to herself. The Thugs notice Spider-Woman webbing through the sky and immanently try to get her intention. "Wired they normally dont try to get my intention" Gwen thinks to herself as she goes to the crime sight.

As soon as Gwen lands the Leader of the Thugs goes to shoot Gwen but she dodges the bullets. "When will you guys learn that you can't shoot Spider-Woman" Gwen says. A large crowd of people form to watch the battle between Spider-Woman and the Thugs take place. Gwen goes straight towards the leader of the Thugs wanting to get this over with and get home as soon as possible